#Can someone review this and suggest changes as i do not have any work experience

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spice belfry
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All personal opinions:

  • Skills at the bottom. Nobody cares about that list if they don't see it used in a project/experience anyways. You can move education up because you're a new grad.
  • I would be apprehensive about putting an MLM project on the resume - aren't those typically understood as scams?
  • Way too much text. Bullet points are supposed to be short and get to the point. I'm not reading a bullet point that spans 3 lines long.
  • May be a point of contention but I personally dislike that all of your projects are basically using the same stack. Cool, you have MERN, then MERN, then...MERN again. You told me you know MERN - is that all you really know? Do you test your code? Have you ever touched a backend that uses SQL?
  • No numbers. Okay, you did a thing. Was it important? How much did you improve performance by (time it)? This IMO is a lot more important for businesses because they care about you as far as you can (hopefully) make them money.

The market is definitely not making things better, but your projects sound like you basically did the same thing 4 times and are trying to package it as 4 meaningful learning opportunities. Oh, and assuming that you're looking for roles in the US, lack of citizenship if you're international is probably fucking you over too.

spice belfry
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i only have those 3 projects so gota work around that

atomic verge
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no its worse

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at least formatting wise