Looking for advice on my resume, Entry Level | CS Career Hub | Page 1

rose anchor Oct 10, 2022, 9:16 AM

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Hello everyone; I'm looking for advice on my current resume. I have had no luck receiving responses other than rejection letters, and I'm looking to improve. I have no employment in tech besides research as a student at a University and in assisting with a program in Web Development. All responses are appreciated!

valid sinew Oct 10, 2022, 2:42 PM

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No need summary

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I think the thing you write for the education like those sentences are not needed

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If you took any cs courses mention those

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Your bullet points are inconsistent

flat wadi Oct 10, 2022, 2:45 PM

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You did research but didn’t say what it was 💀

valid sinew Oct 10, 2022, 2:45 PM

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They should be all in past tense

flat wadi Oct 10, 2022, 2:46 PM

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Your sentences for education are lackluster

valid sinew Oct 10, 2022, 2:48 PM

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I’m not sure if you need to mention you’re familiar with slack and zoom

flat wadi Oct 10, 2022, 2:49 PM

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Don’t say proficient in x, u

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Say “Languages:”, and list thrm

zealous river Oct 10, 2022, 3:13 PM

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make the summary relevant to the position otherwise remove it

just name the skills, get rid of these qualifiers (proficient/interested in) go put these in linkedin not your resume

education: list your relevant classes, describing your experience isn't detailed and is just fluff again put it on linkedin if you want to get descriptive not here

techcompany

go in more detail, what did the projects even do helping people along the way isn't a good selling point

anontwo

point 1: what did you make out of these skills you used?
point 2: couldnt you combine this with the above point?

projects

stock watchlist

point 1: this is just a bragging point why is this noted
point 2: reorient this to say you used Svelte to write this app, learning about the skill in the process isn't a good selling point
point 3: please proofread and fix the typo
mention the skills used in the bullets

benefactor

point 1: you can cut this down to say you worked in a team of 4 for this app which does ... saves lots of space and gets to the point

rose anchor Oct 11, 2022, 1:08 AM

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Thank you everyone for taking the time to respond, I will be sure to make all of the corrections needed. Thank you once again! 🙂

rose anchor Oct 11, 2022, 12:16 PM

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Made corrections; I should have put the University of AnonThree as its more accurate than 'TechCompany';

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Thank you everyone once again for your time and advice 🙂

flat wadi Oct 11, 2022, 1:04 PM

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So what were your degrees in

#Looking for advice on my resume, Entry Level