#December 2022 Grad. Going to Start Applying Soon

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terse iron
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bump

radiant bane
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i like the format, very clear and easy to read 👍🏾

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i would remove the date from your projects, 1 of them is 2 years old and the other doesnt have a date at all

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I dont understand the use of saying “& more”

terse iron
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To show I didnt just use those two technologies without listing them all; but I see your point and will fix thank you

radiant bane
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“alert us via slack” no using pronouns so “send alerts via slack”

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last bullet can probably be broken up into two, and remove pronouns.

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break chess game into two bullets

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u dont need to say “(sideproject)”