I’ll fix it
#Tutorial Building Competition
arctic widget
random maple
Nuh uh
frigid harbor
Babe wake up FruitByTheFist just finished his tutorial!
random maple
Nuh uh
frozen sedge
I might do this
cyan oar
There's no point in me trying it. I'm still gonna post my tutorial.
I mean, have you seen Jeff Bob Dudes?
frigid harbor
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
upda...
also this tutorial is @rich citrus approved
frozen sedge
brodie already gave up without confidence within themselves despite the light of competitions being the experience itself
cyan oar
also this tutorial is <@456226577798135808> approved
Can you add my name in the helpers list And I had one thing so people will know who I am. If you win maybe.
frigid harbor
Can you add my name in the helpers list And I had one thing so people will know ...
what did you do?
cyan oar
bcuz uwentpoo is cool name
frigid harbor
you didn't build anything...
frigid harbor
No its finished
crude glade
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
upda...
So cool 
Btw my headset died earlier which is why I randomly left
frigid harbor
it's finr
frigid harbor
Sure what is my mistake
cyan oar
Everybody's that I've seen does not have a sign with writing on it to tell them the player how to move, how to set a checkpoint.
frigid harbor
Everybody's that I've seen does not have a sign with writing on it to tell them ...
Mine has that...
cyan oar
im blind
frigid harbor
Website doesn't show words on signs
cyan oar
ahh
frigid harbor
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
upda...
Also slin if possible could I get some feedback? I would love to improve it if possible
rich citrus
does anyone want to help me finish my tutorial
lost tiger
So far all I have is walk and jump tutorial area
lost tiger
Also slin if possible could I get some feedback? I would love to improve it if p...
Theres holes...EVERYWHERE!
All leading to endless void
lost tiger
At the wood ladder at the ice slide
frigid harbor
Pictures would be helpful, there's multiple of those
rich citrus
the first rope thing
lost tiger
Pictures would be helpful, there's multiple of those
First one
rigid belfry
May i ask what they want in the tutorial
frigid harbor
#1145685995598127194 message
molten brook
Added a few tweaks
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aqk2f39o44nxz0yixbas:1693357996
scarlet sail
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
upda...
My name is chrislol_271 not chrislol_27
Or was there not enough room
frigid harbor
A new player played my tutorial!
hollow pier
@random maple one of my friends just got a headset and played out tut
He finished it in 2:30minutes
Btw sos for ping
rigid belfry
My tutorial is almost finished
I did decide to go more in depth
I just decided to to over the bounce block
crystal swallow
Added a few tweaks
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aqk2f39o44nxz0yix...
I feel like in the ice parts it's very easy to be stopped by the walls, especially for new players that can't control their movement that well yet
there is also this long walking part after the first ice, maybe just add more ice there? I am also not sure about walking on those spheres, would probably be a better first experience to be walking around on mostly flat ground
the general length and flow seems decent though
molten brook
Ok I will try my best to fix it
keen canopy
I just need the roof for my tutorial
crystal swallow
needs more ice and less jumping
I can also recommend watching videos like these, to see what new players struggle with:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWm4C_PctKg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yp2V9mpzNGA
charred sedge
Is there any other reward for winning this competition other than having your tutorial being the tutorial
rich citrus
after this you should hold a compatition for new main levels
crystal swallow
it probably shouldn't take a new player more than 5 minutes
lost tiger
needs more ice and less jumping
What particular area where you jump would you say isn't needed?
crystal swallow
too many jumps that are too hard for new players
also do you explain how to jump to get up there in the first place?
lost tiger
also do you explain how to jump to get up there in the first place?
Yes
The sign is in the wall your supposed to jump up and says something along rhe lines of "press both of your grip buttons and lift yourself into the air, let go at the right rime and you have performed a jump"
If you can think of better wording please tell me🙏
crude glade
Guys I updated my tutorial again
What’s new:
Some tips and tricks you can do on ice
Some hints
GIANT GRAB LOGO at the end
Made everything a tiny bit neater
Made the building look nicer
Added check point symbols to tell you to place one
Fixed some issues, ways you can die
lost tiger
too many jumps that are too hard for new players
If I put them any closer you can walk over them at a slow pace
crystal swallow
it's not so much about the distance and more about the ways players will fail
better to have one big one in the middle for example
new players often won't be able to control how far they jump, so they will tend to overjump or jump in the wrong direction
crystal swallow
Guys I updated my tutorial again
What’s new:
Some tips and tricks you can do on...
make sure that players understand that they have to manually place a checkpoint and it's not automatic
crude glade
make sure that players understand that they have to manually place a checkpoint ...
Will do
civic bear
whats the best tutorial sofare
crystal swallow
that can be a problem if you make it look too much like an intentional checkpoint spot
crude glade
I think there was a sign saying that
Idk if I deleted it though
crystal swallow
I haven't really read any signs yet
civic bear
ok
lost tiger
Recreated some more parts and now cover every function in the game
keen canopy
I’m close to finishing my tutorial up
hollow pier
Nice
lost tiger
Mine covers instructions for:
Walking
Jumping
Checkpoints
Ice
Climbing
Respawning
Grappling
Extras:
1 breaking block at start of small horizontal climbing area
1 bounce block into finish after grapples
Optional walking path on first jumping area
@crystal swallow
Gimme review
So, I changed the first areas jumps so you can walk straight across them at a min of 3m/s and made the ice seem longer
lost tiger
<@329735546467385344> make sure too look at me
1 @ was enough
crystal swallow
So, I changed the first areas jumps so you can walk straight across them at a mi...
they should not be easily walkable, but very easy to jump and hard to overjump
lost tiger
they should not be easily walkable, but very easy to jump and hard to overjump
Ok
NOW I understand
crystal swallow
<@329735546467385344> make sure too look at me
it's not terrible, but also not great 🤷
please watch the videos above as a reminder of what the current tutorials are like and how players deal with them
ice should be a fun slide thing, not just flat
initial walking area should be flat, not immediately drop down
tutorial 4 is supposed to be about 1 handed jumping, not about climbing sideways
I'd focus climbing parts more about straight up and less sideways
crystal swallow
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29vwpoz1ta63oys21bvfv:1693584402
similiar feedback as to most others, not bad, but can definitely still be improved
I'd also put the ice earlier and maybe end on grappling
some of the climbing and jumping bits look potentially too hard, especially the breaking block bit
stone relic
Ok will fix when I get my controller fixed
crude glade
Slin do you think mine needs improving anywhere
(I will add something to say you manually have to place checkpoints)
crystal swallow
pretty sure I already gave you feedback before?
with yours I'd consider removing some of the stuff laying around tbh, but I haven't looked at it in a while
crude glade
Alr
crude glade
pretty sure I already gave you feedback before?
On the newer version
also I might’ve forgotten idk, or missed it
crystal swallow
On the newer version
also I might’ve forgotten idk, or missed it
I am kinda getting tired of telling everyone the same things 🤷
read all advise I have given so far and try to apply it to your level
vital ocean
@crystal swallow WHAT DOSE THIS MEAN
vital ocean
YESSSSSSSSS THANKS SO MUCH BEST DAY OF MY LIFE
This is me
sorry my bad but thanks so much slin
Bye
keen canopy
Guys how should I do the roof I’ve been thinking for way to long?
frigid harbor
Are more people allowed to help?
crystal swallow
Are more people allowed to help?
read the rules from the pinned post
frigid harbor
Cobler told me 3 people max, but it's not in the rules, that's why I'm confused
crystal swallow
Cobler told me 3 people max, but it's not in the rules, that's why I'm confused
there isn't a maximum
frigid harbor
thank you
hollow pier
Me is done now
Can I seeeeeeeeeee
frigid harbor
Me too
lost tiger
Can I seeeeeeeeeee
...it's published
Just search cjbeast in community lvls
And click more lvls
crude glade
...it's published
Did you keep my defaced nuke
keen canopy
Mine is almost done
It doesn’t look the best
But it’s what’s on the inside that matters
lost tiger
Did you keep my defaced nuke
NO
I limited it to 1 jump that is almost unoverjumpable because of its height compared to the ceiling, not too high, not too low
In the updated version
So that the players hit their heads if they go to high and can't overjump it
Vertical 1 hand climbing?
Not too hard though
hollow pier
Skill issue ig
random maple
Deleted the first ice part and want feedback
@crystal swallow (sry for ping)
Join me
And you can help on my new tut
frigid harbor
Did you get rid of the misinformation and the spelling errors?
rich citrus
oof
random maple
if anything you should have kept initial ice and gotten rid of the other
Can I just make the other one better?
random maple
Did you get rid of the misinformation and the spelling errors?
THERE WERE NONE
You just spell bad
crystal swallow
it's more about rewarding players with something fun and easy after the jumping that tends to be hard
frigid harbor
THERE WERE NONE
THERE IS
frigid harbor
STINKY POOPOO HEAD
random maple
We went through the whole map
random maple
Bad speller
frigid harbor
I'll go through it again
I went through it earlier today and there were spelling errors and misinformation
random maple
it's more about rewarding players with something fun and easy after the jumping ...
Understood
Another pain in the a-- change😭
rich citrus
i help the competition
civic bear
i help the competition
sorry my lobby disconnected im slap we
frigid harbor
@random maple errors still there
crystal swallow
making the hard parts short is totally ok
I'd really like to see someone try to actually visualise the hand movements people have to do
frigid harbor
^
rich citrus
its just hard to make it make sense
frigid harbor
I'd really like to see someone try to actually visualise the hand movements peop...
Noted
random maple
<@957759374846214194> errors still there
Where
random maple
Nahhh
crystal swallow
a little plain, but pretty decent tbh
not sure if maybe a couple too many gaps to jump or walk over
covert burrow
rigid belfry
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
I know oreo_gaming
rigid belfry
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2be6m4805grk49usckjf6:1693626013
I attempted to make the pacing good so it doesn't take to long but also isn't to short
crystal swallow
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29xc83sott7wc21mlni58:1693263561
I'd remove the dropping down at the start, maybe get rid of one or two jumps and make the entry to the climbing parts easier.
crystal swallow
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
I think some of the ice jumps may be a bit tricky, especially that very big one with the arrows. consider making it a smaller jump or at least tell the player to go really fast (if you don't yet, I haven't read signs)
I think the approach to jumping is great in this one though, you could consider making the jumps a little higher though, but they are hard to fail once you figure out the movement, which is great
crystal swallow
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2be6m4805grk49usckjf6:1693626013
it's actually a great level, but unfortunately a terrible tutorial, I'd consider starting a new one from scratch and focus on making it very easy.
rigid belfry
Okiely dokily
crystal swallow
basically a new player will already give up on the first jumps
if they make it past that, they will keep dying in the lava on the ice
and if they make it through that part they will struggle with the next and so on 😄
the average grab player does not get to the end of a level usually
shut meteor
tip play your level sitting on the floor
crystal swallow
while sitting down and playing your level you should also close your eyes and only use one hand
rigid belfry
The expectation is very easy
But it's not exactly easy to capture very easy unless the fundamental is explained
crystal swallow
but you can always test what you build!?
also take a look at all the other tutorials here and also the current existing ones
should give you a good idea of how easy it should be
crystal swallow
also too short is better than too long
rigid belfry
I'm able to format this in any way
crystal swallow
I feel like it would be a waste of a good level to change it, but it's yours to do with whatever you want
rigid belfry
As long as it's
Decent length
Very easy
Player friendly
And explains game fundamentals
I have entirely free range
crystal swallow
I wouldn't focus on the decent length bit
also it needs to be fun for someone that has never played the game before
rigid belfry
the one thing that marks tutorials is the fact they're paced
They by design built to explain the game
Also may I ask
What blocks am I going over
You explained mechanics
But not what they're attached to
Sliding can refer to
Momentum walk slide
Or hill slide
rigid belfry
So
Block breaking
Ice sliding
Grappling
And lava
crystal swallow
no breaking
rigid belfry
No breaking
crystal swallow
just plain yellow
rigid belfry
Ok
That narrows it
also slin you get no argument here
I need your grab player model you're getting a statue
crystal swallow
it keeps changing 🤷
rigid belfry
hmmmmmmmmm
Slin I can update 4 things at once due to the fact I'm gifted with the ability to use both arms for different things because of a nurelogical disorder that's helpful as heck
also the chance of a player meeting you in game and studying the statue hard is a mathematical improbabality smaller then the chances of the god particle landing in your cup of orange juice on a Sunday afternoon while eating linner
Anyway I'll have the map done by noon
It's sunrise for me rn
charred sedge
also the chance of a player meeting you in game and studying the statue hard is ...
how does one eat linner?
rigid belfry
Ahem
Brunch is between breakfast and lunch
Linner is between lunch and dinner
Dinsert is between dinner and dessert
Linner is when you eat a lunch food like a hoagie and a dinner food like steak
rigid belfry
Can I buy a parachute?
hollow pier
Can I buy a parachute?
Give me nitro
rigid belfry
Ahem
charred sedge
nitro for parachute
rich citrus
I'd remove the dropping down at the start, maybe get rid of one or two jumps and...
ok thank you for the feedback
random maple
Me and cobblers rn is a W
rigid belfry
Should I go over the walking and jumping mechanics
stone relic
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29vwpoz1ta63oys21bvfv:1693584402
I fixed it
vocal dagger
Me and cobblers rn is a W
ok
rigid belfry
heres a screenshot from the walking segment if you want a video just ask
It's work in progress
rigid belfry
Hey can I post a video of me exploring the start segment to get a response of what I should edit in and remove
Keep in mind I'm verified
`just wanted to see if I'd get feedback or not
I haven't started the main level
I do things one at a time
Anyway ima record the start to get some feedback
here it is, sorry for the goofy voice i just woke up and my voice is deeper when im more drowsy and less alert
crystal swallow
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29gwwj3rpcbxe7q9maao7:1693416009
I think you might have forgotten jumping!?
rich citrus
Haha
crystal swallow
besides that it's pretty great though
the first one that looks like you actually read the initial text and most of the advice
rich citrus
Might rush to get mine out bcs I’m gone for all of this weekend
shut meteor
Might rush to get mine out bcs I’m gone for all of this weekend
Ping me every time you work on it, so I’ll see it if I’m free
crude glade
INDEX MODERATOR?
rich citrus
👍ok
crude glade
When did that happen
shut meteor
Today
crude glade
Dang bro congrats
rich citrus
Crazy
crystal swallow
#🧗grab-general
rich citrus
Most of these feel like maps instead of tutorials
crude glade
Wdym
rich citrus
Feels like they’re shoot off tutorials of maps
shut meteor
Most of these feel like maps instead of tutorials
A few yeah, mainly cos they are longer and harder than they should be. There’s definitely some that feel like tutorials tho
frigid harbor
Such as?
rich citrus
Brotherlys
crude glade
frigid harbor
That's what I'm saying
shut meteor
crude glade
Index, all our work just for it to be told it’s not a tutorial 😔
frigid harbor
It's too long
crude glade
No it isn’t bro
frigid harbor
And confusing
rich citrus
More of too hard than long
frigid harbor
More of too hard than long
This too
frigid harbor
Your money!
rich citrus
I’m just giving you my bias opinion so take it with a grain of salt
shut meteor
It's too long
Have you played it? It’s really quite short
crude glade
I get if the jumping part is hard but everything else? Nah
The jumping part is the only really ‘dangerous’ section because you can fall
frigid harbor
The jumping part is the only really ‘dangerous’ section because you can fall
I died on ice section
crude glade
The grapple sections have lava under them, but they are simple, one giant grapple block
crude glade
I died on ice section
frigid harbor
It's so easy to die if you don't go straight
crude glade
Oh btw index, forgot to tell you but I removed a bunch of debris from the ground so we have like 50 extra complexity if you have any ideas
shut meteor
Oh btw index, forgot to tell you but I removed a bunch of debris from the ground...
I’ll play it tomorrow and let you know
crude glade
I’ll play it tomorrow and let you know
Ok
rigid belfry
Anybody wanna help on my tutorial
rigid belfry
@crystal swallow
Sorry for the ping but
Am I allowed to make a segment on jumping and walking and the checkpoint and reset stuff a non parkour learning in a cave or no?
Also can I make the reset a fall into hole thing or would that be less then optimal
rich citrus
theres no way im winning unless i can win
crude glade
NO
scarlet glacier
The thing is like
I would love to help people
but
I’m also in the contest so
every man for themselves
frozen sedge
I haven't even started mine yet
frozen sedge
this is the first challenging challenge ive faced 😮💨
you think I could help if you do
crystal swallow
just keep in mind that you can help with a maximum of 3 submissions
generally I like more people collaborating though
frigid harbor
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
updated again
And please feedback again if possible, made the jumps easier on the ice and made the jumping part harder
crystal swallow
I think it's pretty good
maybe some bounces on the ice part would be fun, but not absolutely necessary
also there is a bit of a corner on the ice where that long jump was 😄
frigid harbor
A corner!!!!
random maple
@crystal swallow what do you think of the update
crystal swallow
link?
crystal swallow
remove the gap on the left
crystal swallow
the lamp is off-center
too much walking at the end
I like how that area looks, but walking that far just isn't fun
hazy grotto
Hey slin, why not just put the mountain or 50 layers as the tutorial 
random maple
the lamp is off-center
WDYM lamp
random maple
Oooooooooooh
crystal swallow
the lamps themselves, not the position on the ceiling
frigid harbor
I keep fixing things but they cause more problems
random maple
Skill issue
hollow pier
Skill issue
Agreed
frigid harbor
spelling issue
crystal swallow
depends on how good it is
if it ties, then I might chose the one with more people
if it's better than all others, I don't care
...
wispy willow
just be better
crude glade
Mine is grab skyscraper
hazy grotto
I'm stealing your idea now
wispy willow
what is GTF?
wispy willow
was it? when?
frozen sedge
me me me
hollow pier
Mememememe
crude glade
Mememememememe
frigid harbor
I will
frigid harbor
also there is a bit of a corner on the ice where that long jump was 😄
can you send a screenshot of where? can't find it
wispy willow
added jumping and other stuff
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29gwwj3rpcbxe7q9maao7:1693416009
crystal swallow
added jumping and other stuff
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29gwwj3r...
up to you and I also didn't play it yet, BUT from what I am seeing I don't like how the ice and the lava look, everything else is nicely rooted in the world, but those not at all. I'd also consider moving the logo to the end of the slide to be more visible
rigid belfry
feedback?
keen canopy
I know it sucks but I spent way to long on it to scrap it
I’ll try and make a better one
rich citrus
i just spent like 30 mins making a controller
keen canopy
I spent over an hour on a roof
rigid belfry
WAYYYY to hars
What's the hard part?
topaz widget
The yellow climb bit
rigid belfry
Okie
should I make it just a long beam?
Or still implement the climbing skills but decrease difficulty more
scarlet glacier
did whatchu said
stray wadi
Thoughts on this? It probably needs some polishing but the idea is it shows the hand movements so new players get a better understanding
The green is supposed to mean letting go, so ill probably mention that somewhere
vocal dagger
looks good
crystal swallow
I like it
vocal dagger
Should i make a tutorial
topaz widget
Yea
vocal dagger
ok
frigid harbor
Should i make a tutorial
Make with me 
frigid harbor
that's finr
shut meteor
Lol
frigid harbor
Thoughts on this? It probably needs some polishing but the idea is it shows the ...
I copyright this
random maple
@shut meteor can you get on??? I wanna show u some stuff
shut meteor
Not free sorry
hollow pier
<@649165311257608192> can you get on??? I wanna show u some stuff
What do you want to show him
crystal swallow
can you stretch those lava gaps a little and put the lava a bit lower?
currently it looks like it can just be walked
better to force new players to try jumping
but then not having them die in the lava if they basically made it
overall I like it though
I'd only consider less walking at the end and maybe not having the lava part on the ice bit, but honestly I am not so sure about the lava bit, might be fine too
also good job with the images, I am surprised they don't all have bunny ears 😄
random maple
Looks very good😅
random maple
not the bunny ears 😄
BUNNY EARS
random maple
Updated again @crystal swallow
I need feedback
Plzzzz
And I have a few changes in editor already😅
I'll post soon tho
crystal swallow
some of the lights are still shit
for everything else I'll have to play it next sunday
rich citrus
who is good at making waterfalls?
crystal swallow
surprisingly quite a lot of people
random maple
some of the lights are still shit
K
Will fix
@crystal swallow
Lights are fixed
Also added a lot of detail
hollow pier
for everything else I'll have to play it next sunday
What lights?
random maple
😭😭😭😭
frigid harbor
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29id5ta7mb54j28tz6wfe:1693592609
very good
scarlet sail
random maple
Nuh uh
civic bear
yay what he said
scarlet glacier
I just thought you could because Jeff did
random maple
If it's revelvant you can
keen canopy
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2bojjyjkmhegoqt73au7m:1693426241
Any feedback?
random maple
😭
crystal swallow
I'd prefer if nobody pinged me about their tutorials tbh
random maple
Noted
shut meteor
I hate timezones
rich citrus
I do too
crude glade
Time zones are trash
random maple
Fr
drifting oyster
I do too<:SadPepe:954805587101769829>
And I'm a grilled cheese sandwich.
frigid harbor
Almost done with my tutorial
screenies?
random maple
Plzzz
stray wadi
I think its pretty much finished 💪
topaz widget
Bro my discord buggin
crystal swallow
Anyone that wants to enter has to share their tutorial level in here! Please also tell others. I will not see it if it was only posted in level-showcase
crystal swallow
this will be so hard to judge 😅
my main complaint is that the ice is at the end, not combined with the bounce and kinda too short
but I also kinda really like it
but there are already 3 or 4 others that are on about the same level...
I might just end up trying the best ones out for a week each and see which works best
stray wadi
my main complaint is that the ice is at the end, not combined with the bounce an...
So, longer ice combined with bounce? I was trying to give the waterfall vibe and thought the bounce would do better on its own
crystal swallow
I love the waterfall vibe, just wish it was a little longer
and I'd rather have no bounce than the bounce on it's own
I don't care much about the bounce
I just think if it fits the level it can make the ice part more fun
it's the walking and jumping people really need to understand from the tutorials, everything else is just about making it fun enough that they are a little hyped for the game
stray wadi
ah
Do you think the grappling section could be more extreme? I made it super easy because i thought it would be what people struggle with the most
stray wadi
but there are already 3 or 4 others that are on about the same level...
What would make it more different? I assume the jungle theme is whats being used a lot
Oh wait did you mean level of quality, or theme
rich citrus
aint no way im gonna win this
frigid harbor
I need to make another tutorial
And get slin to tell me where the corner is in mine cuz where.😭
rich citrus
i like black cats the most
crystal swallow
Oh wait did you mean level of quality, or theme
quality
random maple
But I did too so I should win
rich citrus
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29rkswgx13q8mej7mxdg6:1693432460 Bro me and kookoo went crazy on this
random maple
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29rkswgx13q8mej7mxdg6:1693432460 Bro m...
W
rich citrus
does the waterfall look good?
random maple
Idk
frigid harbor
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29rkswgx13q8mej7mxdg6:1693432460 Bro m...
ima be honest from the minute i spent looking at this, a bit to hard
rich citrus
ima be honest from the minute i spent looking at this, a bit to hard
what do you meann
tawny lion
ima be honest from the minute i spent looking at this, a bit to hard
Every single gap and jump can straight up just be walked across
rich citrus
you barely have to
shut meteor
It's not, all you have to do is go fast
What about the 1foot kids without arms 🤷
tawny lion
Oh man, I forgot about them
sullen dirge
Tried to send my tutorial level but it deleted it
rich citrus
you stick to the wall
frigid harbor
alright
rich citrus
on the turn
shut meteor
@sullen dirge did you mean to put your tutorial here or in the showcase?
sullen dirge
I meant put the tutorial here
sullen dirge
Idk it keeps on being deleted
crude glade
Updated my tutorial again, now the ice section that teaches you how to use ice is much longer and more fun with the help of index
hollow pier
Updated my tutorial again, now the ice section that teaches you how to use ice i...
You made it longer)
I don’t see it
hollow pier
The ice bit INSIDE
Oh
random maple
W
scarlet glacier
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aqk2f39o44nxz0yixbas:1693357996
Way to long
cut down the slide section
rich citrus
Thanks bro
frigid harbor
Only thing I can recommend (if it's not already done) is tell the player to set checkpoints!
rich citrus
There’s boxes with checkpoints inside of them but yes could definitely be added
tough anvil
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29xc83sott7wc21mlni58:1693263561
i got record hehe
random maple
@rich citrus it's amazing only complaint is there is very little detail in the slide part
But otherwise great
Just like imperfections in the walls n stuff😅
rich citrus
ehehehehehhee
icy kraken
Holy moly
Anyways, this is the first thing I’ve made in months. Hope you all like it! If you have changes to suggest, I’m willing to listen https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2a7dx97v4xiepfpmj8gi4:1693404959
frigid harbor
Make it not in the complete dark!!!!
icy kraken
There’s signs there when you play in grab lol
Just teleport to end so you can fly through the level easier
tough anvil
relatable
stray wadi
Ima try to actually publish my tutorial in the coming days, just gotta make the ice part more epic 💪
frigid harbor
Epik ice
random maple
I'm just waiting for Sunday now😭😭😭
frigid harbor
I'm just waiting for Sunday now😭😭😭
Why wait when we could cook
You have 3 submissions
random maple
Only one posted tho😅
rigid belfry
hey slin could you delay the end of the challenge
I have a severely debilitating sickness rn and if i hop on grab I'll puke
I'm hoping to get better by the 8th
cyan oar
@crystal swallow my friend medveds made one
crystal swallow
ok?
cyan oar
just letting know
random maple
Don't ping him for things that don't rlly matter
rich citrus
Post or make another one!
can i help you so i got another one
scarlet glacier
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2ako4mk7kyo1zx1hlee0m:1693949985
it’s alright ig
although there could be a lot more improvements
cyan oar
it’s alright ig
mot mine
scarlet glacier
well you still helped with it
frigid harbor
can i help you so i got another one
sure
cyan oar
well you still helped with it
ye i did tell what need fixing ull fix it
scarlet glacier
ye i did tell what need fixing ull fix it
what is this grammar bro
cyan oar
what is this grammar bro
i dont do school
frigid harbor
do school
cyan oar
im home schooled so not a lot of school
scarlet glacier
i dont do school
what you homeschooled or something?
oh
what grade would you normally be in tho
?
scarlet glacier
if your in 7th you should have a lot better grammar bro
not to be rude or nothing but your parents should try harder on that subject
frigid harbor
#👋welcome
cyan oar
again i dont care i can spell good but i like Abbreviations
scarlet glacier
k ig
cyan oar
in like 5 minutes
r u on
cyan oar
in like 5 minutes
still on
frigid harbor
Yes
random maple
Yes
frigid harbor
-Slin
crystal swallow
yes
rocky coral
vocal dagger
slow zinc
icy kraken
Anyways, this is the first thing I’ve made in months. Hope you all like it! If y...
Btw @crystal swallow do you have any last-minute changes I should make?
crystal swallow
hard to tell with black blocks tbh
maybe put blocks closer together for climbing and make them start low on the ground
but might be ok
hollow pier
Tutorial
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aejscunjtm5ktmn0lh0w:169387...
I haven’t seen it but I’m scared
crystal swallow
hey slin could you delay the end of the challenge
I have a severely debilitati...
sorry, but no, I am not going to change the deadline. I hope you already feel better though and maybe you can get something finalised over the weekend. If not then, well, it's just a stupid tutorial contest 😄 I'll start judging on monday, anything that's been posted by then will be considered.
rigid belfry
aigh
hazy grotto
I made one. It's simple though, so I'm just glad to participate.
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29k763epg4asdivyctend:1694032687
hazy grotto
I made one. It's simple though, so I'm just glad to participate.
https://grabvr...
Any thoughts anyone?
stone relic
Any thoughts anyone?
Epic
hollow pier
Ngl I agree
keen canopy
I predict someone will win
random maple
He said "will"
rich citrus
Ok
frigid halo
Wait, tomorrow will be grab time through all the tutorials, correct?
random maple
No
crystal swallow
Wait, tomorrow will be grab time through all the tutorials, correct?
Sunday and probably again on monday
stray wadi
I made the slide much more epic but now im worried its too much
rich citrus
You have 3 days to figure that out
stray wadi
After im done with school stuff ill post a vid of the slide, i think its cool but to compensate for its largness i made the end of the slide the end of the level, which doesnt look as cool as my original ending, because the area is more open
keen canopy
Envious it is wayyy to hard if for new players
stray wadi
I cant upload the video here
shut meteor
Y not?
shut meteor
I cant upload the video here<:Wahh:950353745139626024>
Too big?
stray wadi
12 mb, it uploads then gets deleted
Goin to bed now anyway though,ill try again tomorrow 
stray wadi
12 mb, it uploads then gets deleted
Id assume its some grabby stuff
shut meteor
: (
crystal swallow
try again after no links or other images were sent for a while
might be the links that prevented it
stray wadi
Ey it worked
I think i might remove the jump/end part and keep things more enclosed, basically just what i had originally but with a longer slide bit
stray wadi
If anything i think im definitely gunna make the ending feel more enclosed, i dont like how much space there is
lone copper
This is why I can't do challanges
People try and make the most complex levels I've laid my eyes on
I want simplicity back
(Repost but idk if it's allowed)
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29tg86hh1iwp6oagd4qb0:1669654845
crude glade
People try and make the most complex levels I've laid my eyes on
It’s not even that complex
hazy grotto
I made one. It's simple though, so I'm just glad to participate.
https://grabvr...
I added a small update.
willow granite
"very hard"
rich citrus
POV you’re expecting a tutorial to be hard
stray wadi
Letsgoo, i think its pretty much done
Go play it and give me feedback!!!
I removed the bounce in the ice slide because it was too unreliable, and made the floor section of the lava grapple part into bouncy blocks so players will still have knowledge of them, i also made the ending look cooler by shrinking the cliff and adding cool big sunken rocks or something with "grab" etched onto one of them
Had to cut down on visual things because complexity was an issue💀 (i used all 3000 and barely finished it )
Well i hope yall like it :)
keen canopy
Looks nice
rich citrus
Until mine comes out😈 (I ain’t gonna finish mine cause I gotta work on the lobby and my copycat series)
frigid halo
Today is the day everyone
keen canopy
Isn’t it tomorrow?
hazy grotto
Yes
keen canopy
Hasn’t it always been tomorrow
hazy grotto
Yes I think
hazy grotto
From what I remember, it was always the 10th
vernal notch
I have 1 day to make one...
keen canopy
Looks good
rich citrus
1 day left minus today
crystal swallow
You still have all of tomorrow too
random maple
That's what he said
icy kraken
Anyways, this is the first thing I’ve made in months. Hope you all like it! If y...
Small update, I might mega buff it soon because black cat looks like they have the best map. I could always try to make something better in the span of one day. Too bad I have so much homework lol
scarlet glacier
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2be6m4805grk49usckjf6:1693747736
wtf
uh
this is way to long
for a tut
I hate it when people make it so if you fall it tells you how to respawn
but if you don’t fall
it doesn’t tell you
rigid belfry
@scarlet glacier little harsh innit bruv
I said feedback not punchback
crystal swallow
It’s true though, you again kinda made a cool level, but most section are quite a bit longer than they probably should be. The first climbing wall for example or the ice could both be half the length and would still be good
rigid belfry
It’s true though, you again kinda made a cool level, but most section are quite ...
So you need me to cut everything in half
crystal swallow
I don’t need you to, but it would probably make it a better tutorial
crystal swallow
Any feedback on mine?
Id need a video of it
Only got a phone until later tomorrow
crystal swallow
You may want to read my sentence again
crystal swallow
No
civic bear
ok
keen canopy
I’ll get a video of it soon
random maple
Omfg😭
rich citrus
slin made no suggusteons on mine because nothong can be improved /j
crude glade
I don’t know if mine needs improving 🔥
Pretty sure it’s all good (mostly, and hopefully…)
rigid belfry
I don’t need you to, but it would probably make it a better tutorial
So the tutorial is in terms of everything good but if it was cut in half it would be multiple times better?
stray wadi
Only got a phone until later tomorrow
here's a video of the full updated version of my level
vocal dagger
Tutoril
vocal dagger
here's a video of the full updated version of my level
I think this one will win
It’s really good
shut meteor
here's a video of the full updated version of my level
wow
charred sedge
here's a video of the full updated version of my level
This is best one
frigid harbor
Boys I think we’ve lost
stray wadi
We learning how to play with this one🔥🔥🔥
rich citrus
It’s gonna be very close
frigid harbor
It’s gonna be very close
It’s Between, you, me, Jeff, and black cat imo
rigid belfry
What takes me 2 hours takes most 20 minutes
frigid harbor
What takes me 2 hours takes most 20 minutes
Don’t try and take my title of the slowest builder
rich citrus
It takes me weeks to finish maps..
stray wadi
I was workin on this on and off in chunks, i think in total it took around 3-4 hours
shut meteor
Lol
crude glade
At least we tried 🔥🔥🔥
Do you think we should get rid of the ice part at the end btw or nah
shut meteor
Nope
scarlet glacier
<@860571090874925076> little harsh innit bruv
I said feedback not punchback
mb
hollow pier
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29v9vd6n9z45d16mi2o2n:1693173542
I think too much detail
random maple
🤯
rich citrus
now to spend the entire day making sure the gamplay is really easy
rigid belfry
remade some parts to be shorter
crude glade
Did a last minute change on my tutorial
rigid belfry
I'll send the link in a moment since I just updated it
Albino is credited as the only play tester that took the time to actually give decent feedback
rich citrus
last day.
vocal dagger
Get that devil stick out of yo mouth
rigid belfry
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2be6m4805grk49usckjf6:1693747736
Still pretty bad tho
icy kraken
This is my second submission https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2a7dx97v4xiepfpmj8gi4:1668284727
hazy grotto
Best tutorial
icy kraken
Teaches you literally everything
frigid harbor
Hoping mine wins
I have one tactical advantage, but I still think black cat will win
rich citrus
is there gonna be a grab time today?
crystal swallow
yes, soonish
frigid harbor
Playing tutorials?
vocal dagger
Cool
crystal swallow
yes
frigid harbor
Wait I forgot I need to fix the corner
random maple
yes, soonish
Plz wait for like 1hr30 nor 2hrs I'm in the car and don't wanna miss it😭
frigid harbor
rich citrus
yes, soonish
how soon is soonish?
frigid harbor
Noon or when the moon comes up
crystal swallow
@here if you made a tutorial or know someone that did, please check the following list and make sure that it is in it! If not, please send the link to the missing tutorial here.
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2abebn7t4lq4ydl89oxje:1693508616
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2be6m4805grk49usckjf6:1693747736
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2bojjyjkmhegoqt73au7m:1693426241
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29v9vd6n9z45d16mi2o2n:1693173542
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29xc83sott7wc21mlni58:1693263561
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29t798uon2urbra1f8w2q:1693775768
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29tg86hh1iwp6oagd4qb0:1669654845
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29v9vd6n9z45d16mi2o2n:1693514968
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29i048i1xfla24jp3u50r:1694038825
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29k763epg4asdivyctend:1694032687
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aejscunjtm5ktmn0lh0w:1693876855
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2ako4mk7kyo1zx1hlee0m:1693949985
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2a7dx97v4xiepfpmj8gi4:1693404959
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aqk2f39o44nxz0yixbas:1693357996
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2bckx8xvzyf3bplkkdcvk:1693321549
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2aa0lcnuwvv06gw64jl5l:1693271911
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29id5ta7mb54j28tz6wfe:1693592609
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2af2v4lqxksl1ru5itxr1:1693868162
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29rkswgx13q8mej7mxdg6:1693432460
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29rbyudpcet6wdy3iidd4:1693514232
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29gwwj3rpcbxe7q9maao7:1693416009
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2bb7ndvntrf86g47ciwxn:1693234757
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29vwpoz1ta63oys21bvfv:1693584402
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=29l50ea34l4s54rtclzus:1693601016
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2b36xnshxn9cr1zqe417y:1693373336
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2a3gpy09xxjfr1wz03wpa:1693585777
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2b8s80v5pwgckhjdcuzht:1693588847
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2ap0yu9y9g2lcvxbc5x3g:1693278682
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2acbdwj2bo9r9zkt79p72:1688323348
https://grabvr.quest/levels/viewer/?level=2a7n71m8ku9w28hk4mlvw:1684609060
languid oyster
Oh help
hazy grotto
random maple
W
crystal swallow
35 so far
wispy willow
thats a lot
lost tiger
Oh boy
crystal swallow
You still have until the end of the day btw
I added them to the best of grab section now, should also help get some plays to get a more meaningful difficulty rating for all of them
cyan oar
im quick make one j think if wanna join u can
hollow pier
I added them to the best of grab section now, should also help get some plays to...
Ok thanks
cyan oar
its pub
frigid harbor
I added them to the best of grab section now, should also help get some plays to...
Yay!
rigid belfry
Hey slin, was I a good creator
random maple
I added them to the best of grab section now, should also help get some plays to...
Wwww
crystal swallow
Hey slin, was I a good creator
I think you are a great creator, but I am not yet sure that you are great at making tutorials 😄
I'll probably find out soon though
random maple
Hey slin, was I a good creator
I know I not slin but as I've not seen you here for very long you're doing great👍
rigid belfry
best of grab it achievement enough so
if I don't win
It was fun being apart of grab history
random maple
W speech
crystal swallow
best of grab it achievement enough so
that's only going to be temporary though, sorry 😄
random maple
😭
blazing wolf
ooomagod
crude glade
Ready for my tutorial to be slammed 🔥🔥🔥
crystal swallow
a bunch of these have some stuttering issues, which can sometimes get quite bad...
I am not going to use a tutorial that is stuttering
rigid belfry
Mine is likely not a winner lol
frigid harbor
a bunch of these have some stuttering issues, which can sometimes get quite bad....
Does mine have that issue?
stone relic
Mine is likely not a winner lol
Same but luckily for me a new player joined my lobby and finished it without a issue accept for the slide bit for some reason they said they where new they might not of been tho
rigid belfry
If anybody trys mine they'll likely think it's decent
My most played level and only moderator verfied level is forest temple which was my rejected submission
stray wadi
I think mines the easiest
stone relic
For mine it is too much text, it’s not Pico 4 friendly
stone relic
For mine it is too much text, it’s not Pico 4 friendly
It's possible to beat in like 5 secconds
stone relic
I sit in cotner
Corner
stone relic
drinking tea
Same
rigid belfry
It's not about who wins
stray wadi
Apart from mine i like aft darings the best, it just feels very grab idk
rigid belfry
Its about how they act after
crude glade
I think a lot of us have the issues slin was talking about tho ngl
stone relic
It's not about who wins
Its about the fun all of us had making them
crude glade
The ‘stuttering issues’
crude glade
I dunno
stone relic
Bad instructions (I think)
rigid belfry
if I'm to say who has the best chance of winning its blackcat
crude glade
Ik mine is apparently ‘too hard’
And slin doesn’t want ice at the end
Which ALOT of people did
Including me
😔
stray wadi
I think the issue i saw with a lot of people was the amount of death points, lots of tutorials had way to dangerous parts, specifically grapple parts
stray wadi
And slin doesn’t want ice at the end
I didnt know that
crude glade
I didnt know that <:Wahh:950353745139626024>
He did tell you I think
stray wadi
He said to make the ice part more epic
stone relic
Ice was second to end
Mine was right after grappling and then ice then climbing then breaking blocks
rigid belfry
I never went over wood, breaking and lava grapple since I was press for time and making edits now is impossible
crude glade
I’m not sure but I do remember on a grab time slin said he didn’t want ice at the end
stray wadi
He said to make the ice part more epic
And to remove the bounce section
vocal dagger
And to remove the bounce section
i think yours still has the best chance of winning
crude glade
Yeah yours should win
(If it’s not mine 😎)
vocal dagger
its really good and shows jumping the best way in my opinion
stray wadi
Competitions still not over yet right? I might make a last minute adjustment to the end, something in between the ice and the end
crude glade
I’ve gone through the 5 stages of grief in these two weeks, and as acceptance came, I realised you should win…
stone relic
I never went over wood, breaking and lava grapple since I was press for time and...
The order I did mine is walking, jumping, grapple, half grapple, ice, climbing, breaking
stray wadi
Competitions still not over yet right? I might make a last minute adjustment to ...
Maybe like one last climbing part, like raise that finale tunnel part up a little so you have to climb up there
rigid belfry
meh we all had fun so
stray wadi
ARGH slin did tell me to not put the ice at the end💀
later today ill def try to add some sort of other thing after the ice
stone relic
meh we all had fun so
That's what makes it worth it.
The fun we had making the level
rigid belfry
I'll make a attempts to address the breaking blocks and lava grapples
Maybe we can do a level collab at some point
major maybe tho
depending on school
stray wadi
Anyone know exactly what time the contest is ending today?
rigid belfry
Probably 12:00
vocal dagger
this tutorial thing is prob one of the best things ive seen in grab
stray wadi
Probably 12:00
Yeah but i assume its adjusted to slins timezone
vocal dagger
a lot of people used feedback to improve and some people made really good tutorials
stone relic
Good luck to everyone (even though blackcats tutorial is going to win most likely)
rigid belfry
I think mine is definitely a loss
Blackcat literally ended the competition
They have really good level design
stone relic
Blackcat literally ended the competition
True
stray wadi
I think my only big flaw is the ice at the end, but im a little worried about how im going to change that because im maxed out on complexity 😅
stray wadi
Every time i need to make a change i have to shave off details in the environment
rigid belfry
I like tutorials that leave out some stuff as I like games that let the player figure out things on their own
stray wadi
Yeah i tried to focus on the very basics, theres just things that people will figure out naturally, like not being able to jump on ice
stray wadi
Yeah i tried to focus on the very basics, theres just things that people will fi...
I also have smaller details on the side, like a little sign stating that you can also climb on grapple blocks
rigid belfry
I never taught lava and breaking blocks since lava grapples are obvious and breaking blocks should be learnt by trial and error
stray wadi
Yeah i dont have any breaking blocks
rigid belfry
Of course I'm no good at tutorials so I ended up with a playable mess in the end
stray wadi
I did put a sign for lava grapple though, just stating not to touch them
rigid belfry
tho if anybody wants to try it, it's called The World Of Grab
crystal swallow
the competition will end whenever I get to start putting together the final list of levels tomorrow
stray wadi
Biggest common theme i see with tutorials are unskipable grapple parts, players shouldnt be expected to just get good at grapple within the tutorial, all they need to know is how to grapple(imo)
crystal swallow
so you still have all of today in your own timezone
civic bear
ok
crystal swallow
- probably some extra
civic bear
slin is grabbed time over