I think it's good tbh. A little repetitive and empty all the way through making the buildup seem kinda boring, but otherwise it's a good start
#Feedback on my structuring skills?
tall mist
lyric zinc
Honestly analyzing your favorite songs structure will help you figure out how structure works
brittle otter
little tip for building your tracks: listen to tracks you like and see how artists make their tracks, how they build each element, and what cool sounds can you take from them
crimson hill
pure oracle
just keep going till you run out of cpu and then either mix parts down or start a new one and never do the same thing till you know for sure its good
you need some vocals? I have voice changer with a nice effect lol i posted in beginners about it if you want some let me know. just send me something to say at what bpm or sent me what you want me to speak the words to
actually ill just tell you the voice changer and you can have fun with it
its called... Voicemod