Feedback skin

[rigid vortex]

So I made this Minecraft skin inspired by the last four images:

Tim Lockwood: mainly his facial features, like the eyebrows, nose shape, and skin tone.

Smeagol: the hairstyle, with those long thin strands of hair but still mostly bald.

A "shadow beard": similar to what you see on depressed cartoon characters, like SpongeBob in that image.

A black and white lumberjack shirt: just because, why not?

I’m looking for some feedback or critique. I feel like the sleeves look a bit off, and maybe the back of the head too. If anyone has tips on how to improve those parts, I’d really appreciate it.

[south pewter]

the moustache and the eye brows needs to be more yellowish and more visible. I think you should omit the subtle beard

[rigid vortex]

I did not try to add a moustache or anything. I only wanted to include the eyebrows and the shadow beard. I also wanted the hair color to look more like Steve’s rather than Tim Lockwood’s. In what way do you think I should adjust the shadow beard? Should I reduce it more on the sides, on the front, or remove it completely? And is there anything else you think I should change?

[south pewter]

remove it and give it a moustache

[rigid vortex]

I use the Essentials mod mostly. It is client-sided, so servers do not need to install the mod themselves. This is how it would look in the game most of the time, but if players do not have Essentials installed, they will not see this version. They will see the one I originally sent instead.

[south pewter]

amazing

[rigid vortex]

I have created an improved version of the Minecraft skin. Here is the previous version for reference:

Btw, this is without mods just to be sure, does anyone have criticism? Maybe some adjustment or something?

[south pewter]

it has improved a ton