dex-entries-discussion

[hexed fog]

https://tenor.com/view/squirtle-eating-riceball-pokemon-gif-16138560

Omg people actually made them on Google I'm dying

[rich goblet]

D'oh, I wish I was pinged on this one.

The reason why I focused on restarting a heart is Eevee is typically a pokemon focused on the relationship between itself and its trainer. The over the top-ness is just how I imagine it in my headcanon

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME can be found in the alleys of sprawling cities. Its entire body acts as its stomach, so any food tossed away on it is simply absorbed.

It supposedly brings good fortune as long as its Gold Leaf remains intact. Removing its leaf will cause it to wither, so it furiously scratches anyone that attempts to touch it.

[regal cedar]

just did some pokemon sleep-inspired entries

[hollow nimbus]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vAp0AVE6xJo

[ebon warren]

That's what it is referencing so good

If the rice has a sweet smell and taste it could be the Pokémon world's sushi rice

[rich goblet]

Alright, I found my muse today. See you tomorrow after like 25 entries

[rich goblet]

Ugh, I'm happy I got it done but like, immediately after hitting send, I think I used directly twice in one sentence

For some reason the brain isn’t braining today

[regal cedar]

@rich goblet lemme know if/what youd like it changed to

[rich goblet]

It bakes orders of Gratin a la Pumpkaboo and brings the entrée directly to the patron directly from the oven. It occasionally overwhelms people with its generous serving size, so some establishments have taken to offering patrons more options.

To

It bakes orders of Gratin a la Pumpkaboo and brings the entrée directly to the patron fresh from the oven. It occasionally overwhelms people with its generous serving size, so some establishments have taken to offering patrons more options.

I've been having a weird MH day lately, I'll spare you all the details but having some structure like just making word clouds have helped me lately

[regal cedar]

Word clouds? I'm afraid I don't know them.

[rich goblet]

It's like brainstorming but with only words

I do them to pass the time since my depression gets me into ruts

https://tenor.com/bpdYc.gif

LIke one of these things

It helps me distract myself whenever I ruminate

[regal cedar]

Oh, cool!

[rich goblet]

Just a fun fact, and helps explain my big vocabulary box

[regal cedar]

Hi @glad grotto ! I was looking at one of your entries for Quilava/Bibarel.

It involves the in-universe tongue twister of:

"How many barrels could a POKENAME burn if a POKENAME could burn barrels?"

However, this Pokemon's name is "Quibarel", which does not fit the tongue-twisting pattern. Could a different Pokémon be used?

[rich goblet]

The closest thing the comes to mind is like

383.70 Bibell

How many bells could a Bibell sell if a Bibell could sell bells.

[rich goblet]

I had a stupid idea

Chips and spagghetti went well carry on

[regal cedar]

Oh my.

[glad grotto]

Nah, I had a nagging in the back of my head that I was stretching too hard to make that one work. You may scrap it if you'd like xD

I figured the bidoof line was closely related to a woodchuck and didn't want to pass up throwing that twister in there at least once, but I admit I can't immediately think of anything that rhymes better.

[rich goblet]

I'm probably going to knock some Slowpoke line stuff, just FYI so folks don't accidentally double up

[rain tiger]

Okay back from collage and I am ready to make some more Koffing fusion dex entries. Like this one right here.

Omafing#138.109: When frightened POKENAME will use its holes to smear itself with a lubricant to slide its oversized body into its shell. However, it can sometimes get stuck in its shell when the lubricant dries inside the shell.

[regal cedar]

"use its holes to smear itself with a lubricant"

The holes leak the lubricant, not smear them, right?

[rain tiger]

how's this? Omafing#138.109: When frightened POKENAME will leak all over itself with a lubricant to slide its oversized body into its shell. However, it can sometimes get stuck in its shell when the lubricant dries inside the shell.

[regal cedar]

perhaps more like "leak a lubricant all over its body"?

[rain tiger]

Alright now how does it sound? "When frightened POKENAME will leak a lubricant all over its body to slide its oversized body into its shell. However, it can sometimes get stuck in its shell when the lubricant dries inside the shell."

[regal cedar]

Hmm, it mentions "its shell" or "the shell" often, I wonder if there's a way to remove/change up one of them

[rain tiger]

I removed one of the "its shell." "When frightened POKENAME will leak a lubricant all over its body to slide its oversized body into its shell. However, it can sometimes get stuck when the lubricant dries inside the shell."

[regal cedar]

Yes, that seems much better!

[regal cedar]

Hi @still jetty ! I was curious about this entry.

"If POKENAME's physical body is destroyed, its mind wanders through Cyberspace until it can find a suitable host in the real world, which it then possesses and slowly formats into a new body."

This is for Porygon/Golurk.

I'm not entirely sure about the logistics of this with this Porygon fusion. So it becomes like a virus if defeated and changes...what DOES it change? It says in the real world, so is it possessing/transforming something? I think I get the general idea, it's making a new golem so to speak, I just have a lot of questions about it! Could you explain it further?

[ebon warren]

Statistically, it's incredibly unlikely to have two people doing the exact same sprite for Dex entries. (If there's some event or big to-do it is much more likely, to be fair.)
But even if multiple people make an entry, that's fine, then that sprite can have multiple entries (similar to Pokémon from the games having multiple unique entries across game versions and generations).

[still jetty]

The entry is based off a previous one I had written before that had been approved "The body and mind of POKENAME are two separate entities. The mind exists somewhere in cyberspace, while the body exists in the real world. Each part sends trillions of commands a millisecond to ensure that POKENAME can react and function properly."

The idea here is that the fusion itself is based on the normal ghost typing, and the idea is that the fused spirit of the two would find a suitable piece of machinery while wandering through cyberspace, possess it like a ghost, and over time that body would transform into a new vessel for Porylurk (I think that's it's name?).

either way, I can understand the confusion as I wanted to build off that original entry for Porylett. Though I can see now that the execution of it was sub-par at best.

[regal cedar]

Entries should be as standalone as possible, as per FAQ 7.

[faint shore]

Replace "leak" with "secrete".

[faint shore]

"When frightened, POKENAME will secrete a lubricant over its body to slip into its shell. However, it can sometimes get stuck inside when the lubricant dries."

I have made your entry more efficient by removing repetitve language while retaining its meaning.

[hollow nimbus]

I would argue that all is not a redundant word as it clarifies that the entirety of the body is lubricated.

Otherwise, the over only means above, and the fluid is not coming from above the Pokémon.

[zealous veldt]

Can I mention Pokémon that aren't in this game?

[rich goblet]

FAQ 47

[regal cedar]

If you mention it, there should probably be a reason.

[faint shore]

When some tells you to apply a lotion "over your skin", do you only apply to whichever parts of your skin that is pointed away from the nearest gravitational point?

When someone says "under the skin", do you only think of the parts of skin pointed toward the nearest gravitational point?

[rich goblet]

This is more a quirk of the language being difficult than anything else, especially with over, under, up, down, etc

[faint shore]

Right. I just made the suggested entry more efficient. Feel free to disregard me entirely.

[rich goblet]

It was in favor of your point, sorry I guess

I was stating that fact in support of how over/under refer to multiple things.

Ugh

[round cave]

https://www.fusiondex.org/113.115/
While the egg in its pouch is usually unfertilized and therefore can't hatch, POKENAME treats it like its own child. POKENAME will be heartbroken if its egg is taken, even though it'll produce another one shortly after.

[rich goblet]

You took this a step into a feels rollercoaster

Hecking adorable entry

[faint shore]

I understand that. I am just trying to remain neutral. I do not want to impose on anyone. My rewording was merely a suggestion. Thank you for your support.

[rich goblet]

It's all good

[jagged ledge]

Hey guys, my recovery's going pretty well, but I'm still going to take the night off to be safe. I'll try to start more formally going through Dexdoku reviews tomorrow night. Your patience is appreciated and now I'm extra glad I gave participants until Wednesday to join this week.

[hollow nimbus]

The difference between 'apply lotion over skin' and 'apply lotion all over skin' is whether you put the lotion only on one part of your body or on your entire body's surface
'All' is still functioning as an adverb of degree, specifying the amount that the adjective 'over' is functioning, so as an editor, I would not remove that word from the passage, as it helps to more accurately convey the author's intent.

[zealous veldt]

Nevermind lol I just found out they are actually in game

[weak wraith]

Late at this point but could change "over its body" to "covering its body"

[lapis cosmos]

Hello! Quick question: when submitting dex entries, should we include the "a" or "b" or such if we favor one of the sprites for our entry? Thanks!

[midnight siren]

yep!

when you are submitting there is a field for the exact sprite file name, you add it in there :)

[lapis cosmos]

Great! And thanks!

[modern thicket]

Hi! How do I reach out to start volunteering and writing Pokedex entries?

[regal cedar]

No need! You can do so any time! Check out the pins.

[lapis cosmos]

Any ideas on what to call a group of Exeggcute? Clutch? Cluster? Troop?

[regal cedar]

Group or cluster sounds OK (In fact, the term cluster is used once), but keep in mind Exeggcute refers to all of them anyways.

[lapis cosmos]

Yeah, I was looking at previous dexs and saw that too. Typing up for this specific Pincute and was trying to determine how to phrase it in a way that made sense.
https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/127.102a/

[narrow cosmos]

I tended to use clutch in my entries.

Poor non-buggified Exeggcute, lol

[lapis cosmos]

Thoughts? I'm not loving the ending's wording.

POKENAME is a brood parasite, laid among clutches of Exeggcute. It rarely survives to evolution in the wild due to its tendency to devour other members of its specific clutch.

[narrow cosmos]

Hmm. maybe chance to "laid among Exeggcute clusters" and excise the word "specific" at the end (or just change it to "others members of the clutch")? That's all that I could think of off-hand that might help the flow a bit, otherwise it seems like a fine entry.

[lapis cosmos]

" laid among hatcheries of various Exeggcute species" or "As a brood parasite, POKENAME infiltrates hatcheries of other Exeggcute species."

[boreal canyon]

@wide pumice if you want to submit dex entries, go here ;)

[wide pumice]

hi thanks!

I need help on how to put in the file name in this form

(as an example) if i were to choose bulbasaur to write an entry about would i put 1?

[boreal canyon]

you click on "your answer" and then, let's say you make an entry for bulbasaur/bulbasaur, you'll write 1.1.png, if you do for the alt sprite it'll be 1.1a.png

[wide pumice]

ohh

and the sprite changes the dex entry?

so you can have custom entries seperate for different sprites is that correct?

[boreal canyon]

1 sprite = 1 dex entry,
1 fusion = multiple sprites

[wide pumice]

ok thank you!

i understand it now

[round cave]

Here's a sprite I made for the Elusive Pokedex, here's my entry so far:
POKENAME uses its massive claws to knock over trees. It then eats any fruits and honey in them.

[timid sky]

Trees don't typically have honey, it's beehives (which are usually attached to trees TBF) that have honey

[hexed fog]

424.57.png POKENAME live only to battle, always training for their next fight. This makes it easy to tell young and old POKENAME apart, as the latter's claws will be marked by the scars of their countless past battles.

we cannot do multiple credits.

@polar bobcat @winged jasper
please choose one of you to take credit

Please only input your discord username
@worn lantern

[winged jasper]

@polar bobcat can take the credit. I just took two of his ideas and workshopped them together.

[worn lantern]

i’ve changed usernames since last i contributed heavily; does matter which one i use as long as it’s just one?

[hexed fog]

Yea just has to be your physical discord username

[polar bobcat]

man tysm bro my goat

[lapis cosmos]

Oof, I just noticed my first entry doesn't match the others username-wise (it just says pjporwoll)

[regal cedar]

That seems to be correct, you're fine! It shouldn't be your server nickname.

[lapis cosmos]

Okay! Then all the "patrickjporwoll"s should be "pjporwoll" (or vice versa)
Also two more things:

1. I noticed I mismarked a sprite: entry 21259 should have been sprite #224.73.png for Octicruel

2. 413.23 was marked as needing an entry on the "high priority" tab and had a sprite (https://www.fusiondex.org/413.23/) on the dex site. I just want to make sure the "high priority" tab should be used!

Thanks!

[hexed fog]

the sprite for that one may have been removed lemme remove the No Sprite Yet and we can check next month

this way it wont show up on the list

[lapis cosmos]

Appreciate it! I just started in that tab for my writing and started with the ones I felt the most inspired by. Btw, should we post any general dex writing questions here or just dm? I don’t want to clog up the feed with non-revision questions if this isn’t the best place.

[winged jasper]

My only question is "Where's the best place to look so see which 'Mon need new Dex entries?"

[regal cedar]

The Dex Grid, probably, for all mons, or High Priority/Catchable Wild for those.

Both are found on the other sheets/tabs/pages under the sheet in the pins.

[hexed fog]

fixed

[charred dust]

Me realizing 2 months later that my entry for the Unking/UnownKing fusion referred to a specific member of the species. Whoops.
Guess I should change it up a bit so it refers to the entire species in general.

According to old folklore, the POKENAME are considered the rulers of all Unown, laying dormant for thousands of years. When they awaken from their slumber, they will devour any and every living being that crosses their paths.

What do y'all think of this slight revision?

[boreal canyon]

maybe replace "the pokename" with "pokename" ?

[charred dust]

Hmm, yeah, I'll do that.
Also, if I were to submit this entry, would it replace the old submissions?

[hexed fog]

I would say 'attempt to devour'

only sith deal in absolutes

[charred dust]

Okay. Here is the entry with these two changes:
According to old folklore, POKENAME are considered the rulers of all Unown, laying dormant for thousands of years. When they awaken from their slumber, they will attempt to devour any and every living being that crosses their paths.

[regal cedar]

Only your own would be replaced.

[charred dust]

Okay. Good to know.

[weak ravine]

anything that can be done??

[charred dust]

Okay, just submitted the entry for all four sprites referencing the Unown King.

[timid sky]

#sprite-requests

[hexed fog]

You can only submit entries for fusions that have been sprited

[lapis cosmos]

I think I'm about to go on a Parasect-fusion writing spree. They're just so delightfully creepy.

Pahorn #46.111

Tochukaso mushrooms have grown in the cracked plates of a Rhyhorn, resulting in a POKENAME. As the mycelium spreads under the armor it mutates the feet into insectoid claws for improved burrowing and defense.

Parahorn #47.111

Mycelium from the mushrooms has spread beneath most of the armor of POKENAME. It spends this stage of its life plodding in shaded woods to topple trees as nourishment for the mushrooms.

Paradon #47.112

POKENAME is very territorial due to the influence of the parasitic mushroom. It hunts Grass-type Pokémon for nourishment and Rock-type Pokémon to continue spreading the mushroom infection.

Paraperior #47.265

Mushroom mycelium and toadstools have overtaken the body of POKENAME to the point of near immobility. Other Pokémon feed on the mushrooms, allowing the spores to spread to new hosts.

[regal cedar]

looking at the dex grid, honestly im surprised the kanto starters don't have as much filled out

[jagged ledge]

https://tenor.com/view/im-back-woody-toys-story2-gif-14679436

[jagged ledge]

And people mock me for starting my main run of entries with Bulbasaur

Alright, Dexdoku let's go

I would say reword the ending a bit. "Because (etc), it is too hazardous for human consumption."

Duplicate that covers a completely different set of traits so would pass without issue or demerit, just communicating duplicate status to be thorough

Remove the "the" before sounds and reword "ground vibrations" to "Vibrations in the ground." The rest of the entry looks good

One r in bury. I would recommend changing the second half of the first sentence. We recommend alternating singular and plural subjects or only using pronouns for one of them. "This is a Pokemon, these are its prey. It watches them." vs "These are Pokemon, these are their prey. They watch them." See where the confusion begins? The second sentence looks good. Also again, "the vibrations in their wings", not "wing vibrations"

Looks great, no notes

Looks great, no notes. (I like the reference to something filling the Ninjask's center as opposed to being the hollow Shedinja core.)

I like the concept, but phrasing it as "It approaches people with an adorable smile, offering coins (etc)..." and then "except these coins are fake" should more actively tie into the scene or be mentioned earlier. That's more rewrite than grammar, so I'll leave the rest to you

Looks great, no notes.

Idk if there's a preference for British Defence vs English Defense, but just putting it out there. Otherwise, looks great, no notes!

(Normally I say looks good no notes but today I said great cuz it's been a minute and I want to be consistent in my batches dang it )

[clear hollow]

I'll check these notes in the morning, thank you so much Also, there's one more entry I wrote later to replace Lurantis/Nidorina since someone else already writes an entry for it

[jagged ledge]

You're welcome! Thank you so much for your patience. I do apologize for the wait. For what it's worth, I do really like your Lurantis/Nidorina entry as well, but I will give my review for the replacement as it's what'll be graded on the final grid

Hey, hey psst psst hint hint... if you're writing about Berries, just use proper capitalization and you could be a big help. @hexed fog Which Berries are we still missing? Any Sour ones? The second sentence looks good though.

[hexed fog]

oh i have no idea off the top of my head

[jagged ledge]

Dang. I mean hey that's a good thing that Berries have been added since. Any Sour ones on Dictiondex?

[hexed fog]

Colbur is sour

tbf i think almost all of the diction dex is done

[jagged ledge]

Well it's still nice to use lore inspiration

How do you feel about using Colbur Berries?

[hexed fog]

I mean anyone who does all 50 of a list can request a sprite fill in

There's no restrictions on that

[jagged ledge]

Yeah, exactly. I was just looking for a quick Berry reference on a local/Unown Approved list of suggestions, so thank you!

[small nest]

I recommend rewriting this a bit, the Paras line is the bug as well as the mushrooms. Just having the mushrooms does not a Paras fusion make.

[hexed fog]

I typically avoid describing how fusions happen aswell. It just skates faq 16 a bit closely

(I personally dislike entries that are like "it is different than normal Pikachu fusions. This Pikachu has antlers" and you're just like " ok cool thanks for this nothing description"

Or "It has Pikachus eyes and Zubats ears."

A pidgeotto wouldn't have an entry that says "it's smarter than most of the pidgey line"

So why would write that for a fusion of two pokemon?

[jagged ledge]

I usually only do the differentiation of others that share the category if it's something specifically contrasting, like what would normally be an ice type native to an Arctic Climate would be in a Tropical Climate or something.

[hexed fog]

My feelings do not dictate my approvals mind you. Saying those things is allowed i just audibly groan when I read them

Lol

[jagged ledge]

I apologize. Especially because I may forget your feelings and continue to do so when I consider it necessary

But I will try to lean away from it in the future

[lapis cosmos]

Thanks for the feedback and it totally makes sense! I considered it due to the steady growth of the mushrooms on the sprites!

What do you think about an entry like this: "Fungal mycelium spreads under the armor of POKENAME, steadily sapping the strength of its bones. Its plated hide is durable enough to withstand tank rounds, protecting the weakened body."

[hexed fog]

Everyone has dislikes and likes. There's no reason to edit yourself on that lol

[jagged ledge]

True, true.

But honestly I'm just gonna figure out what feels right per entry and the just a trait or hybrid traits are things you won't have to worry about for me lol

[tawny elk]

So if I am reading the rules correctly its just for the custom sprite fusions that you can make dex entries for?

[jagged ledge]

Correct. This way there are designated inspirations for writers and files for the game.

[craggy beacon]

thought this was a fucked up minior at first

[tawny elk]

Well then once I finish up the game I'll write some entries, it would be a good exercise for fantasy biology notes

Although my writing career still peaked in highschool when I made my color series lol

[jagged ledge]

Sounds good! Hope you have fun. And hey, we're always happy to help new voices share their ideas

[jagged ledge]

[clear hollow]

Wha-?

Is this some theme going on where you guys try to include all berries into the dex entries or something?

[boreal canyon]

someone wants to make a custom dex for a sprite of mine ?

[wide pumice]

i could! but i'm actually not very experienced with this, I could try! :)

whats your sprite?

[jagged ledge]

Just some fun bit of lore with items, yeah

[boreal canyon]

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/439.313a/

[wide pumice]

oh nice sprite!

it looks really cool!

although it looks like it already has a dex entry, do you want me to write another one or...?

[uncut plover]

anybody wanna help with dex entries from my sprites?

[boreal canyon]

oh, if it already has one ... lemme think

[wide pumice]

i could! again, i'm new tho so i'm not completely sure in my abilities 😭

[boreal canyon]

https://www.fusiondex.org/349.198/

what about this one ?

[wide pumice]

we could write something about how it likes things glowing with heat as opposed to shiny things

like "it is said that reshikrow's hordes are the cause of some volcanoes"

does that sound like something you think would work?

[timid sky]

Thing is, I don’t think there are that many things glowing with heat

[boreal canyon]

[wide pumice]

ohhh

yeah

massive blunder

my bad

hmmm

[uncut plover]

Any dex entries are appreciated

[wide pumice]

it lives in volcanoes, and keeps hordes of scrap inside the lava??

[boreal canyon]

@wide pumice I'm going on a break for 2h so you have time to cook something, good luck

[timid sky]

Everyone is new at some point

[wide pumice]

oof

too much pressure

😭

ill think on

it

[boreal canyon]

[wide pumice]

( but i also kinda have to do some science homework)

[boreal canyon]

Take your time it's not urgent x)

[timid sky]

It usually helps if you look at the dex entries for both halves of the fusion

[boreal canyon]

Anyways, I'll brb

[wide pumice]

ok im finifshed homework

im gonna vomit a few possible entries and you can make some edits or pick one you like sound good?

@boreal canyon here's an idea, tell me if you like it!
POKENAME soars at incredibly high altitudes and snatches small, bright meteors to collect in the plume of flame that sprouts from its head.

It's a bit short, so theres room for extra content.

maybe different wording would read better, like

POKENAME soars at incredibly high altitudes. When small meteors fall from the sky, it chases after and snatches them up, to store in the plume of fire that sprouts from its head.

I actually much prefer this one

[boreal canyon]

I like it

[wide pumice]

thanks!

i think it sorta plays into how murkrow likes shiny things

as well as the fiery aspect

if you wanted we/you could add a bit at the end about it being a good omen to pair with murkrow being viewed as a bad omen but thats up to you

[wide pumice]

what do you wanna do? want to brainstorm some more tomorrow, or enter it as a dex submission now, or anything else? because i kinda have to go to sleep idk about the time difference for you but for me its like 10 oclock

[clear hollow]

Cool Do I have to use an unused berry specifically or check if there are ones that fit the image in my head a bit better?

I have to do some staff work first, then I'll go through the notes you left me

[hexed fog]

You only need to use a specific word if you're trying to do the dictiondex

If not, go ham

[boreal canyon]

For me it's 13:53

But you can submit it with the pinned form

[wide pumice]

would you like to submit it? because if you do it you get priority i think because its your sprite

[boreal canyon]

as you want

[wide pumice]

ahh

i hate making decisions

ok i'll submit it

does this look correct?

[boreal canyon]

[wide pumice]

[hot rain]

Mate I submitted a dex entry but I just realized I typed “leafrade” instead of “pokename”

Whoops

[timid sky]

https://tenor.com/view/pixel-trombone-playing-musical-instrument-prank-joke-gif-15407543308447681253

[regal cedar]

fixed

[hot rain]

Nice

[jagged ledge]

Nope, I was just looking for a quick reference for a Sour one. If you find another you prefer, by all means choose that one... and if it happens to be unused, it's a happy coincidence!

[jagged ledge]

No worries, I completely understand. I mean hey I've been very behind this week too lol

[winged jasper]

God I saw that Murkrow/Reshirem fusion up there and actually had a good idea for an entry XD

[lapis cosmos]

Psyuk #54.89
POKENAME tries to block out its overpowering headaches by eating. Unfortunately, because it loves to eat trash, the headaches are caused by its own stench.

[winged jasper]

Could also say that its unhealthy diet only makes its headaches worse.

POKENAME tries to block out its overpowering headaches by eating. Unfortunately, its poor diet of pure garbage and waste only seem to make its headaches worse.

[jagged ledge]

@rich goblet @timid sky Is there anything I missed or still lingering for your Dexdokus?

[rich goblet]

I don’t think so

[jagged ledge]

Did you replace the Bibarel/Lotad?

[timid sky]

Not sure if you saw my updated Oddish/Fletchling or my Nidorino/Persian, so I’ll repost them here

POKENAME spends all night flying around the region then goes underground when daylight comes. If someone tries to pull it out of the ground, POKENAME will rapidly increase its body temperature to burn the offender.

POKENAME expects to be treated like royalty by anyone who crosses its path. If it does not receive said treatment, POKENAME will lash out by stabbing them with its horn and scratching them with its claws, both of which contain poison.

I haven’t done any entries beyond those two and the one’s you’ve already seen though. My dog passed away last weekend, so I haven’t felt much like writing

[jagged ledge]

How do you feel about simplifying the ending to "to burn the offender"?

[jagged ledge]

I am so sorry to hear that, that is fully understandable, take all the time you need.

[timid sky]

That would be fine

[jagged ledge]

I think it looks good, no notes.

[timid sky]

I’ll submit them when I get home then

[jagged ledge]

Sounds good

[rich goblet]

@jagged ledge I might be away for a while. Lots of stuff going on 😅

[jagged ledge]

No worries! Best of luck!

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Nincada X Swift:
POKENAME spends many years underground, digging in search of an evolution stone. When it finally finds one, POKENAME remains completely motionless as it absorbs the radiation from the stone and evolves.

[jagged ledge]

Looks great, no notes!

Wait actually

Slap an s on that spend, otherwise it's plural compared to your second sentence which is singular

Nearly missed that because the description was so good

[timid sky]

I just realized I mixed up dex and sprite doku again. It's Nincada X NORMAL, not Nincada X swift

Even though Eevee meets both criteria

[jagged ledge]

It's alright! And yes, yes it does lol

[timid sky]

That was intentional

Also, I have a question about a specific fusion. Since Aipom's tail is hand shaped, do you think it's fair to call any marks left by the paint hand prints? Or would something like paw prints be better?

For reference, here's the entry I'm thinking of:
To mark its territory, POKENAME uses its tail to swing from one tree branch to another, leaving behind green handprints from its paint-like fluid. When it likes someone, it will leave a handprint on the person or Pokemon, signifying their friendship.

(Also @jagged ledge since this is dexdoku Pokeradar X Normal)

[jagged ledge]

I'd say either or in this case, shouldn't be an issue

[jagged ledge]

Looks great, no notes!

[vital thunder]

if a pokemon already has a pokedex entry is it not possible to submit an entry for that one?

POKENAME'S Magnetism is powerful beyond compare as it can easily disrupt power and gather mostly anything metal it sets its sights on.

I honestly love this fusion between magneton and Ninetales

[regal cedar]

Yes, you can submit entries to Pokémon that have entries, although we usually honor the first one, but currently it's set up so that both can appear in-game, just at random.

[vital thunder]

oooohhh

[regal cedar]

Make sure to use POKENAME instead of the name of the Pokémon.

In this case, use "POKENAME's".

[vital thunder]

There

i edited it

[jagged ledge]

Multiple entries are totally allowed, we will just be reading through new ones to make sure they aren't repeating or piggybacking and they may be lower priority for review, but overall they're still viable.

[vital thunder]

Alr

i just thought that other entries coldn't be posted

because those were the og ones submitted by other people

[jagged ledge]

Well the one exception is if an entry exists by the person who made the sprite, at that point it's basically the canon lore so there's no need to expand unless requested

[vital thunder]

oh

[jagged ledge]

But like don't worry too much about that, it's a very specific case-basis

But also we do just recommend prioritizing new entries because well there's a lot to choose and lots to still go through and lots of chances to explore new ideas

[vital thunder]

okay i get that

I might submit multiple custom entries.

POKENAME was once considered a pokemon from another world due to how it looks but soon scientists found out it was a fusion of two other Pokemon and it was classified as a fusion forevermore.

The Fusion named POKENAME hates the sea and won't go near it so it roams in places that gather electricity to feed off of it to gather nutrients.

[honest gazelle]

How do we go through submitting entries?

[regal cedar]

Check the pins!

[honest gazelle]

In-universe, are fusion pokemon considered only as fusions, or as separate beings? For example, if two pokemon are terrestrial but their fusion looks like it might come from outer space, would mentioning the fusion as coming from outer space make sense?

[vital thunder]

My guess is that theres a lot of fusions roaming the world due to like an ore of some kind being all around in every corner of the region fusing 2 pokemon when they touch it making for absurd fusions.

or just fusions in general

[honest gazelle]

So a fusion wouldn't be considered a separate pokemon in lore, only as a fusion of two others

[vital thunder]

Yeah

thats my theory

I feel like tis close to like the terrastral crystals that just randomly pop out of the ground

only this ore is much more common and found everywhere

Idk if its treu or not

but like i said

my theory

[lapis cosmos]

The channel with the link to the submission form also links to the spreadsheet that has a FAQ tab that might help in answering the question. You can also always post here and request feedback on a dex entry.

[honest gazelle]

Gotcha! In that case -

[vital thunder]

just submitted a pokedex entry

for Magnecool

[honest gazelle]

"When POKENAMEs first visited from outer space, they were nearly driven to extinction due to their soft bodies. Nowadays, they use geokinesis to form discarded Sableye skins into tough vehicles, protecting them from harm."

[vital thunder]

Carbink Sableye?

[honest gazelle]

Yeah!

[vital thunder]

mmm

[honest gazelle]

Looks like it's fine to do stuff like that at least!

[hexed fog]

We are officially under 4800 needed wild entries! Rejoice!

[honest gazelle]

Yahoo!

[lapis cosmos]

I have a few more for feedback I'll be posting soon! And a bunch more in a doc that I'm workshopping

Psyvanha #54.436
POKENAME distracts from the pain of its headaches by causing havoc for those living near its habitat. A lone POKENAME will form a relationship with a school of Carvanha, gaining protection in exchange for the entertainment of its slapstick antics.

[vital thunder]

I love him

[lapis cosmos]

Octicool 224.72
POKENAME will use its tentacles to travel over land when its habitat becomes unsafe. It spends most of its time squeezed into small discarded items like potion bottles or Clamperl shells.

Sablsparce #421.206
POKENAME uses its tail to dig in search of its favorite food of gemstones. When it finds a large deposit of them, POKENAME makes a nest so it can slowly feast on the stones.

Scysey #123.113
The fierce appearance of POKENAME is enough to frighten predators away from its egg. This is fortunate for the POKENAME because its scythe arms are too short to be used effectively as weapons.

[craggy beacon]

possible typo? of -> or

correct me if im wrong

[lapis cosmos]

Parasey #47.242
Even one bite of the mushroom carried in the pouch of a POKENAME will send a person or Pokémon into a euphoric state of happiness. The POKENAME will protect the mushroom with its life, allowing the mushroom to escape to begin the life cycle again.

[lapis cosmos]

Nope, mean to be "in search of" unless I'm looking in the wrong spot.

[craggy beacon]

"food of gemstones"

[lapis cosmos]

Yeah, since it's part Sableye it should be "food of gemstones"

[craggy beacon]

fair enuf

[vital thunder]

This unusual pokemon was said to be a being made of code and brings to mind the classic art of polygons

[regal cedar]

Self-reminder to make an entry for Diancie/Dusknoir regarding it being able to form/crush diamonds in a powerful grip once a sprite is made, haha.

[regal cedar]

Several problems here, including spelling and capitalization. Make sure to follow standard conventions.
I also wouldn't really call that "pixels", it's more like a "low-polygon" style.

[lapis cosmos]

Okay, last trio for feedback tonight but I wanted to get this adorable trio of rascals out there to submit. Thanks for any and all feedback!

Sablfa #421.173
POKENAME has not developed teeth yet and so must suck nutrients from the exterior of stones it finds. Moonstones are especially nutritious for POKENAME, so they cry happily when they spot one.

Sablfairy #421.35
POKENAME are entranced by sparkly gemstones, particularly the insides of evolution stones. Wild POKENAMEs must temper their appetites if they ever hope to evolve.

Sablfable #421.36 (one of the best portmanteau-ed names)
POKENAME searches for geodes that remind it of the moon. It then cracks the stone open to gorge itself on the beautiful insides.

[small nest]

very cute, love the concepts! Good job blending the canon lore of the lines.

[vital thunder]

Ow

Words hurt

Not my fault I have dysgraphia

[ivory pewter]

Its cable-like tendrils can discharge enough power to overload a city's power grid. While fighting, POKENAME will drag its tail along the ground to build up static, then releases it by slamming it into their opponent.

[lapis cosmos]

Thanks! The spriters have done such great work on these!

[hexed fog]

excuse me treecko doesnt naturally learn Bullet Seed?

the anime is riddled with LIES

[lapis cosmos]

Wait... really? Wi-ld. How did I never notice that.

[hexed fog]

I wish to get to 4500 by eod

like remaining on the wild list

we are at around 4700

we can do thiiiiis

[lapis cosmos]

Klefmer #371.88
POKENAME searches garbage dumps and city alleys for discarded keys to add to its collection. It eats the keys it doesn’t find worth keeping, building energy for evolution.

Klefuk #371.89
Not content with only keys, POKENAME collects any trash it finds interesting and builds it into body parts it can manipulate. Its body is so corrosive that POKENAME must continually search to replace this treasure trove.

I won't have time to do many new ones today, but I'll send it what I have!

Planning to get some more fusions that include one of poison, ghost, and dark types.

[hexed fog]

what are you talking about

oh hes spamming

<@&306953740651462656> can you take care of this?

just checked their scent messages

ty ❤️

[nimble sage]

scratch and sniff?

[hexed fog]

omg

I am writing too many houndour entries

I'm done.

[clear hollow]

Is there still time to correct my dexdoku entries or it's now closed? I didn't manage yesterday

[hexed fog]

gotsta tag @jagged ledge for that info

[clear hollow]

I didn't wanna disturb anyone, sorry

[jagged ledge]

It's alright! Still time to edit! You have about 6-8 hours!

[clear hollow]

Oh great, I'll do just that then

[jagged ledge]

Sounds good! This is why I close new entries a few days early: To make sure I am on call for last minute edits

[clear hollow]

This Pokémon has two sets of udders for double milk efficiency. However, because POKENAME's diet consists mainly of poisonous plants and mushrooms, this milk is too hazardous for human consumption.

This Pokémon's large ears and whiskers are very sensitive to sounds and vibrations in the ground. When hunting, POKENAME stuns its prey with ultrasonic waves before stabbing it with its highly venomous horn.

This Pokémon buries itself into the clouds, making them its home. When its chosen cloud darkens and thickens, POKENAME comes out and rubs its wings, the vibrations of which forcing the cloud to rain and creating a soft melody.

POKENAME likes collecting interesting things, but doesn't like paying for them. It approaches people, smiling adorably, and offers them fake coins made of cardboard painted to look like gold in exchange for their valuables.

When POKENAME swim, they look like huge flowers floating on top of a river. They build dams as their nests and adorn them with thorny and poisonous vegetation for defense. POKENAME are very friendly, but their pollen is extremely allergic.
(changed defence for defense just in case, I knew there's two different variants but didn't know why )

It lives in impassable swamp thickets where competition for its favorite food, the sour Belue Berries, is minimal. The bushes that grow on its back produce very sweet and delicious fruits, but are also adorned with highly venomous thorns.
(I decided to use a berry based on blueberries because they're sour like I imagined, and because I was originally thinking of cranberries that we used to pick near the swamps with my grandma when I was 🤏 this big, and a Berry based on blueberries is just the closest option)

@jagged ledge

[timid sky]

Speaking of dexdoku, I still have 3 more entries to make. Time to unleash my inner Izik

[clear hollow]

if these are fine, I'll send you my updated chart

[jagged ledge]

The Swablu entry: You're describing a singular Pokémon working with "one another", change it to say "others of its species"

[clear hollow]

I don't

if you mean "against one another", I meant wings

[jagged ledge]

Sorry, I meant one another

Oh just the wings?

[clear hollow]

is there a way to make it clearer?

yeah

[jagged ledge]

Hmm let me reread

Just trimming it to say wings together would probably help

[clear hollow]

good, thanks!

though, hm... "it rubs its wings, the vibrations of the wings forcing etc etc" sounds a bit repeatitive

would "the vibrations of which" work instead?

[jagged ledge]

Sure

[clear hollow]

thanks again for the help! is there anything else I should retouch?

[jagged ledge]

Saying "It would approach people" sounds like you're describing something that doesn't happen anymore. I would rework that in an active tone.

The rest looks good!

[clear hollow]

like "it approaches"?

[jagged ledge]

Sure, just make sure to update the rest accordingly "smiling adorably and offering (etc)" for example

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku shedinja X flying:
Occasionally after a massive Thunderstorm, you can find POKENAME floating near the storm's center. Though it is completely immobile, its body contains enough electricity to power an entire region.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes!

[clear hollow]

[winged jasper]

I love watching y'all write. I gotta join in, on God.

[jagged ledge]

Awesome!

[jagged ledge]

Well if you're looking for a place to get started, I have a new Dexdoku going live tonight! Basically you just gotta find a sprite that fits the slot in the grid

[winged jasper]

I'd be delighted. Is there a pin with explanation or rules? I've only submitted one entry to the Google Form so far, but I'm definitely a writer more than anything and would love to shop things up like y'all do for all the dex entries.

[jagged ledge]

Yup, one second!

[jagged ledge]

#1210021946105004052 message

Here you go!

[winged jasper]

Danke schoen.

[timid sky]

I like how we both used Smeargle for the pokeradar/normal spot

@jagged ledge dexdoku pokeradar/flying
POKENAME glow as they float aimlessly though the night, providing light to anyone they pass by. Sometimes, children who sneak out of the house at night will hold onto a POKENAME to use as a lantern, though these children don't always return home.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes!

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Nidoking/Flying:
POKENAME's venomous horn doubles as a lighting rod. By flying into the center of thunderclouds, it can absorb their electricity, which strengthens its body.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes

[timid sky]

And with that I am done with dexdoku. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to go save a Crogunk from some Team Dim Sun grunts

[round cave]

What sprites are these entries for?

[clear hollow]

Check the sheet I posted here earlier

I can't send it right now

[hexed fog]

under 4720 wild entries remain. we can do this!

[hexed fog]

Do eeeeet

[jagged ledge]

They did lol

[hexed fog]

Do moaaaar

[edgy fiber]

i tried 2 submi a dex enttry idea but i c0uldnt ge he c0de thing f0r the fusi0n

[midnight siren]

where did you look?/gen

[edgy fiber]

i was using the infin dex website

[midnight siren]

what fusion were you trying to write an entry for, i can prolly find you the code and show you where to find them for the future :)

[edgy fiber]

shinx line/smeargle

[midnight siren]

ok, so once you put both parts in, you can look at the number above the sprite, thats the code

[edgy fiber]

"It creates paintings under UV lights with the solar charged paint from the tip of its tail. -mon- shocks those who mock its art"

[midnight siren]

if there is more that one sprite for a fusion, it will have a number here to show how many alts there are, so you can click on this to find all the alt codes

[midnight siren]

so for Shinx/Smeargle, the sprite ref you have to put in is 388.235.png

and then you submit using the form in #dex-entries-submissions

hope this helps :)

[timid sky]

So I've had an idea I'd like to run by the Unown's. Before I suggest my idea, I want to confirm: currently, there are no custom dex entries for triple fusions, correct?

[regal cedar]

Yes, they are not currently supported.

[timid sky]

So my idea is: what if we held contests where the winners get to create custom dex entries for the triple fusions

[jagged ledge]

Dexdoku 5 results and Dexdoku 6 are now officially up! Congrats to Busilisk!

[weak wraith]

@hexed fog you are stealing all the feebas dex entries. Leave some for some other feebas lovers XD

[hexed fog]

Sorry!!!!

[weak wraith]

they are great. I love them. Just glad there is another

[hexed fog]

Oh I usually grab at random from the wild list

[regal cedar]

Support for them likely needs to come first, and, as always, spriter will likely get first dibs.

[timid sky]

That's a fair point, we'd need to check with the spriters if they'd be alright with someone else making the dex entries

[timid sky]

I'm gonna throw this in #discord-suggestions and see what others think of it

bruh

[regal cedar]

yeah ive been getting it a lot too

[lapis cosmos]

Pokemon Sun really said, "All you other games' Sylveon dex entries are too sweet or courageous. It's a scary beast!"
Its ribbonlike feelers give off an aura that weakens hostility in its prey, causing them to let down their guard. Then it attacks.

Leading me to:
Sylclops #339.312 The ribbon-like wrappings that encase the body of POKENAME exude a calming aura. This aura allows it to soothe those it cares for and to lull those it feels hostile towards into a state where it can easily pull them into its void-like body.

[hexed fog]

The sun generation has a bunch of entries that are out of dex tone

It's nuts

[lapis cosmos]

It really makes me want to play them again (I only did the main story once)

[honest gazelle]

Clefly, #92.173
Almost invisible at night, this Pokémon's trek across the sky is responsible for the phenomenon of "dark meteors".

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME sequesters itself in the deepest depths of the ocean to rest. Its awakening is heralded by inky, pitch black rain.

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME packs soil onto its head by headbutting the ground. Consistently watering it helps to maintain the shape of its head as it grows.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes

[ivory pewter]

It can be seen flitting about above lakes while hunting for food. Its serpentine body allows for extremely streamlined movement through the air.

POKENAME retains water in its body that it heats up to rapidly expand when frightened. When it believes the threat has passed, it releases bubbles through its spikes to return to its normal size.

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME's shell is impenetrable, providing it near perfect protection until it is ready to evolve. However, this defense comes at the cost of being entirely immobile.

literally the same pokemon btw

Oh thank god metapod is a wild encounter, meant to do this as a mid-stage/gen 4 & just completely forgot shelgon is gen 3

[jagged ledge]

Lol it be like that

[hardy quartz]

bro i got a registell and zoroark fusion that looks crazy

[timid sky]

POKENAME uses its slippery slime to slide around on its stomach. Though its wings are small, they are strong enough to snap even the thickest of trees.

Now @jagged ledge, I'm sure you're wondering which dexdoku square I want this to occupy. The answer: all of them . I want it to be in all of the squares. Because this entry meets the criteria for all of the squares. And with that, my dexdoku is done ||ok fine, water/starter Pokémon||

[jagged ledge]

Nice try lol. I will make a note of this for the records, but 8 other entries would be appreciated lol

[ivory pewter]

Stepping on a POKENAME will leave you dazed and confused. If this defense mechanism fails to deter aggressors, POKENAME makes twisting and flailing motions to escape at a surprising speed.
```.

If multiple POKENAME are gathered together, they will begin to sing a beautiful symphony. The curled hair on a POKENAME's head will form a tight spiral when it uses its psychic powers.

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME takes its time to ensure that its paintings are perfect. The watercolor dyes produced by its tail are highly sought after by painters.

Scrapped first line of "POKENAME patiently paints portraits of proximate Pokemon". Scrapped b/c I realized the mon's name wouldn't follow the alliteration

[lapis cosmos]

Looks like FusionDex is still down / down again?

[midnight siren]

yep, you can use infinitedex to find custom sprites if you are looking to make some entries though :)

[lapis cosmos]

Thanks for the tip. Yeah I was going to keep at the wild pokemon w/o entries

[ivory pewter]

It uses the flame on its tail to light fires that drive Pokémon away from their nests. Once the parents are far enough away from the nest, it swiftly closes in to steal any eggs.

@jagged ledge unless you have any comments on these last few put up, I think I've got all my entries set for the latest dexdoku. Will put up a grid in the event thread once they're all confirmed

[jagged ledge]

Sorry a little busy tonight, will give a proper look over soon 👍

[ivory pewter]

All good, take ur time

[round cave]

Expansion: Using its powerful claws, POKENAME knocks over trees. It then uses its saw-like fangs to quickly devour the tree's fruits and any small Pokémon residing in the tree.

[hexed fog]

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1Ntr8RvkAPBzw9R1E82dmzgyX8-eGymwojIwebrLCSOc/edit?gid=0#gid=0

The New Weekly DictionDex is out! Looking for inspiration on an entry? Here ya go! (sorry for the one day delay)

[round cave]

POKENAME's three heads respectively see the past, present, and future. The middle head often has to protect the other two from dangers happening in the moment.

[regal cedar]

POKENAME's unsettling amorphous appearance has raised concerns over what Unown is biologically composed of and if they or POKENAME could be harmful to humans over long-term exposure. So far, there is no solid evidence that it contains any toxins.

Not sure I feel satisfied with this one myself, hmm.

[hexed fog]

we are under 4700 wild entries!

in the next sprite pack it will jump up a bit but only because we are almost done spriting EVERY WILD POKEMON

imagine how nice itll feel if every wild pokemon is not only sprited, but has a fully custom dex entry

we can do thiiiiis!

[terse pawn]

do you know any Pokémon fan games how to make fan games Discord server

[round cave]

Here's an entry I came up with for this sprite I'm working on:
When POKENAME's outer shell broke, it formed a smaller celestial body. This smaller body orbits POKENAME, much like how planets orbit the Sun.

also @regal cedar, how do I do that thing with the dex entries attatched to sprites in the gallery?

[regal cedar]

Could you be more specific?

[round cave]

How do I add text like this to a message?

@regal cedar

[regal cedar]

Oh, use ` three times.

On each side.

[round cave]

Gotcha.

[hexed fog]

There's this one fangame called Pokemon Infinite Fusion that i know of. Funnily enough this is the pokedex discussion for that game. We can't help you make your own discord server.

[haughty nymph]

I wish I new of one

[timid sky]

Gotta love when you're trying to make an entry for a slowbro fusion without a Shellder and all of Slowbro's official dex entries talk about the shellder

[rich goblet]

Please let me know of any feedback you might have, going to submit these tomorrow 🙏

Oh, probs should ping @jagged ledge

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Water/Water
POKENAME lives lazily on the seafloor. Whenever POKENAME spots prey from below, it creates a whirlpool to drag the prey into its mouth. However, it will often forget what it was doing and space out, giving the prey a chance to escape.

[ivory pewter]

Feel like the kingler/squirtle one is saying "its opponent" a lot. Imo you can probably trim out one or 2 of those just to shake up the language a little

[rich goblet]

Good catch!

[ivory pewter]

Would also cut the "has" out from the first sentence on the froakie one

Really love the luvdisc/horsea one

[rich goblet]

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1B16l9FiLZu0IznaUQcTWxRj4Ku8ElMmuzIl-mKTyvsY/edit?usp=sharing

I forget I can just share this

It's under Rain Theme!

[rich goblet]

@jagged ledge When you have time, its under the Rain Theme tab! I appreciate you 🙏

[scenic shore]

Polilem #62.76 water/ground
POKENAME uses the small cracks in its outer crust to shoot directed water pulses at high speeds, if enough pressure is applied one of its many plates can shoot off dealing extra damage.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes

[jagged ledge]

I might recommend adding something about toxins or replace steam with bubbles to better fit the sprite, but the overall writing and formatting is good.

[jagged ledge]

I might throw a "near" before perfect just because it can hypothetically be defeated in battle, but that's not a hard call. Overall it looks good.

[jagged ledge]

Only one complaint: When you say 'snap' in this context, what do you visualize? I'm wondering if we could use a better verb or build more of a scene.

[jagged ledge]

Add a comma after aggressors and replace the following 'it' with POKENAME, because otherwise it sounds like you're saying the actions are attributed to the defense mechanism.

[jagged ledge]

Instead of saying "its head", say "a POKENAME's head" to signify that you're focusing on a singular after describing multiple in the previous sentence.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes, I am mildly concerned by the logic of the tail, but that's on the art, not the entry

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, I'm just wondering where this fits on the grid. Starter/Wild?

[jagged ledge]

There are a lot of 'it's in the second sentence that get a little confusing. I would say "Whenever POKENAME spots prey from below, it creates a whirlpool (etc)." Just to more directly give the position and communicate the perspective.

[hexed fog]

I'm so happy to see all these entries

[jagged ledge]

Luvdisc/Horsea: You need an 's' at the end of "help it feel safe at sea"

[hexed fog]

[jagged ledge]

Same! I hope to write some more tonight as well

But I'm on the review job first

@rich goblet

You can trim this to say "pincers and swings them around to tire them out." Also an extra e after pincers in the second sentence

[jagged ledge]

The second half of the first sentence is a little poorly structured. Perhaps something like "radars, operating best when fully hydrated." Or something similar. Basically let's try to make the end of sentence a closing detail, not a second clause. Just to be sure the second sentence stays fresh when it's introduced.

I'm a little confused by this. How can the opponent be covered in bubbles if only some of the bubbles stick? Would it be overwhelmed by bubbles or surrounded with bubbles?

Overall most of the entries look good, they just might need a few more less obvious grammar tweaks that I don't have the full brain capacity for at the moment

[hexed fog]

@edgy fiber please remember to write POKENAME when referring to the pokemon you are writing about ❤️

[edgy fiber]

yeah i realized ha after

[hexed fog]

Alright kiddos, everything up to today (except the ones submitted after i started) are done!

[lapis cosmos]

Hopefully not one of the plates its eyes are on! (great entry!)

[ivory pewter]

Starter/wild yeah. Will get to these when I get home. Thx for the notes as always

[hexed fog]

Dont panic about 413.23.png not getting approved, we are trying to see if it was a removed sprite or not so we are keeping it until the next patch

loving your entries btw 😄 keep it up

[lapis cosmos]

No worries at all! If it ends up not making it in oh well!

And thanks, I will! It has been a lot of fun. I've been in a writing slump and being on spring break from teaching meant I got to have some creative writing time (which means now that I'm headed back in to work my number of entries will slow down!)

[jagged ledge]

Of course, always happy to help! Great work as always! I had significantly less notes this round

[clear hollow]

These Pokémon love sunbathing as the way to gather energy, which they convert into electricity and unleash on their foes through the tips of their vine-like tails. Some people keep POKENAME as pets who serve their trainers as living sun batteries.

Does this sound fine?

It is a master of temperature manipulation, whose shell is made of ice, while its core burns hotter than magma. When the inside of its shell melts and boils, POKENAME erupts with the accumulated steam, which freezes into snow upon being released.

This too, please

[timid sky]

The word snap comes from Prinplup's official dex entries. From the wording, I'd imagine it'd be something like breaking the tree in half

[timid sky]

I've changed the entry

[jagged ledge]

Yes, in the context of the "wicked blows", so it's the description of the attack, not the solitary action.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes

[rich goblet]

@jagged ledge Thanks for giving me tips, do you have any others before I submit? 😄

[hexed fog]

Tip: I WANT MOAR

[jagged ledge]

Uh double check some grammar here and there. Like I said, nothing immediately obviously glaring, but some of your clause structure (like the this, and that parts) feel a little off at times. Like not wrong wrong, just a little confusing.

[rich goblet]

Will do!

[jagged ledge]

👍

[timid sky]

I'd say you do it, but you clearly don't need those instructions

[timid sky]

So should I change it to something like "Though its wings are small, they can deliver wicked blows strong enough to snap even the thickest of trees"?

[timid sky]

While I’m waiting for an answer here…

@jagged ledge dexdoku Gen 4+/water
If the weather is not cold enough for POKENAME's liking, it will go on a rampage, destroying everything in its path. To prevent this, people will often guide POKENAME to snowy mountains as spring draws near.

[jagged ledge]

Something like that, yeah.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes

[timid sky]

I've already submitted this one, so could you edit it pretty please

[regal cedar]

Sure, which Dex # is this?

[timid sky]

323.370

[scenic shore]

how are the dex entries added to the game?

[timid sky]

You submit them via the form found in #dex-entries-submissions and an unkown will review your entry and determine whether it meets the criteria for being in-game

[scenic shore]

ok cool

[jagged ledge]

Then the developer takes the big file of Approved entries and imports them into the game during various updates, fixes, or check-ins.

[hexed fog]

@compact cape please only submit entries for sprites in the game. A full list of the rules for this are listed in the pin on this page

[hexed fog]

we should be good on everything up until about an hour ago

except my entries

(but like we all know that)

[lapis cosmos]

Entry looking for feedback:
Lapto #131.132
Rumor says that wild POKENAME are the result of overzealous breeding of Lapras and Ditto to restore the population of the former. While not confirmed, scientists have begun studying POKENAME to understand the effect of breeding practices on Ditto.

[small nest]

Good job not giving a definite origin for the fusion, it's a neat combination of the canon entries for the components as well!
I would probably shorten the entry a little (maybe drop the second sentence) to make room for a sentence describing the actual fusion, not just its origins. I want to know how this little guy spends its days, or what it eats, or how it acts!

[lapis cosmos]

Rumor says that wild POKENAME are mishaps during overzealous breeding of Lapras and Ditto to restore the Lapras population. POKENAME awkwardly bobs along in the sea cooing to attract a friend.

[hexed fog]

I'd still rule FAQ 16

sorry :/

[lapis cosmos]

No worries. Thought the rumor kept it vague enough but makes sense!

Releasing Lapto!

[hexed fog]

I understand where you are coming with the origins but the line is paper thin on it

best to avoid it entirely imo

[knotty yoke]

honestly if you enter better hope theres a specific person not reviewing it lmfao

[stuck shoal]

98.404.png
"POKENAME bury themselves in wet dirt and sand, protecting their soft underside. If anything moves near one's claw, it'll be grabbed and dragged into POKENAME's shell to either be eaten or discarded."

[restive harness]

haven't made a custom dex entry thus far but here's a stab at it
Minitomb #449.295
Some say Spiritomb can accidentally be bound to a Minior instead of an odd keystone, resulting in POKENAME. Meteors float around its swirling body, eventually forming into new Minior.

[round cave]

The S in Spiritomb should be capital

[timid sky]

@literallyanyoneotherthenwildheartrazorfangs not dexdoku April/Fools
POKENAME often charges into fights recklessly, but it always makes it out in one piece. POKENAME's stretchy punches are the bane of its enemies.

[small nest]

Clever I see no problems

[urban drum]

.. say that again?

[small nest]

I would remove the bit about other Minior in the vortex, since that would mean that the "body" Minior is MASSIVE for some reason
I would also slightly reword the first sentence:
Some say that Spiritomb can accidentally be bound to a Minior instead of an Odd Keystone, resulting in POKENAME.
Even that does skate pretty close to the line - perhaps another Unown will chime in.

[timid sky]

That again?

[small nest]

I would switch to singular tense to make the entry clearer:
POKENAME buries itself in wet dirt and sand, protecting its soft underside. Anything that gets near its protruding claw will be grabbed and dragged into POKENAME's shell, to either be eaten or discarded.

[restive harness]

i put "meteors float around its swirling body, eventually forming into new minior" instead, would that help with the context of tiny minior?
also reworded the first sentence like you suggested

[stuck shoal]

I try to keep Pokemon species as they/them while legendaries get it/its, I'll probably try to make it more species related

[small nest]

Yes, looks great!

[small nest]

Most official dex entries just use it/it's regardless of the species, but it's up to you. The beginning of the second sentence is just a little unclear as it stands.

[jagged ledge]

https://tenor.com/view/wait-what-meme-wait-a-minute-gif-14484132

[timid sky]

I originally just had the entry, but I'd thought it'd be funnier to add the dexdoku format

[jagged ledge]

See the extra funny thing is that I wrote the entry for the pre-evolution, so it all comes full circle

[regal cedar]

I completely forgot Talonflame preys on other bird Pokémon.

[rich goblet]

482.179.png Its tuffs of fur used to be spun a Fluffy Tail, but nowadays it is spun into yarn for elderly folk. It sheds fur constantly, so much so that the fur can be reliably spun into yarn.
271.251.png Sometimes, whenever it launches a flurry of razor sharp leaves, it leaves behind a Leaf Letter. Where it comes from or how it got there is a mystery.

@regal cedar Can I ask a faaaaaavor

I need a quick check on these two

Esp. since I've been out the loop because ZOH MY GOD JOB HUNTING

[regal cedar]

Same.

[rich goblet]

oh dang

Sorry to hear that ^^" Maybe I should have pinged all the unowns

[regal cedar]

Let's see.

tuffs should be tufts.

[rich goblet]

--

[warped panther]

TakeRep <User:User> [Num:Whole number]

Invalid arguments provided: Not enough arguments passed

[rich goblet]

I've been mispelling that a long time

[regal cedar]

"Used to be spun a"

Should be something like... "used to be used in spinning a" or "was originally used in the process of creating a" or "was used in spinning a"

The second sentence feels a bit repetitive but it is related to the first sentence. One of those things that is technically OK but, eh. Maybe it should be the first sentence instead?

[regal cedar]

In the second one, it seems odd to mention "where it comes from" considering it presumably came with the leaf-based attack. I guess it's not incorrect, though. I would be more wondering in how it was written in the first place!

[rich goblet]

And now I can say the DictionDex is DONE! At least that one

[clear hollow]

POKENAME stacks berries it finds on top of its head, saving them for later, and thanks to its perfect sense of balance, they never fall off. It uses future sight to predict when its trainer or offspring will get hungry to offer them food.
For elusive dex, please lemme know if I should change something

[ebon warren]

This is actually not a bad rule of thumb, just make sure that none of the entries read as applying only to the singular example, but broadly for all members of the species.
And always make sure you maintain plurality throughout each entry. I have said this so many times people are probably tired of hearing it, but it's still valid

[gilded apex]

what dex entry is gible in the game??

cuz it aint what it normally is

[ebon warren]

Go to the link in this message and search it
#1110705913574203402 message

[ebon warren]

This site in the message also works
#1170955211922223205 message

[quasi kindle]

This might be a stupid question, but my submissions keep being marked in light read. I've checked the colour codes, which said that it means a formatting error, but I cannot for the life of me understand which error I'm making. Would like to learn what to do differently to ease the workload on the Unowns. Here's an example of a entry marked light red: "POKENAME stealthily hunt down those who have hunted DONPHAN, often visiting them in the middle of the night. The tusks are the only corporal parts of POKENAME, making them as deadly as their threatened kindred"

[timid sky]

Do you have a period at the end of the second sentence

[quasi kindle]

No, do you think that's it?

[timid sky]

Probably

[quasi kindle]

Seems likely, thanks!

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku wild Pokémon/water
Cautious in the extreme, POKENAME listens for danger even while it is asleep. If it hears even the slightest disturbance, POKENAME will blast water from its mouth at high velocity to scare off potential predators.

Also, it's been a while since new entries were added in game

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes!

[regal cedar]

Apparently I've never done a Gardevoir entry before, which...feels wrong.

Or Grovyle, who is literally like, in my top 10 pokemon. How.

I could've sworn I did a Mantyke, but apparently all of the ones I've done is for Mantine.

[timid sky]

Sounds to me like there's only one solution here

https://tenor.com/view/cat-typing-work-intense-gif-1412583198801730007

[short dagger]

Ik this isn’t Pokémon fusion , but it is Pokémon ultimate fusion and I’ve fucking grinded to get to this , feels awesome lmao

[toxic umbra]

deep in the frigid mountains Raycuno lays in slumber, surrounded by the stiff statues of trainers who had dared tried challenging it

this is easier than i thought

[hexed fog]

This channel is for creating and judging pokedex entries for the game 🙂

[craggy beacon]

wrong chat my man

LOL

[ivory pewter]

The seaweed-like tendrils on POKENAME release a paralyzing poison upon contact. Prey caught in these tentacles are dragged to the ocean floor where they have their vitality drained.

[lapis cosmos]

Nice! I need to get some Tcruel ones done (one of my faves)

[regal cedar]

sounds standard and good

[ivory pewter]

A POKENAME's brain is so small that it is unaware of its own strength. It will often not even notice the destruction it has wrought with its headbutts.

A faint whirring noise can be constantly heard from POKENAME generating electricity inside its shell. It discharges this electricity as incredibly devastating lightning bolts when it needs to defend itself.

[daring coral]

I just noticed that one of the evos in my favorite fusion line doesn't have an entry

A POKENAME is known for using their tail as a lightning rod to gather energy for its attacks. Despite not yet having grown its wings, POKENAME will still find ways to get into the air to try and glide

What do yall think?

[ivory pewter]

Its steel shell houses an ever-growing mass of vines. The toughness of its body and regenerative capabilities of these vines make it nearly impossible to defeat.

Decided to finally put together an entry for a sprite I made

POKENAME's metal exterior contracts when it is about to release a powerful explosion. Unfortunately, being close enough to see this means you will be unable to escape the blast radius in time.
```.

& another one

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Starter Pokémon/Gen 4+:
POKENAME seeks out strong opponents and challenges them with its unique style of martial arts. Should it best its opponent, POKENAME will freeze them and take them back to its den as a trophy.

[jagged ledge]

Martial arts for starters

[jagged ledge]

Ok so I think it makes sense as a Fighting type/Froslass fusion, but not so much an Infernape/Froslass fusion if that makes sense?

[timid sky]

Thing is, most of Infernnape's talk about it having a unique style of martial arts

[jagged ledge]

Yes, but also in terms of a fiery passion, and more in terms of the way it moves and the energy, not usually in the fascination of the opponent. And I understand the logic of a Froslass freezing, but when the sprite is actively on fire, it's hard to picture.

[timid sky]

Fair

These two are hard to come up with a dex entry for

[jagged ledge]

It's an overall good entry, it just reads more as Hawlucha/Froslass for example

[timid sky]

(Shame Hawlucha isn't a starter Pokémon)

[jagged ledge]

Yeah, sorry lol

[timid sky]

Back to the drawing board I guess

[jagged ledge]

Uh did you do Middle/Gen 4 yet? Could be Machoke/Froslass

Wait no custom sprite

Nevermind

[timid sky]

Since you bring it up though, I'm submitting this as a Hawlucha and Froslass entry

You can't stop me

[jagged ledge]

Sounds good. 👍

[timid sky]

If I had a nickel for every time I've made a dex entry for one fusion that ended up fitting another fusion better, I'd have 2 nickels. Which isn't a lot but it's weird that it happened twice

[jagged ledge]

Hey it happens to everyone, it's alright

[outer ember]

absolute cinema

[rich goblet]

Everytime I see someone mention the 108 spirits wrong I shiver.

[regal cedar]

apparently i haven't done dugtrio next and considering i have SEVERAL diglett entries and at least one that mentions its evolution im surprised

[regal cedar]

Omastar
Marowak
Cubone
Graveler
poliwhirl
Dugtrio

Are the gen 1 mons I still haven't done

and despite literally it being in some of my favorites i haven't done wooper yet?????

[small nest]

very good, too much skull for there to be much brain. I like this a lot.

[small nest]

Good! The "heard from" bit is perhaps a tad clunky, but that's a nitpick.

[small nest]

Remember to keep entries either entirely singular, or entirely plural. (their vs. its). You should also get rid of the "A" in front of "POKENAME" - having it there makes it seem like you're saying just one specific POKENAME is known for something.

Remember the period at the end as well! Neat concepts!

[small nest]

That's a great sprite, and the entry looks good too!

[small nest]

Terrifying concept, just seeing the metal plates click inward.

[small nest]

Personally I think this one is fine - FAQ 18 says we're allowed to give fusions abilities that aren't backed up mechanically, and FAQ 4 similarly says that Pokémon can have powers they can't use in-game. Infernape is a Fighting-type, so I think any Infernape fusion using martial arts is fine. After all, Froslass/Infernape (the Ice/Ghost) type using fire is explicitly allowed.

[dark aurora]

POKENAME's uses the shed skin of wild paras to restore its disguise, its fear of spinirak, keeps it in its disguise pretty much all day and night
```.

I'm doing a paras run....

[dark aurora]

Love it

[regal cedar]

Gotta do a Zoroark and Lycanroc fusion as a Stantler predator, but which, hmm

Noo

rip no poll

which of these four as one that hunts stantler

[misty sleet]

I like the third one

[ivory pewter]

I'd say 4th

[ivory pewter]

It drains the opponent's will to fight while in combat, fueling its own fire. At the height of a battle, its flames become uncontrollable and can be felt from a distance.

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME ambushes prey from the treetops, sinking its teeth in to inflict harsh wounds. If one of its targets tries to escape, it will relentlessly pursue them with astonishing speed.

[regal cedar]

👍

[dark aurora]

Love it!

[hexed fog]

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1Ntr8RvkAPBzw9R1E82dmzgyX8-eGymwojIwebrLCSOc/edit?gid=0#gid=0

Week 4/4 of the DictionDex is officially up!
Expand your mind and entries with these words!

[hexed fog]

Went through a bunch of entries today. More tomorrow

Keep it up 😄 I'm loving all your stuff

[sudden oasis]

Is this the spot for dex entrie ideas?

[hexed fog]

Yup and if you follow the guide in the pins you can even contribute entries to the game

[dark aurora]

Oh dude I have plenty of ideas! send help

[dark aurora]

POKENAME waits under the ice and snow for weak bugs. It uses its ice horn to mash the bugs and consume them.

[cunning sluice]

Can you even mash something with a horn? You can definitely skewer bugs with it

or stab

[hexed fog]

I don't see why not, it has a blunt portion

[regal cedar]

I do agree it is a bit odd for a horn function, though. But yeah, the idea is still fine.

[dark aurora]

Yea I need to redo it bc I can't see it working anymore

POKENAME waits under the ice and snow for weak bugs. It uses its ice horn to sense vibrations to hunt.

[small nest]

Grammar check:
POKENAME uses the shed skin of wild Paras to restore its disguise. Its fear of Spinarak keeps it in its disguise all day and night.
I would also flesh out the first sentence a little more:
POKENAME uses the shed skin of wild Paras to repair holes in its own exoskeleton. Fearing wild Spinarak, it carefully mimics a Paras around the clock.

[small nest]

I would specify a distance that the flames can be felt at! and their heat can be felt from tens of feet away or something similar, perhaps?

[dark aurora]

Thx!

[ivory pewter]

I did consider giving it a specific range, but it felt like it would've made the language kinda clunky

[small nest]

I get where you're coming from. I just thought "can't most flames be felt from some distance away?"

[ivory pewter]

I'll try & think of some way to tweak

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku water/middle evolution:

POKENAME uses its control over the boundaries of space to project its singing across dimensions. When it inflates itself, POKENAME can make then sound of its voice travel even farther.

[jagged ledge]

*heard, not herd. But also maybe rephrase to "Project its voice across dimensions"? Either way I do like the concept

[timid sky]

There, I changed it to "project its singing" since I wanted to make it clear that it's signing across dimensions (even though the sprite would make the singing part obvious)

[boreal canyon]

thanks

[boreal canyon]

for the third one, it's a fusion inspired by the myth of the beast of gevaudan, so if you want to use it for a stantler hunter, maybe look at the beast of gevaudan story first ;)

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Gen 4+/Middle evo

POKENAME gather under a full moon and freeze the atmosphere around them to create a diamond-dust flurry. The sight of diamond-dust glittering in the moonlight is said to be so beautiful that anyone who sees it will be eternally happy.

[jagged ledge]

I think you can drop the "will" at the beginning, but otherwise looks good.

[timid sky]

So I just realized that I forgot to put the 'a' in the filename for my april fools Luffy entry

Could one of the Unown's change that for me please

320.355.png to 320.355a.png

[regal cedar]

All changed for ya!

[round cave]

Here's a sprite I made for an Elusive Dex event (and won) that's now in the game, here's the entry:
POKENAME frequently practices a cheer routine using pom-poms made of seafoam. It squirts pitch-black ink from its mouth for more dramatic entrances and exits.

[regal cedar]

Hi chat!

For today's warmup, please write an entry for:

https://www.fusiondex.org/sprite/pif/250.361/

[last ice]

"POKENAME loves to entertain Pokémon and humans alike with the glimmering displays it creates from its body. If its hair is ever ruined, POKENAME will become enraged and not perform for weeks at a time."

[clear hollow]

POKENAME shows its caring nature towards any wild Pokémon in need, providing them with a shelter and healing their wounds with its psychic powers. It dislikes humans though, and will turn any trainer who disturbs its peace into a Tepig or Spoink.

[timid sky]

Maybe if it turns enough people into Spoink and Tepig we’ll get them in IF

[untold schooner]

''POKENAME dazzles with rainbow wings and a blazing roar, turning every battle into a performance. Those who witness its shimmering feathers often believe fortune will follow.''

[lapis cosmos]

Some of the hardest dex entries for me are when the fusion is very clearly the two Pokemon, such as this one I'm seeking feedback on:
Joltik Golett 412.416.png
The Joltik enhances the symbiotic POKENAME’s energy with its electricity. The POKENAME seeks out energy sources to absorb on its never-ending journey.

[elder pike]

"In the wild, POKENAME can be found preening their brilliant crown feathers and practicing their vocal calls. If its body becomes dirtied, it will frantically groom itself until its scales and feathers shine."

Swirsaur, the Seed Candy pokemon (Swirlix/Venusaur): At festivals and carnivals, children and adults alike will gather to enjoy the cotton candy it produces from the container on its back. Its poisonous nature can leave some with a stomachache, however.

Cumeleon, the Flame Lonely pokemon (Charmeleon/Cubone): The harsh environments that POKENAME live in will often take the lives of many of its species. Those that survive will gather their bones and fashion protection and weaponry to overcome the deadly odds.

Polichu, the Mouse Tadpole pokemon (Poliwag/Pikachu): Its tiny ears can sometimes be seen breeching the waters of ponds and lakes, using them like antennas to sense nearby food or danger. It will dart away rapidly if startled.

Lopchu, the Mouse Rabbit pokemon (Lopunny/Raichu): Using its tail, it will carve its warrens into hillsides and line them with wool and cotton stolen from other pokemon nearby. This is thought to promote a healthy static environment for its young.

[boreal canyon]

Anyone has any idea on how to phrase a dex suggesting it's in eternal panic because he's trying to escape the meteor that is coming ?

[elder pike]

Nidoslash, the Mouse Drill pokemon (Nidoqueen/Sandslash): Its massive claws are used to cleave into rotten wood and dirt in search of insects. Once it has had its fill, it will burrow into the ground and wait until the next night-time hunt.

[elder pike]

It is constantly under the stress of its approaching end. It doesn't realize that its own psychic powers are attracting the meteor towards it.

[boreal canyon]

Interesting, but I'll rewrite it a bit

[untold schooner]

Living in constant panic, it believes the meteor that wiped out its ancestors is still falling. Its stress triggers psychic waves it can't control.

[boreal canyon]

While suffering from visions of the meteor that wiped out the PokéFossils, it'll run in hopes of escaping the inevitable fall of the meteor. POKENAME doesn't realize that all of this is only an illusion made by its brain, so it'll run until the end.

What about this?

[regal cedar]

PokéFossils is not a proper term.

I don't even think we know that a meteor did it. In fact, some explicitly were not done in by that, like Omanyte/Star

Not to mention that it's likely some Pokémon revived by fossils lived in completely different time periods from one another, like real fossils.

[lapis cosmos]

It could also just be that it is in panic because it thinks imminent disaster is approaching in general, such as a meteor, rather than any definites.

[untold schooner]

Rairantis, the Shocking Mantis (Raichu/Lurantis)

some suggestions:

1. It lures prey with its dazzling form, only to paralyze them with pinpoint shocks. None escape its floral blades.

2.It dominates entire fields with its electric blades, cutting and shocking with strategic cruelty. Its gaze sparkles with a thirst for control.

3.It absorbs sunlight with its petals to recharge energy. It often dances in the breeze, releasing gentle sparks that mesmerize onlookers.

[round cave]

POKENAME evolves when exposed to energy from various stones. When this happens, its shell takes on the texture of the stone that made POKENAME evolve.

(for context, Eestar is part of a series of Eeveelution/Omastar sprites I made)

[tall marsh]

Looks good

[proven blade]

if i want to use a pokemons name, but attribute something to it, would i do POKENAME's or is there something else i should do?

[round cave]

Yes you'd type POKENAME's.

[proven blade]

nice, also, with the referencing to media stuff, can i reference real world weapons as something to equate to the damage a Pokémon could do?, for an example i'm working on a Koffing mixed with a fire type, and i want to compare it to a Molotov cocktail.

my worry is if that would be either to violent, or break the cannon of refrencing stuff

[timid sky]

So according to Turtwig's Diamond and Brillant Diamond entries, the shell on its back hardens when it drinks water. But according to its Platinum and Gen 5 entries, the shell feels moist if the Turtwig is healthy. Sooooo... does that mean it's healthier when it doesn't drink water?

[regal cedar]

Why not both? Something can feel hard and moist.

I don't see the contradiction.

[timid sky]

I think of the dirt being softer when it's moist. Maybe that's just me though

@jagged ledge dexdoku Wild Pokémon/Starter Pokémon:

If POKENAME is interrupted while photosynthesizing, it will mercilessly peck the offender until they leave. Since POKENAME's body temperature increases during photosynthesis, these pecks often cause burns.

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes 👍

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku wild Pokémon/Middle evolution:

Kind people who enter forests are often followed by a flock of POKENAME. If anyone tries to attack the person whom they follow, the offender will be quickly covered in sand.

[lapis cosmos]

Ack! Sorry for all the apostrophe issues in my last batch. Was being so conscious of that and then yesterday that flew out of my brain.

[runic blade]

never change any of this

idc if it's not grammatically correct

[raven anvil]

Weed Cat hates the ground

[boreal canyon]

ok, after a new read, i like it, but i'll rephrase it a bit to fit more what i have in mind

[boreal canyon]

POKENAME is haunted by the echoing memory of the meteor that struck the world 100 million years ago. The stress triggered from this everlasting echo result in the emission of uncontrolled, overwhelming psychic waves.

[hexed fog]

If this autogend it will be changed eventually:(

[timid sky]

You could reword this entry

[raven beacon]

https://www.fusiondex.org/92.102/ Gascute, the Gas Egg Pokemon (Gastly/Exeggscute)

Missing it's former life, POKENAME stays near it's egg-like body at all costs. It tries in vain to call out to Exeggcutes.

[wheat ore]

i got one for swipede but i cant get a picture of it

screw it, Swipede is commonly mistaken as a swinub, when a trainer approaches swipede will either freeze or poison them depending on their mood.

[timid sky]

?tag calcs

[upper loom]

https://infinitefusiondex.com/: Good for looking at stats, locations, movesets, and type matchups, as well as looking at the inverse fusions side-by-side.

https://www.fusiondex.org/: Good for looking at sprites and fusion names. Also includes stats, but no comparisons.

[timid sky]

Also, you should use POKENAME in place of the Pokémon’s name

[wheat ore]

My bad, new to this

[regal cedar]

I reccomend looking at priorly accepted POKEDEX entries and checking the pins

[past sonnet]

The form says to write the exact file name as it's displayed on that website, but I don't exactly see a filename and I don't want to mess it up. Is it the part on the bottom left of this section? https://i.imgur.com/R7bj9zZ.png

and I'll guess I'll put what I wrote just for free review purposes while I'm at it (bc I've done writing but never written a dex entry before)

A POKENAME's control over time lies dormant in the ravines stitched across its legs, innately used to accelerate its manipulation of rocks. It only takes one to turn any sandstorm into a destructive tornado of sharp boulders.

thinking of maybe cutting out "innately" bc it makes it a tad too wordy but I like the extra flavor of the time control being an innate enhancement

[regal cedar]

Filename is that thing in the bottom right, minus the pound symbol, plus .png
so
464.343.png
is the filename

[past sonnet]

ok that's what I figured, nice

I just didn't wanna mess up because the example had a b in the filename and lycanroc has variants

[lapis cosmos]

I believe each variant has a different dex entry, so you’d want to use the file name with a “b” if you want that variant for your entry

[past sonnet]

oh like variants for different entries for the same fusion?

[lapis cosmos]

Yes. Since the sprites vary so much, so can the entries.

[past sonnet]

so if there's no other entries then I was fine to submit it as 464.343.png?

[lapis cosmos]

For example (can post them when at my computer) I made two slightly different entries for the Parasect/Pinsir fusion since one looked more alive (for lack of a better term) and the other more zombified

[lapis cosmos]

Yes

[trim blaze]

how will i know if my entry is approved or added

[jagged ledge]

We have a spreadsheet where you can review the submissions to see what's been approved

It's on the same channel as the submissions form

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/365.236/

POKENAME instinctually seeks out a master to train with. The position is unenviable, as they are known to be demanding, capricious students with little control over the fire on their body.

doing a nuzlocke and wanted to get dex entries in for some of the cooler fusions i come across

[jagged ledge]

Always a good method

[jagged ledge]

I would remove the s at the end of seeks because your second sentence refers to the species in the plural. It looks mostly good, but either clarifying that the "master" is a different species or adjusting the introduction to the second might help connect the dots a bit more evenly.

[dense meteor]

good suggestions ty 🙏

[jagged ledge]

I feel like you might also want to replace the "they" in the second sentence with POKENAME to clarify that "the position" refers back to the mentioning of the "master", but that depends on how you fix the intro.

[jagged ledge]

No problem, happy to help!

[trim blaze]

when do they usually get approved

[jagged ledge]

When Unowns like me read through them and make sure they fit the standards. It can take time depending on who's available and how many there are to get through.

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/311.501/

POKENAME floats through the ocean depths, relying on its paralyzing stare to immobilize prey. Strangely enough, POKENAME is blind; the eye sockets lead directly to its stomach.

[trim blaze]

POKENAME stores highly pressurized water in the massive bloom atop its head, releasing it in explosive bursts when threatened. Its cheerful appearance belies the destructive force it can unleash.

https://www.fusiondex.org/9.45/

[dense meteor]

I'm wondering if it reads as making sense that the firey stuff in it's left eye isn't like, a physical thing you could bump into

oo I like that one

[trim blaze]

POKENAME has an armor-like cocoon body that deflects most attacks, all while its powerful arms deliver crushing blows. It meditates in stillness for days, storing energy for devastating bursts of strength.

https://www.fusiondex.org/11.68/

[lapis cosmos]

Maybe instead of “strangely enough” instead something like “despite the red glow looking like an eye” or such

[untold schooner]

hey guys, send some suggestion to try a dex description

[lapis cosmos]

@past sonnet Here's what I was mentioning before with entries for different sprites:

Parasir #47.127
When POKENAME is a symbiotic relationship between bug and mushroom, the mushroom suppresses pain in the bug during combat so it can focus. Later, the bug takes great care to clean the mushroom while the fungus secretes a soothing salve for the bug.

Parasir #47.127a
When POKENAME is a host-parasite relationship, the mushroom drains the bug except to leave it strong enough to topple trees with its horns. Regardless of the damage to the host, POKENAME will only stop fighting if the mushroom becomes unattached.

[past sonnet]

ohh ok, good to know

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/183.365/

In many homes, POKENAME occupies a role somewhere between pet and decoration. Its flame is mostly harmless, producing only a pleasant glow and gentle warmth.

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/397.129/
POKENAME's steel bodies are quite susceptible to rust; a rather unfortunate trait for a fish. They would likely be extinct if not for their fast rate of reproduction.

[lapis cosmos]

Love this! But slight recommendation for lessening words is to put “Unfortunately,” first and cut the fish comment (the entry is clever and I feel it detracts from your naturally good joke). Personal preference

[dense meteor]

that is punchier for sure

[trim blaze]

POKENAME lurks in moonlit forests, its haunting presence causing deep sleep and vivid nightmares. The luminous bloom on its back pulses with dark energy, feeding on the fears of those who dare approach.https://www.fusiondex.org/347.3/

[half rune]

The flames appear to be unstable, as if touching them could endanger one's very existence.

Oddly, Porygon-Z has taken on the appearance of a zip folder. Nobody knows what happens when it unzips. It is rumored to contain a dangerous computer virus.

It is rumored that a Porygon-Z took this form to scare off a Darkrai. It worked, and Porygon-Z chose to remain in this form to keep Darkrai from returning.

[terse pawn]

Curious why would Darkrai bother with Porygon z

[timid sky]

@jagged ledge dexdoku Gen 4+/Starter Pokémon:

POKENAME's favorite food is the souls of talented martial artists. In order to retrieve its meal, POKENAME will best them using its fiery punches and then burn their bodies until only the soul remains.

[jagged ledge]

Uh burning bodies away might be a bit far. Perhaps you could say something like "fights them to a standstill, draining their soul to fuel its flame."? Or something like that?

[timid sky]

Honestly, I did kind of want to say something about the souls fueling its fire, but I was worried that might be more Chandelureesk

[timid sky]

While I try and rework this, have you seen my Togetic/Pidgey?

[regal cedar]

I do generally think the 'burn til the soul remains' works, although I do wonder how else to word it, hmm

[timid sky]

Take 2:
POKENAME's favorite food is the souls of talented martial artists. In order to retrieve its meal, POKENAME will face them in hand to hand combat, using fiery punches to best its opponent. Every strike POKENAME makes serves to drain part of the soul.

Side note, I'm never doing a dex entry for a fusion of a fire and ice type again

[regal cedar]

Haha, it can be a thing.

Water and fire makes steam, so you can do something there, but, yeah.

Fog?

I just go for lore.

I know I did a Frosslass/Chandelure I liked.

[jagged ledge]

I have in passing, I'll go read it properly now.

[timid sky]

Hold on, I’ll repost it

Kind people who enter forests are often followed by a flock of POKENAME. If anyone tries to attack the person whom they follow, the offender will be quickly covered in sand.

[jagged ledge]

I would replace "covered in sand" with "pelted with twigs" or something similar. Even if Pidgey learns Sand Attack, you specifically state that this is within a forest biome.

[jagged ledge]

I think that looks good. 👍

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/400.397/

POKENAME can be found living a parasitic lifestyle on tree trunks, with the organic matter of the bark fueling small boilers within POKENAME. Scientists still debate the biological purpose of POKENAME's ceaseless turning.

[jagged ledge]

Three quick questions, but they're kinda nitpicky, especially the third one.

1. How does it attach to trees/drain the trees?
2. Where are the boilers? Do they fuel the turning?
3. This might be me misreading the perspective of the sprite, but does the bud interfere with the turning at all?

[dense meteor]

I was thinking it attaches by tiny spikes on the back of the gear centers, boilers would be in the center, and yeah was thinking the implication was that they fuel the turning

alternatively they could use the bud as more of an attach point, two birds one stone

[jagged ledge]

Up to you, I just wanted to clarify. Overall it's a good scene, it just needs a bit more clarity and direct communication. Maybe instead of saying "Living a parasitic lifestyle on tree trunks", say something like "leeching off of tree trunks with (x)"

[dense meteor]

that is a little clearer I'll do that

[jagged ledge]

👍

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/451.422/

POKENAME's soft, cuddly fur is actually made up of bristles that secrete a painful poison. POKENAME is a leading cause of pediatric emergency room visits.

Wondering if this would read as a little less dark if I changed it to urgent care, trying to balance keeping the central joke playing on the inherent meanness of a poisonous teddybear without implying a bunch of dead kids

[jagged ledge]

You could minimize the impact and character count by just saying "doctor"

[regal cedar]

Hi everyone! For today's warmup, please look at the Fairy/Fire type Clefpix!

https://www.fusiondex.org/35.37/

This is a fusion between Clefairy and Vulpix. If you'd like, try and write an entry about it!

There's plenty of topics to choose from. Is more nocturnal or diurnal? Does it have mystical powers? Can it float or fly? Think about its evolutions, too! Does it hold grudges? What about its tails? Any personality traits? Where does it live?

Take a crack at this Pokémon!

I'm pretty sure its evolutions are not written yet, too!

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/365.397/

POKENAME can be found floating eerily motionless in abandoned factories, dripping wax onto the floor. Somehow, it never completely melts away.

https://www.fusiondex.org/451.392/

While POKENAME is known to be personable, excitable, and supremely cuddly, its digging instinct and crushing jaws make it a poor choice of pet.

[timid sky]

Kind people who enter forests are often followed by a flock of POKENAME. If anyone tries to attack the person whom they follow, the offender will be pelted with twigs and anything else nearby that POKENAME can carry.

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/137.170/
POKENAME's antennae emit a peculiar magnetic field; scientists are unsure whether it serves as a cloaking device, a form of echolocation, or something else entirely. It seems particularly attracted to undersea internet cables.

[jagged ledge]

Character count? Just checking because of the additional part at the end.

[timid sky]

All good

[jagged ledge]

Maybe "or" instead of "and"?

[timid sky]

How about and/or

[jagged ledge]

I don't think that would fit dex format

[jagged ledge]

The thing about saying "twigs and anything else", that implies it's in addition to twigs. Saying "twigs or anything else" clarifies that they might scrounge for alternatives if they don't have twigs available.

[timid sky]

Alright, I'll do that then

And if that's all good, I should be done with this round of dexdoku

Can't believe I completed two grids this time

[dense meteor]

maybe we have been too harsh towards the auto-spliced descriptions

[timid sky]

Auto Gen entries can be funny sometimes

If you find an auto Gen entry that you like, I’d recommend trying to reword it and submit it to #dex-entries-submissions

[jagged ledge]

Auto-Splice. Big difference. We don't like Auto gen here.

[timid sky]

Ah yes

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/302153478556352513/1337203736119873636/giphy.gif

[jagged ledge]

You say that and yet there are still a few stragglers

[small nest]

Plenty of room to flesh it out more!

[small nest]

Remember that this is a fusion, not just a Porygon-Z shapeshifting.

[regal cedar]

Most famously:

"It has the power to control time. Then it waits."

[timid sky]

If you can control time, then you can wait as much as you want, and still get things done on time

[small nest]

Occasionally I try to brainstorm ways to convert that one into an acceptable entry, but I can never seem to capture the brevity of the original

When surprised, POKENAME stops time and considers what to do. It sometimes forgets to restart time, waiting patiently until it eventually realizes its mistake.

[trim blaze]

yo

help

[regal cedar]

hmm?

[boreal canyon]

Reposting because i got no more feedback :3

POKENAME is haunted by the echoing memory of the meteor that struck the world 100 million years ago. The stress triggered from this everlasting echo result in the emission of uncontrolled, overwhelming psychic waves.

How's this looking ?

[jagged ledge]

I like the concept and it conveys the comedy in appropriate tone, I think this should be pretty good?

But you do need an s at the end of result

[boreal canyon]

POKENAME is haunted by the echoing memory of the meteor that struck the world 100 million years ago. The stress triggered from this everlasting echo results in the emission of uncontrolled, overwhelming psychic waves.

[jagged ledge]

👍

[boreal canyon]

i'll wait a bit for feedback (just in case), probably will post it at noon

[timid sky]

Which Pokémon should get a dex entry today?

[jagged ledge]

I'll be able to help you in DM's.

[lusty sinew]

how is this:
Formed when a fallen Shedinja merged with Tyranitar's armor, POKENAME roams silently. Nearly indestructible, it hides a fatal weakness on its back that few ever discover
pls give feedback🙂

and do i need some kind of authority to give submissions?

[small nest]

No authority needed, anyone can submit entries! We do have a rule that you can't be specific about a fusion's origin though.

[lusty sinew]

POKENAME walks silently through dim forests, ignoring all other life. Its empty shell never tires, never eats, and never blinks, yet its path always leads somewhere.
what about this one?

[small nest]

Eerie, I like it. Which fusion is this for?

[lusty sinew]

sheditar

but for some reason i can't put it in the submissions so can you do that

it one of the pokemno i got in my team or else i wouldn't ask

i made it shiny with debug

[jagged ledge]

What seems to be the issue with the submissions?

[lusty sinew]

it sais it in dutch because I live in Belgium

you are not authorized to post messages in this channel
i used google transalte so i don't know

[jagged ledge]

Oh! You need to click the Google form posted in the channel

[lusty sinew]

i see now

im blind

[jagged ledge]

It's alright! Glad we could sort it out!

[rugged socket]

How does this sound for Shuppet/Volpix?

When born, Shupix has only one small, flickering tail. It spends its early days feeding on negative emotions, and each time it witnesses an outburst of anger, its tail splits. With every new tail, its power and malice grow.

[hexed fog]

Theyre hatched :x

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/81.109/

POKENAME can found leisurely drifting around industrial zones in large cities, spewing toxic fumes in its wake. When it wanders into a residential area, property values plummet.

[dense meteor]

https://www.fusiondex.org/170.414/
POKENAME scours the ocean floor for food, eating whatever it can dig up with its tusks. Its body is capable of withstanding immense amounts of pressure.

https://www.fusiondex.org/171.415/

POKENAME spends its life wandering the ocean floor in search of fallen wailord corpses. When it finds one, it will feed for weeks, zealously defending its meal from all comers.

https://www.fusiondex.org/171.368/

Having grown into a formidable predator, POKENAME uses the appendage atop its head to lure prey to the bottom of the ocean. When a wailmer dives down to the depths, it is usually not seen again.

[jagged ledge]

I like the connections and theming, I just think the middle entry might need some work. Would replacing "comers" with "passersby" still fit the character count?

[dense meteor]

it would, but "passersby" implies that nobody else really wants the wailord corpse when it's the opposite, I meant more comers in this sort of connotation

not that there aren't still probably ways to make it clearer and more concise

[jagged ledge]

I'm not opposed to you proving me wrong, but please use the dictionary instead of AI.

How about "all rivals"?

[jagged ledge]

Thank you lol

[dense meteor]

rivals could work

but I still sorta think all comers best exemplfies the sort of deep sea thunderdome of real whalefalls lmao

[jagged ledge]

Hmm

Oh ok only 176 characters, we have room.

How about "Any who would take some for themselves?" A little more complicated, but a little more clear. But also in this case I do see the argument for leaving as is, so I will ask if the other <@&1210701164426039366> agree with leaving as is.

[dense meteor]

That does the job too, I'm preferring to leave it as is just because i find the phrase fun to use

plus the sprite image looks like he is squaring up which I find sort of awesome

[jagged ledge]

Fair, fair. As I said, I'm just asking for an extra opinion or two from the rest of the staff, but I do understand your logic.

[hollow nimbus]

Hi, hi
Just give me a moment to backread the situation to see what I'm assessing

[hollow nimbus]

POKENAME accidentally switches from plural to singular in your first sentence. Please try to choose between singular or plural in each entry.

[jagged ledge]

Thanks

[hollow nimbus]

The first letter of wailord needs to be capitalized since Pokémon species are treated as proper nouns.
For your last entry, I would personally rewrite the first part of the sentence into As a formidable predator, to keep the entry as non-reliant on other entries or prior knowledge as possible. wailmer also needs to be corrected to Wailmer. To avoid the last sentence seeming unrelated, I suggest adding Because of this, to the start of it.

Okay, I see the main concern was about the usage of the word comers.

A quick search defines comers as "A person who arrives somewhere", so I don't see any problems with it.

[jagged ledge]

Yeah, also "all comers" to describe like competitors and things

But I do appreciate the full proper reviews for things I missed

[dense meteor]

🫡good edits ty, i am sorta wondering how to rephrase the first one considering “Steve can found leisurely drifting around industrial zones in large cities, spewing toxic fumes in his wake” is all singular even if the cities are plural

[round cave]

For the current Elusive Dex, I think I'll do a sprite in addition to #1360042825047212102, but here's my entry:
POKENAME is made of three Belmite joined together by magnets. This Pokémon is very rare, as two Belmite joining causes them to fuse into a Metmite.

[lusty sinew]

In still water, POKENAME's reflection sometimes ripples without cause. Trainers report feeling watched, even when its eyes are closed or hidden by the bloom.
this is for a parasect kingdra fusion
pls give feedback😆

[lusty sinew]

if youre entry gets approved will you be notified and when will it then come to the game

[regal cedar]

No, you're not notified, but you can see if it's been accepted on the sheet. There is no timeframe of when it gets added to the game, but they're usually added in bulk, but they're done by frog, so it could be whenever.

[small nest]

Here's the general process:

• An author submits an entry using the form in #dex-entries-submissions.
• The form adds the entry to the submissions sheet, which anyone can view.
• People with the Unown role review the entries for grammar, lore, style, etc. Depending on how many of us are active, this can take hours, days, or weeks.
• Periodically, Frog adds the newly approved entries to the game. This happens every couple of weeks to a month or so.
  We don't notify people about approvals and there's no announcement about the new additions, but you can look at the sheet to see if your entry has been reviewed or approved yet.

[lusty sinew]

ty

[boreal canyon]

but if something is wrong, you'll usually will be @

[jagged ledge]

Congrats to @ivory pewter for winning the April Showers Dexdoku! The new Dexdoku is now live!

This theme? Oh why that's simple

https://tenor.com/view/future-is-now-gif-12984599131533734863

[hallow spindle]

Still water 💀💀☠️☠️☠️💀💀🍷🗿🗿🗿☠️💀

[timid sky]

It’s a shame Heliolisk isn’t in this game

[jagged ledge]

Agreed

[ivory pewter]

Its gears spin at high speeds as it prepares to fire high-intensity blasts of flame. Even when they glow white hot, its gears will not warp.

Dexdoku (Klink Line/Fire)

[regal cedar]

Dexdoku: Future is Now
Gen 5+ and Klink line

Each POKENAME will eventually develop a different diet from one another: some will only eat organic foods, while others will just consume minerals. Rarely, there are POKENAME that only rely on magnetic energy in order to live.

I could delete the 50 years ago line and make it clearer that it would only be able to eat certain types of substances, but I thought it was a nice reference to Black and White where it references it was found a century ago (...and then contradict it in the Dex, haha).

[jagged ledge]

Bobo, don't make your first entry into Dexdoku an issue of canon contradictions and timeline semantics! Especially not with such an incredible sprite!

[regal cedar]

Haha.

Probably for the best, yeah.

[jagged ledge]

The rest of the concept combining the technological with the biological is interesting though. I do like how it's kinda like a literal genetic lottery considering Solosis is a new cell

[regal cedar]

Yup, exactly.

[jagged ledge]

Yeah the rest of the concept works, I just want to see what it looks like when you focus on it over the time mention before I nitpick.

[jagged ledge]

I do like it a lot, I just do need to double-check if "high-intensity blasts" is accurate.

Oh wait actually

That might be why it looks off, there's no hyphen

Gotta love when you accidentally answer your own question lol

[regal cedar]

Each POKENAME will develop a different diet from one another: some will eventually need to eat entirely organic foods, while others will consume only minerals. Rarely, there are POKENAME that simply rely on magnetic energy to live.

I've got about 50 characters left, so I could mention it lives near urban areas? Or even spice it up and say it could be found anywhere. Or perhaps say the diet depends on where it lives/the lifestyle. Or just exclude that since it's only working with 50 characters. Sometimes, brevity is good.

I suppose it's only one sentence, which we try to avoid, but it has plenty of detail, I think.

[ivory pewter]

The small engine in POKENAME's body generates the energy it needs to move around. It will often produce more energy than it needs, shocking anyone that touches it.

Dexdoku (Klink Line/Electric)

POKENAME's gears bear a resemblance to saw blades while they spin. Take great caution around a POKENAME, as it can release incredible power while fully spun up.

Dexdoku (Klink Line/Gen 5+)

[lusty sinew]

from where do you guys take those pictures/sprites

[ivory pewter]

I use infinitefusiondex

[jagged ledge]

Copy/Paste from FusionDex usually.

[lusty sinew]

test

ok

[jagged ledge]

👍

[jagged ledge]

Also dang that's a cool sprite getting a good look at it.

[lusty sinew]

i created a dex entry for it so i tested thsi one as i saw it first

[regal cedar]

Dexdoku: Future is Now
Fire and Klink line
Klinklang/Ninetails (337.38)

Legends state that if POKENAME ever stops spinning its gears, any onlookers will be cursed. The Ninetales only moves its lower body to stay on the gears. It doesn't appear to actually be organic: only a faint whirring can be heard inside of it.

[jagged ledge]

The one issue is it reads a little list-y/ramble-y. Maybe adjusting it to say something like "Different POKENAME can have different diets, each one requiring varying amounts of minerals or organic materials, while some can even feed on magnetic energy alone." Then a second sentence if you so wish.

[lusty sinew]

POKENAME enjoys tracing patterns in the dirt with its tail, often leaving behind shapes no one can decipher. Children say its lullabies bring especially vivid dreams.
i didn't know what to do i'm stuck with this

[regal cedar]

That makes sense to me.

[jagged ledge]

I like it actually!

[jagged ledge]

Looks good, no notes!

(Also just for the record, going to both writers participating right now, if you guys could tag your Dexdoku entries, potentially even with where they'd go on the grid, that would be a huge help when I'm going through to decide the results, thanks )

[lusty sinew]

these are three pokemon i got in my team (but not anymore other than azumachan) but i don't know which one to give a dex entry pls tell me which one i should do next

[jagged ledge]

I like the first sentence, not as much the second. The "It" subject placement is rather blunt and open-ended. You can fix that by saying "maintaining a POKENAME", but then my question is how do you maintain it? That implies tending to it mechanically. And the "gears pose a large hazard" is a little simple considering the active description of saw blades in the first sentence. A good concept, just needs a few tweaks.

[ivory pewter]

Glad to hear the 2nd sentence sounding kinda weird wasn't just somethin in my head

Will try & figure somethin else out

[timid sky]

The Typhlosion/Lapras

[lusty sinew]

its Typhlosion/Magcargo

[ivory pewter]

POKENAME burns up coal to produce steam that keeps it warm as it sleeps. When it senses danger, it will exude a black smoke to obscure its escape.

Dexdoku (Psychic/Fire)

[timid sky]

Regardless, do that one

[regal cedar]

Dexdoku: Future is Now
Fire and Psychic

Oricorio-Baile/Wobbuffet (430.202)

POKENAME loves to dance by rocking its head back and forth and flailing its arms all around, especially when loud and harsh music is being played. Oddly, no matter how much POKENAME jams and rocks out, its tail remains eerily still.

I apologize I'm not tagging stuff yet, I'm feeling out where I want some stuff to go and if I'm gonna scrap some stuff altogether, haha

This one has the issue of it being kind of slang-y, but other phrases don't really get the point across, I think.

Also considering doing Torkoal/Slowking with having it puff out smoke when it has a particularly ingenious idea.

[jagged ledge]

Hey, you got this. I appreciate you being aware and receptive to critique! 👍

[regal cedar]

I'm curious what the lapras fusion would be like!

[lusty sinew]

its magcargo for the 2nd time

i do get that it looks like lapras now tho

[regal cedar]

im sorry

It does make more sense about why it's melting, though, haha

[lusty sinew]

isn't it fire/psychic

[ivory pewter]

I organized it by grid order

[regal cedar]

I don't thiiink the order matters here?

[ivory pewter]

That too

[jagged ledge]

I second Typhlosion/Magcargo

[ivory pewter]

Ok swapped out 2nd sentence. Any better?