#Original song. rate what i have so far

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tiny breach
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P.S Honest opinions pls. im newer at song writing and i don't trust any families opinions ;-;

Twilight

Verse 1.
Gettin harder to stay awake nowadays
Cause i always been tryin to stay up too late
Its kinda been gettin on my nerves ooh
But i guess its normal now to both of us cuz

Chorus

Twilight, we’re runnin outta time
Talkin fast as if we’re feelin fine
The sun’s already creepin up again
And I legit dunno where we stand

Twilight, stars, moon, sun, in between
My love for you never felt so sweet
Interesting how i could feel this way
When the Lord God is the one who created me.

Thats all i got. For the chorus, if you wanna like, guess what it sounds like or at least the overall sound, message me and i can like give u the guitar chords maybe.

Advice pls, and if i should continue working on it.

fiery timber
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Keep going at it man

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dont be afraid to keep it going

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the more u do the more ull get even better

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dont worry about that rn

tiny breach
tiny breach
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Original song. rate what i have so far

fiery timber
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THATS NOT WHAT IM SAYING

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im js tryna encourage

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and

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i use man anyways js as an expression broski

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BUT FOR WHAT IT IS

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IT IS GOOD

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but that doesnt mean it is the best

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but that also doesnt mean

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that it cant get any better

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its just a point of view that i use for skill related stuffsies

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nd yeah

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kinda like how practice makes improvement yes

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👍

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sorry if i sounded harsh 😭 that isnt

fiery timber
tiny breach
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lol.

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its cool.