patent pumice
hi there! i recently stumbled upon this: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LKP4G3vunoA and decided to do a whole transcription:
then i started to further develop the song on my own based on what it could sound like: i added some lyrics but i am now stuck atbar 16/17 trying to find smth fitting, i am open to change the melody aswell
lyrics in teh 2nd vid look off cause when i show all instruments it just makes the orientation of the text weird
2nd vid is the start (so from the reel) 1st oen is my continuation
The greatest thief of all time,
he walks in plain sight.
some call him a billionaire but me i call him by
Greed, obsessed with the finest of things,
he takes what he wants his eyes glimmer in green.
Hey are you full-filled Dang o why not
you should take what you want
be it power or a fortune,
now there is nothing left to yearn
He fills up your pock - ets but emp - ties your Soul
He's dig- ging a grave just to fill up the hole
He harvests fields he didn't till,
And watches their empty faces still.
But nothing is enough, he is never complete,
He builds up a kingdom of lies and deceit.