#Here a demo of my first song

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daring bison
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Hello, I'm a composer and starting to sing tho. I've made this song to be my first song where I sing into and maybe need feedback :3

Also, I've received much dms to collab one day. I understand if you want to, but atleast have a decent skill in singing, else people will die hearing us lol ๐Ÿ˜‚

turbid condor
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Pretty cool. Try maybe less autotune. Or is an effect. Also it sounds like its not all in sync. Even myself is bad sometimes.But you learn more and more. ๐Ÿ™‚ So pretty nice. I like it. Keep up the great work.

daring bison
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This song shows the difference between my composing and singing skills lol ๐Ÿ˜‚

delicate temple
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It sounds nice man, but there's some background noise (which I think it's from the mic), and like... in my opinion, sing it with your own voice.
People that really enjoy music like to hear a real, raw and talented voice, and if you believe in yourself, you can deliver that, which would make you be much more recognized and respected.

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So don't be afraid of showing your real voice. And it's normal that for you it doesn't sound good in the beginning, but your voice will keep growing with each time you practice

daring bison
delicate temple
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Maybe, try reduce it and show how it sounds

daring bison
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5 secs

delicate temple
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And like I said, it's normal that your voice sounds quacky, strainned, tired or anything else

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I'm only 14 and in the beginning my voice was also going off-tune and etc.

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But now I can sing perfectly fine! >:D

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I can even do extreme metal vocals which are super rare to do at my age

daring bison
daring bison
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The high note sounds bad, but anything else is okay for me

delicate temple
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It sounds a bit more natural yeah

delicate temple
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"Foreveeeeerrr, foreveerr~"

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Pressing a bit more on the last "forever" but in an emotional way

daring bison
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And that will be a massacre for my voice lol

delicate temple
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Higher it like record it higher or just change it?

turbid condor
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Sounds better. What i noticed is, that is sounds like you too close to the mic. so we can here the breaths. Also do you sing by metronome? But yeah its getting there

delicate temple
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Head*

daring bison
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Alr thx for the feedback. Amma put myself a bit to work

delicate temple
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Okay okay ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป

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Btw, are you good at that production thing?

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'Cause I know zero and I was looking for a producer ๐Ÿ˜