#I’m trying to make a rap lyrics and already have the beat but i feel like it’s not good enough

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boreal musk
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Always wanted to express my feelings
They said i shouldn’t
Their expectations were perfect for me
I just couldn’t
Maybe if i was given another day
I wouldnt
Wouldn’t have gone with the plan
I didnt

Judged for every single i did
ridiculed by you for anything
For you i was only someone
who could be your plaything

The beat starts off slow like melodic and then i can make the rap part i just really dont know how to continue. English is my second language would appreciate any sort of help/feedback.

red ridge
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so this is your lyrics?

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i like them a lot!