#Song review and maybe looking for someone to sing it with.

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lusty pond
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Hello, I’m Sam, M14

And i’ve made this song abt a girl leading a guy on and him being hurt and her apologizing.

Hope you like it!

Title: “Mixed Signals”

[Verse 1: Male Voice]
You caught my eye, pulled me close with a smile,
Made me feel like I could stay for a while.
Every word, every laugh, was a spark in the night,
But now I’m wondering, was it ever right?

[Pre-Chorus: Male Voice]
You said you’d call, but the silence grew,
I’m chasing shadows, trying to find the truth.

[Chorus: Together]
(He) You say you care, but it feels so wrong,
(She) I never meant to string you along.
(He) I’m caught in the waves of what could’ve been,
(She) I didn’t see the storm I pulled you in.
(He) Mixed signals, they’re tearing me apart,
(She) I never thought I’d break your heart.

[Verse 2: Female Voice]
I liked the way you made me feel alive,
But I wasn’t sure if we could ever thrive.
You saw a future, I saw the past,
Trying to hold on to something that wouldn’t last.

[Pre-Chorus: Female Voice]
I didn’t mean to make it this unclear,
I didn’t see the hurt, I didn’t hear the fear.

[Chorus: Together]
(He) You say you care, but it feels so wrong,
(She) I never meant to string you along.
(He) I’m caught in the waves of what could’ve been,
(She) I didn’t see the storm I pulled you in.
(He) Mixed signals, they’re tearing me apart,
(She) I never thought I’d break your heart.

[Bridge: Together]
(Male) Was it real, or just a game to play?
(Female) I never wanted you to feel this way.
(Male) Tell me now, was it all a lie?
(Female) I cared for you, but I can’t deny…

[Outro: Together]
(He) Mixed signals, they left me bruised,
(She) I didn’t mean for you to feel used.
(He) I’ll let go, though it cuts me deep,
(She) I hope someday, you’ll find your peace.
(Together) Mixed signals, now they’re fading away,
Maybe someday, we’ll find our way.

willow cradle
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Hmmm, that sounds interesting! Maybe I can try singing that!

lusty pond
willow cradle
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Wow!

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The lyrics are relatable

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Whats the beat to it?

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Do you need a deeper(dua lipa, meghan trainor, britney, adele, or shakira type of voice) or a higher and softer voice(selina gomez, sabrina carpenter, or billie ellish)?

lusty pond
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Thinking a mix between a sabrina carpenter and selena gomez but just a little deeper not to much though

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Think it would fit best since i’m a mix between bruno mars and the sorta raspy of luke bryan and a little of sam smith ig

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I haven’t really found a beat to it

willow cradle
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I could send a voice note if u want :3

willow cradle
lusty pond
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oooo ok! yeah that would be great

willow cradle
willow cradle
lusty pond
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also have been trying to find someone to do a cover south for sam smith’s “Unholy” it you would be interested in that.

lusty pond
willow cradle
lusty pond
willow cradle
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Okie tysmmmm

worthy tiger
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Me!

real fern
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@lusty pond still lookingh ?

indigo ginkgo
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Your so talented , that’s a really good song ! ☺️

lusty pond