hii i write songs and i’d like some feedback please!! (links in comments)

[terse sage]

uhhh its wouldnt let me post the links so ill drop them here

call the priest — https://www.bandlab.com/post/c005ee08-21d7-ee11-85f9-6045bd2e11f9

secretariat — https://www.bandlab.com/post/29fc5a35-b1d8-ee11-85f9-6045bd2e11f9

a ghost’s secrets — https://www.bandlab.com/post/5a9437b2-58da-ee11-85f9-6045bd2e11f9

pansy — https://www.bandlab.com/post/238acc2b-61e8-ee11-85fb-000d3a425266

my personal favorite and most fleshed out (obviously) is call the priest but please lmk which one you liked best!! :D

hii i write songs and i’d like some feedback please!! (links in comments)