Original song I'm working on | Karaoke Lounge - Singing - Music | Page 1

Started working on my first song a few weeks back and I'd like some opinions before I start wrapping it up. Any feedback is welcome but a reminder that this is still a demo and not fully mastered or anything

Lyrics and vocals by me
Produced by my roommate + me

https://soundcloud.com/jaqueinthebox/martian-machine-demo/s-WJxDS3UHun7?si=2d02f63f1f0a4f58a406d4d92136ef6c&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_s

#Original song I'm working on