I think I could do better on buildup and definitley better on mastering and making things sound natrual and not overly scatchy, id like tips on these subjects, and constructive criticism.
#first song without the use of samples, heavy metal, its called 'rage' on my SC give tips plz, in bio
faint fractal
sacred acorn
i can't exactly judge that well because this type of metal isn't exactly what i prefer but i would like to see a more compelling drum groove and a better harmony
i see the developing notion of harmony and groove but also try try to lean harder into the complexity of either
right now it feels a bit empty
like lean more into rythm with the backing drums because a backbeat isn't enough to keep the listeners attention
you -are- doing well texture wise as the timbre is quite dense sounding due to the multiple ostinatos
and the noise in the background
melodywise i can see you aren't doing much
kinda reminds me of a mix of jungle, d/b and breakcore mixed with screemy metal
example: https://youtu.be/HQubnZ9sz_w
your vocals are quite good tho i can't speak much of it
other than that👍 thumbs up
oh yeah
as they say
variety is king
and repetition legitemises
so yeh