buoyant heart
Hello! I a 16 yrs old student from Budapest. I'm not studying filmmaking yet so I am not a professional. I am intersted in cinematography.
I made my first short film and I would to get some feedback or any suggestions.
I used a Sony a6000 and Zhiyun crane plus.
https://youtu.be/Ru2CFh1dgu4?si=bWf_IloTR8Pndc-G
red needle
I do like the cinematography at work here, but i think the camera is slightly too shaky which i know is deliberate, just a personal nit pick. I like the colours at use. I think for the moment when the lizard (bearded dragon i assume) eats the maggot it needs to be more climactic, it feels like the same pace of the rest of the film. Perhaps it would have been better to have quicker cuts leading up to that to increase the pace. I am not a professional and im not studying film yet (i will next year though) just my thoughts as the average viewer with basic knowledge of making a film.