#Better pacing in scripts

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north plaza
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I have just written my first script and am noticing an issue. My film has very little dialogue as it is mostly an isolated individual. Because of this the script is quite short and many important moments are reduced to mere sentences. When thinking about it I have every detail visualized down the individual steps they take but I’m having trouble writing it into words. Does anyone have any tips to improve this?

orchid wigeon
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I would focus on and highlight the conflict of each scene, whether it be external or internal.