#Can anyone tell me if I'm pitchy and where? Does it compromise the whole song?

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idle pecan
lapis atlas
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Hm, I think the main thing you should be looking on improving would be the closing of each line, and agility.

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What I mean is that you tend to finish singing a line too quickly, making it sound choppy. What you’d want to do is try to close the line gradually, like turning the volume knob. It’s a slow paced song so quick and abrupt closing of lines becomes noticeable, and sounds off-putting.

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Now for agility, the beginning and the chorus riff were fine. Just towards the end specifically on the words “underneath” when rising pitch, and “breath” when lowering your pitch. You tend to gradually rise/lower to the intended note and it often sounds like a gradient or slope. You’d want to reach the intended note quicker, so rather than gradually climb to the note, you jump to the note. If you gradually rise/lower like as you did, there’s gonna be small moments in the climb where you’ll be singing notes that aren’t in key.