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[bleak bloom]

application in french isnt related to applying

use candidature

yeah you use it in the first sentence xd

programme is masc

you skipped half of the intro :(

essay = essai (masc)

why absolu? sincère works

monde is masc

postuler doesn't use être in the passé composé

you need to conjugate préparer
like préparera

n'importe quel autre sounds a bit too strong
i'd just say un autre

j'ai envie, not j'envie
envier is like envy in english

using quand right after that sounds wrong
sur quand also sounds wrong so try to use a noun like sur la date à laquelle je peux m'attendre à recevoir la réponse à ma candidature

si j'étais admis implies it's not gonna happen so use si je suis admis

and j'irai (futur de l'indicatif au lieu de conditionnel)

wait you don't need to say j'irai accepter
just j'accepterai

enquêter doesn't fit here
you can use rechercher

guidance à le calendrier
the first nouns needs a determiner
à + le = au
and guidance doesn't fit here

not sure what to use instead
probably a verb

j'apprécierais si vous pouviez m'aider à suivre le calendrier ?

Étudierais à [universitie], c'est un rêve qui devenait réalité, et j’apprécie sincèrement l'opportunité de postuler.
Etudier à [université] serait un rêve devenu réalité, et j’apprécie sincèrement l'opportunité d'y postuler

additionelle needs an s

you should say des again before préoccupations since you gave the first noun an adjective

please email me
veuillez m'envoyer/m'adresser un message à [adresse]

Merci beaucoup encore
sounds bad with both adverbs

you can use the verb instead for emphases and say je vous remercie de nouveau

apparently à nouveau is when you redo it differently while de nouveau is to do sth again the same way so yeah de nouveau here ig

@solid sleet

[bleak bloom]

I hope this email finds you well. [...] to reiterate my immense interest in studying at the [university]

[bleak bloom]

candidature is fem

who's in good health? xd

programme is masc

it's une personne

ce qu'un autre

aussi isn't formal enough for moreover

use de plus

devrai without the s too (so it's le futur de l'indicatif)

well rechercher means to search for sth, so you should say rechercher des options

don't just say guidance
especially without a determiner

don't say svp envoyez, say merci de m'envoyez or veuillez m'envoyer

and don't say merci bcp encore

[bleak bloom]

En bonne santé means in good health

You're hoping the message arrives in good health?