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Please be patient

Our volunteers look into many questions every day; sometimes it takes them a little while to answer.

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Make it descriptive, including relevant context, but also to the point. This way you improve your chances of getting a more relevant and specific answer.

[dire adder]

"La technologie est très souvent utilisée par la société" or "dans la société" (depending on if you mean "used by society" or "used in society")

to sound more natural, chose either "très souvent" or "tous les jours", not both (in English also we would say either "very often" or "everyday", not "very often everyday")

"jeux vidéos en ligne"

"j'ai toujours adoré la technologie, puisque c'est utile"

"violon" instead of "violin"

"je fais attention aux nouvelles technologies"

In general it's very good

If you also want some punctuation (and sentence structure) correction:

"La plupart du temps, j'utilise mon portable pour faire mes devoirs quand je rentre de l'école, puis je passe le temps en regardant des vidéos sur YouTube et, si j'ai le temps, je joue aux jeux vidéos en ligne." (that's the way it sounds most natural)

"J'aime écouter de la musique pop parce que, à mon avis, c'est très entraînant. Par contre, quand j'étais jeune, je n'écoutais pas du tout de musique reggae, puisque je trouvais ça nul."

so it's mainly to learn where to put commas (we use them more often in French than in English)

but unless you want to write things for work or things that will be published, learning punctuation isn't a priority at all

but yeah, in general it's very good

keep it up