redrunningtiger

[stable flame]

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[fallen pollen]

;hw

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[meager hound]

sorry, i was wondering if you could fix any parts of it, we are allowed to get help on it, as it is a written test at school

[true ice]

Overall it's quite good, however:

-You misused "faire une bonne affaire", the person doing a good "affaire" should be the client, i'd say that the saleman "fait un prix d'ami".
-For "bon marché", you can't remouve the "bon" or change the adjective
-chic and cool are adjectives that go after the noun
-you can replace "maintenant je n'aime pas" by "je n'aime plus" and "très grandes" par "trop grande"
-You misspelled "parfait" (remember the femine is "parfaite")
-you forgot some question marks

[meager hound]

ok thanks a lot