amadeusbrahms

[tame breach]

Please be patient

Our volunteers look into many questions every day; sometimes it takes them a little while to answer.

Pro tip: you can rename the thread title with `.tr <thread name>`

Make it descriptive, including relevant context, but also to the point. This way you improve your chances of getting a more relevant and specific answer.

[errant dock]

There are various errors with gender, appropriate pronoun choice, adverb vs adjective choice, word choice…

It's a good attempt and I think you an still give it to your friends to practice (assuming you've created an answer sheet with the right answers)