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[haughty mirage]

Please be patient

Our volunteers look into many questions every day; sometimes it takes them a little while to answer.

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Make it descriptive, including relevant context, but also to the point. This way you improve your chances of getting a more relevant and specific answer.

[icy radish]

Check your agreement between nouns and adjectives
Your second sentence is missing some articles and feel stilted

[lament star]

Une temperature trop elevée

And

Sururbanisation, ça veut dire, construction des villes trop eleveé?

Is it correct now?

Also what does stilted mean?

[icy radish]

You're still missing articles in the second sentence

What I meant by stilted is that the commas are a bit much

I wouldn't bother saying "ça" it feels informal