agrumes (corrigez-moi svp)

[crimson pecan]

Please be patient

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[runic wedge]

If the handwritten text is too much to read, I can gladly type it

[ebon dock]

2 questions : is it an exercise or is it real ? And who is the recipient ? Boss, manager, HR ?

[runic wedge]

It's an exercise, and it's meant to be given to a boss/manager

[ebon dock]

You had most mistakes already identified. I ended up rephrasing some stuff

au sein

pour vous, l’entreprise -> pour l’entreprise

par rapport au paiement -> au lieu du remboursement mensuel de mes frais de…

Cela me permettra de ne pas subir les grèves fréquentes des transports et d’arriver au bureau sans délais.

Pour ma part

Grosso modo -> en conclusion

Ce que, j’espère (ou je l’espère), vous prendrez en considération…

[runic wedge]

ah

thank you so much, really appreciate it