comment est ma bande dessinée?

[cedar hollow]

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comment est ma bande dessinée?

[pastel rain]

bonjour @storm ginkgo, c'est super cool ta bande dessinée !
voici quelques suggestions :

• certains mots manquent d'accents
• sometimes you use "vous", sometimes "tu", it's best to be consistent
• "désolé, tout" -- "tout" in this context cannot stand by itself, you'd want the French word "everyone" instead
• certains mots sont féminins : escapade, soupe
• "un escapade rapide" by the way does not sound natural, but I'm not sure what to say here. Perhaps you could create another post and ask just about that sentence, natives/tutors will probably give you a better translation