You guys have any feedback?

[lunar tartan]

Kind of new to the hobby and im trying to get better at highlighting

[fiery harness]

I Like the colors that you picked and the highlight placement. I would recommend you to thin down your paints a little more because the Mini Details are almost completely Clogged up. You Could also try glazing on the Coral area so they Look smooth. Keep trying and don't give Up and you will See that you will improve in time