#text translated by deep and chatgpt. I want your feedback please. Thanks

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median dust
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hello. I gave a sentence from Deepl to chatgpt, and wrote a really long transcript, but the text for chatgpt just re-write the same one and said there is not mistake.

if I can get your feedback of this sentence ( Von nun an schreibe ich beim Lesen eines Artikels nur die Wörter auf, die ich nicht kenne, und mache mir dann nach dem Lesen des Artikels Notizen und Sätze zu den Wörtern. So werde ich mein eigenes Lesen nicht unterbrechen ) . did Deepl and chatgpt do well in the correction and translation?

the original was this ( from now on, when I read the article, I just right down the words I do not know, then after reading the article, I make my notes and sentences about the words. So I will not interrupt my own reading )

I would like to get feedback from Germans and others here too. thank you

bleak birch
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first off: grammatically there are no mistakes, but it doesn't sound very idiomatic

the first sentence would be constructed with the futur 1, as in: "Von nun an werde [...] aufschreiben, die ich nicht kenne, und werde [...] zu den Wörtern machen.", it's a promise / intention and that usually is done with the future form

the last sentence in german just sounds weird, a native wouldn't say that.

"Auf diese Weise bin ich weniger abgelenkt (vom Lesen)."
"Auf diese Weise werde ich beim Lesen weniger oft unterbrochen."
"So kann ich mich besser aufs Lesen konzentrieren." >> i'd prefer this