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hot cloak
timber glade
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oh yes that'd bother me as well

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though then again i dont think they care a lot ?

fair iron
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There, I've finished purging my Twitter. ^^

timber glade
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thats why i added my rl colleague ๐Ÿ˜„

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:DDD

fair iron
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Now to continue to purge my other accounts. ^^

timber glade
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'other accounts' ? ๐Ÿ˜‰

fair iron
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Shame I can't remove a picture of me. I deleted my Pinterest account, but the image remains. ๐Ÿ™ƒ

hot cloak
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Lol

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I deleted most of my accounts

fair iron
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Those who know my name can find it on Google Images, as it's the first hit. :]

hot cloak
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GG

fair iron
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Some people already have. ๐Ÿ‘€

timber glade
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๐Ÿ‘€

hot cloak
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Why dont i have

timber glade
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same

fair iron
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I've never been one to reveal my face. ^^

timber glade
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๐Ÿ˜„

hot cloak
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You just dont want us to know youre a girl

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damn im dead

fair iron
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What. :P

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No dying.

timber glade
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Casca would be the hottest girl ^q^

mellow mist
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Soundboard Rubyfish

fair iron
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Aw. ^^

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I'd rather not dethrone you and Foxxo.

timber glade
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I've never seen a picture of foxxo ๐Ÿ‘€

hot cloak
mellow mist
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she had herself on discord pp for a while XD

hot cloak
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yup

fair iron
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Foxxo is beautiful.

timber glade
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๐Ÿ‘€

mellow mist
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๐Ÿ‘€

hot cloak
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Foxxo looks like anime character!

fair iron
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She does, a little bit. ^^

timber glade
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I'm very curious

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about the way everyone looks?

thick charm
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Asians look the same anyway

timber glade
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But I don't want to pressure people into sencind pics when they feel uncomfortable

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chuck youre right

thick charm
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Did you see my 'selfie'?

timber glade
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the eyes?

thick charm
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aye

timber glade
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YOU HAVE CUTE EYES

mellow mist
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the me

timber glade
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I like your eyebrows

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eyes ๐Ÿ‘€

mellow mist
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๐Ÿ‘€

fair iron
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Maybe I'll reveal my face to more people in future. So far only one person knows what I currently look like. ^^

hushed oriole
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i was gonna say morning but it's afternoon so afternoon

fair iron
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Two more people know what a young Casca looked like. :D

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Hey Trist. ^^

hushed oriole
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foxxo i'd follow you but i can't read Russian

ocean robin
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Triiiist.

mellow mist
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Ello Trist wavedog

ocean robin
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Nobody knows how I look like here. mmlol

opal sequoia
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I do.

ocean robin
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๐Ÿ‘€

opal sequoia
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๐Ÿ‘€

mellow mist
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๐Ÿ‘€

hushed oriole
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i have 20k tweets wow

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๐Ÿ‘€

hot cloak
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I do.

ocean robin
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omg I'm so happy to have found xi on Spotify aaa

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thanks again casci ;u;

mellow mist
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FLAPS USING SPOTIFY? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

fair iron
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Happy to help, Flappy. ^^

ocean robin
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YES

timber glade
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tristy share your twitter, if you'd like ๐Ÿ‘€

hushed oriole
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i angrytweet about books and feminism

timber glade
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its okay ๐Ÿ‘€

hushed oriole
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are you sure you wanna know it? :P

timber glade
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yes ๐Ÿ‘€

fossil zenith
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hey

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someone can help me

hushed oriole
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but it's Spanish :(

mellow mist
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I dunno, can they mmlol

ocean robin
timber glade
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It's ok I follow someone who tweets in arabic and foxxo who tweets in russian it all gud

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also at least I undersand some Spanish HAHAHA

fossil zenith
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what sentence is right? '' Fussball zu spielen ist anstrengend'' oder ''Es Fussball spielen ist anstrengend''

hot cloak
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the former is correct

fossil zenith
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Ok danke ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

hot cloak
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i can tweet in german for you :D

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but idk what to tweet about

fossil zenith
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Other native german said to me that is Es fussball, but i think strange

hot cloak
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yes

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that would be strange

timber glade
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ehehehsdklfjlskdf foxxo it ok owo

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tweet whatever you feel comfortable with !!

fair iron
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I almost killed Foxxo.

ocean robin
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๐Ÿ‘€ how casci

fair iron
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ยฏ_(ใƒ„)_/ยฏ

ocean robin
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๐Ÿค”

hot cloak
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I KNOW HOW CASCA LOOKS LIKE

ocean robin
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WAIT WHAAAAAT

timber glade
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wHAT

thick charm
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Das FuรŸballspielen would theoretically grammatically work as it's a nominalised verb in that case, @fossil zenith , however it would still sound weird

hot cloak
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AND HE IS GOING TO BEST THE SEXIEST OFFICER OF GERMANY

ocean robin
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THE HECK

hot cloak
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RIP YOU GRILLLS

timber glade
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ARREST ME ^Q^

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Oh btw I recently asked Nick if he minds me flirting with lit. all of my friends

ocean robin
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HOW DO YOU KNOW HOW HE LOOKS LIKE FOXXO

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LIKE WHAT

timber glade
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and he was like "Nah, cause I know I'm the best"

fair iron
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I know what Foxxo looks like, so I thought it'd be fair if she knew what I looked like.

hot cloak
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Because he sent me a photo of him

timber glade
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"Just kidding, I trust you to always love me the most"

ocean robin
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OH MY GOD

timber glade
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awww

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casca

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so if

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WAIT YOU'VE SEEN ME BEFORE

ocean robin
fair iron
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Nope.

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Only parts of your hair at most.

timber glade
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oh :^(

hot cloak
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MY COLLECTION BECOMES BIGGER AND BIGGER

ocean robin
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I almost did face reveal and sent it to Chucko but in the end I didn't do it, so I'm nothing for the moment mmlol

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I just know how Thi, Gauthier, Erik, Nemo/Krypti and a few others look like

hushed oriole
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foxxo has seen your hairy parts too, Casci?

ocean robin
fair iron
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She's seen the hair on my head, Trist.

hot cloak
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my hairy parts

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his hairy parts

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wat mmlol

hushed oriole
timber glade
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h-hairy parts? ๐Ÿ‘€

hot cloak
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yeah what kind of hhairy parts

ocean robin
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Wait Foxxo.

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Nah nevermind.

hot cloak
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wot

hushed oriole
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well

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maybe

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he has no hair

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in his parts

hot cloak
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If you want to ask if i know how you look like

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yes i do

ocean robin
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what the heck

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how

hot cloak
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Because you couldnt turn off your camera

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lel

fair iron
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What. Let's change the topic.

ocean robin
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OH YEAH LOL

hot cloak
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yeah

pine ginkgo
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Lolwhat

hushed oriole
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foxxo is that FBI agent we all meme about

ocean robin
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but I was ugly when we called, my hair wasn't even ok sadlol

fair iron
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Foxxo is the best PI.

hot cloak
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Cant confirm

pine ginkgo
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Foxxo will never find me eheheh

hot cloak
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You looked amazing

ocean robin
hot cloak
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and i loved your hair

fair iron
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Wait, Foxxo has seen Flappy?

ocean robin
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;;w;;

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yes

fair iron
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O:

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^^

ocean robin
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accidentally

timber glade
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omggg

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cute

hushed oriole
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sweet

ocean robin
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We had a call and I activated my webcam without realizing it

fair iron
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I can now confirm that Thi is cute.

ocean robin
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And I literally screamed

hushed oriole
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foxxo, didn't you have a pic of yourself some weeks ago?

pine ginkgo
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Good job foxxo

opal sequoia
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I wanna see how Flappy looks like. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

hushed oriole
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i wanna see Thi too >:( feel jealous

ocean robin
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So Foxxo is actually the only one who knows how I look like

hot cloak
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well i dont hide my face

hushed oriole
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(Flaps can have privacy... for now)

hot cloak
fair iron
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Thi has cute bunnies, and her cute bunnies have a cute Thi. It's a great fit. ^^

opal sequoia
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The bunnies are cute.

hot cloak
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Pls.

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Someone.

ocean robin
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Though Thi is hella cute, I agree.

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Foxxo?

hot cloak
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Me.

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Kill.

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Right.

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Now.

ocean robin
timber glade
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KYA ////

hushed oriole
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What's wrong?

ocean robin
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Kill what?

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Who?

hot cloak
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3 hours of work.

ocean robin
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๐Ÿ˜ฆ

hot cloak
fair iron
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No dying, Foxxo.

hot cloak
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Really?

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Now?

ocean robin
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NOOOOOOO

fair iron
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O:

mellow mist
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OH THAT SHIT

hot cloak
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Why?

fluid horizon
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Whats the error code

hot cloak
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What have I done?

ocean robin
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OH JESUS

timber glade
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OH NO FOXXO ;;;;;

opal sequoia
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You didn't save, Foxxo.

mellow mist
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HAPPENED TO ME YESTERDAY I HATE IT sadlol

timber glade
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PETS YOU

ocean robin
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I want to cry

fair iron
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Did you save beforehand?

hot cloak
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Ofc I didnt

opal sequoia
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Foxxo never saves.

timber glade
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SORRY THAT HAPPENED TO YOU FOXXO

hot cloak
ocean robin
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๐Ÿ˜ฆ

fair iron
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Foxxo, you should save regularly.

fluid horizon
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Whats the error code

opal sequoia
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She lost all her work just recently the same way.

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And yet still doesn't save.

hot cloak
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idk it's not written sly

opal sequoia
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So I feel not much sympathy.

fluid horizon
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It is

mellow mist
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Sly it says it

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system thread exception not handled

fluid horizon
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Yes and i can read that

ocean robin
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I want to cry just right now. I am feeling so sad for her.

hot cloak
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ha

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HA

hushed oriole
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:(

hot cloak
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I LOVE THIS

hushed oriole
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Foxxo i'm sorry sweetie

hot cloak
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ILLUSTRATOR

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THIS SWEET BOY SAVED ME

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HA

fluid horizon
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Its blurry for me for some reason

hot cloak
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FOK OFF LAPTOP

fair iron
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You have so much empathy, Flappy.

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It's beautiful. ^^

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You have a pure soul.

hot cloak
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thanks everyone:3

ocean robin
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๐Ÿ˜ฆ I did cry for Bell the last time because of her problems

timber glade
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Illustrator saved for you??

fair iron
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๐ŸŽ‰

ocean robin
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oh lol nice

hot cloak
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yessss

opal sequoia
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Please learn to save, Foxxo.

timber glade
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I cried many times before bc of my program crashing when I've been drawing

opal sequoia
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It will ruin your life one day.

timber glade
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sOMETIMES MY PROGRAM CRASHED WHILE SAVING

hot cloak
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Bell hasn't come back has she

fair iron
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Thi draws? Show drawing! O:

hot cloak
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๐Ÿค”

fair iron
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No, not yet.

ocean robin
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Now it is over, I can stop crying ๐Ÿค”

fair iron
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She won't for some time, either.

ocean robin
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HEY THI HAVE YOU SEEN THE BUN I DREW

fair iron
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Flappy, show bun. ^^

hushed oriole
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:(

ocean robin
fluid horizon
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Anyone want to go through this basic grammar book with me xD

hushed oriole
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BUNNIEEEโค

opal sequoia
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What book is it, Sly?

hot cloak
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I should explain you once how to use references

ocean robin
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mmlol well I'm going to finish this one and then I use references

fluid horizon
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Schenke Basic German

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Its like the first one on the list of the resources doc

opal sequoia
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Oh I see.

fluid horizon
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Idk I just feel lost doing things alone

fair iron
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Purging social media takes so long. ๐Ÿ™ƒ

hot cloak
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I spent a whole day doing it including writing letters mmlol

timber glade
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OHHH FLOOPSIE YOUR BUN LOOKS SO GOOD !!!!

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GOOD JOB !!!

fair iron
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There's one page that could once post for me, and deleting those posts is so tiring. ๐Ÿ™ƒ

timber glade
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I used to draw

ocean robin
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open_mouth_cat โค

timber glade
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I'm still thinking about stopping for good

fair iron
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Why stop?

timber glade
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Cause it hasn't felt fun in ages

fair iron
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Aw. :(

timber glade
fair iron
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That's a good reason to stop, though.

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THI.

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THAT'S AMAZING.

ocean robin
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^^^

timber glade
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thank you !!! I tried haha

fair iron
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TRIED? That's talent.

ocean robin
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please teach me how to draw humans like that, sensei

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I can oly draw animals

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;; my hoomans are ugly

timber glade
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omggg

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im not very good with anatomy either

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but i save a lot of references all the time

hot cloak
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Wooooow Chica

fair iron
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No, Thi. That's a lie.

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You're amazing.

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That's amazing.

timber glade
ocean robin
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I should practie drawing humans again

timber glade
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except for the clouds

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please don't look at my clouds

ocean robin
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oh god chica

fair iron
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Why not? They're awesome.

ocean robin
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wjat kind of masterpiece is this

timber glade
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they're too textured hahaha

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I still like it a lot !!

fair iron
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Those dimensions. O:

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6000x4000?

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Woh.

ocean robin
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Lemme find the drawing I'm still super proud of ๐Ÿค”

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Casci might have seen it already too many times lol

fair iron
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There's no such thing as too many times. ^^

timber glade
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show meee

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COUNTR ROADS

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I LOVE THIS SONG

fair iron
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Thi, can I use that image as my desktop wallpaper?

timber glade
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Omg sure???

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If you want to

fair iron
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Thanks! It looks great now. ^^

timber glade
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I feel honored. Thank you!

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it was actually a bg for a competition video

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I drew story images as well? but those turned out badly

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sob s

fair iron
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Shame you lost your passion, you have amazing talent.

ocean robin
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I hate when pictures take a while to send. :<

timber glade
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Thank you haha ;; I guess I grew tired of it and it kept feeling frustrating

ocean robin
timber glade
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sameee TT

ocean robin
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FINALLY DARN.

mellow mist
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Flaps wow

timber glade
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I love the colors your chose for the wolf !!!

mellow mist
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they look great!

ocean robin
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:3

timber glade
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and that cat, the composition is very good ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ofc the cat as well !

ocean robin
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โค

fair iron
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You two are inspiring me to draw. ^^

ocean robin
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:DDDD

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please draw Casci

timber glade
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do pick it up!! it is a very fulfilling hobby

ocean robin
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I still looove the Umbreon you did months ago

fair iron
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^^

fluid horizon
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Drawing is fun

timber glade
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I wrecked my wrist baack then though

ocean robin
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24h ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

timber glade
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I still have wrist problems today

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yes one day ahahsamdg

ocean robin
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I would like to do a drawing which takes that long tbh

fair iron
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I might turn these into a slideshow, if you don't mind. ^^

ocean robin
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It looks sweet, Thi. :3

timber glade
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omg ?? I usually take more than 3 days to finish a drawing

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I am very slow

ocean robin
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I'm pretty fast.

timber glade
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That's rly cool

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I couldn't draw fast no matter how hard I tried haha

ocean robin
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(i still don't understand how I could do it that fast, it was hard as heck)

fair iron
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Woh.

ocean robin
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:3

timber glade
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dat giraffe though QQ so goooood

ocean robin
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:D thankies

twilit garden
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the shadows on that are just really great

fair iron
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^

ocean robin
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โค

timber glade
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if anyone ever wants me to draw boobs, I am good at drawing boobs ^q^

twilit garden
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i don't know anything about drawing but i'd hang that on a wall

ocean robin
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I have some horses as well, I just need to find them

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๐Ÿค”

timber glade
twilit garden
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the giraffe looks like something Spongebob would use to draw a circle

timber glade
twilit garden
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oh

timber glade
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^q^

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but i wont draw anything else lmao

twilit garden
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you should tell Seska about this

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i

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ehm

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i don't really know how to react

timber glade
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^q^

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boobs are life

ocean robin
timber glade
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omggg horse-chan

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such good

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!!!

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reminds me of someone who i used to talk to that hates horses

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I kept sending them horse memes

ocean robin
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:C

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LOL

timber glade
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i guess that's a reason why we don't talk anymore

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LMAO JK

ocean robin
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THAT'S BEAUTIFUL LOL

timber glade
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but the horse is good gj ouo

ocean robin
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โค :D

thick charm
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holy, Thi. Your drawings are pretty damn sick. Do you take comissions?

ocean robin
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I used to do digital too but I'm better with traditional imo

twilit garden
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that horse looks like it's on a human body and it has been working out

ocean robin
thick charm
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lmaooo

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I can see it

twilit garden
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Yo dude, the bench press was sick today

thick charm
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@timber glade answer meeee

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the ranch press

twilit garden
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lol

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a very mane-ly horse

timber glade
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@thick charm I used to, I don't draw anymore though haha

thick charm
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shame

ocean robin
timber glade
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ouhh adorable โค

ocean robin
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โค

timber glade
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oh god can I just share my stupid old self

ocean robin
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I could talk about drawings everyday :D

timber glade
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I used to have a cursh on lots og random guys right

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And I drew them AHAHAHA kill me

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for their birthdays like no??? could you please have not cause that was SO embarrassing

ocean robin
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MY THE GOD THE SECOND ONE IS AMAZING

timber glade
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thank you!!! I tried rly hard to do him justice cause I had a HUGE crush on him

ocean robin
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I loveeee how you did it

timber glade
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thank you !!!!

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It was so difficult ;q;

fluid horizon
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Nice stuff

thick charm
ocean robin
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๐Ÿ‘Œ

timber glade
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master chuck

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Chuck-sensei

vernal mauve
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๐Ÿง˜โ€โ™‚๏ธ

timber glade
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one thing I did was design a signature for my friend who's a cosplayer haha

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she's a cosplayguest at a con next weekend

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I should get her to take a pic of one of her orints with her signature for me

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Prints*

shy bobcat
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chuck wow ๐Ÿ˜

hushed oriole
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Guys, I need some proof-readers. Short story, English, 320 words, for an assessment. It should be intriguing and provoke something in the reader. Any volunteers?

fair iron
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Sure.

hushed oriole
sour mesa
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what is coming round?

hushed oriole
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(It should be less than 280 and it's 320, so any suggestion of what i might leave out is welcome. if you think it's trash, you can't understand it or whatever let me know and i'll write a new one. i really want it to be cool)

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to regain concioussness

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consciousness*

sour mesa
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Oh TIL

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I tidied up her room before dad came home lest he freak out.

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lest he frik out?

fair iron
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Yep.

sour mesa
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i learn new things everyday

pine ginkgo
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otherwise he would freak out

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kinda like that

hushed oriole
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i've tried to use "high-level" structures but i may have done it wrong lol

fair iron
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*came around.

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To keep the sentence in the same tense: nose *was bleeding.

hushed oriole
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Mmm no, you will see

fair iron
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O:

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get rid of now.

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The now sounds odd.

hushed oriole
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i know. i've been thiking about it but i don't know how to put it

fair iron
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Remove the now, and it sounds great.

hushed oriole
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okay, one word less lol

fair iron
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I'd also opt for freshly-baked cookies.

timber glade
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In However, unlike the previous occasions, my head is not throbbing. I'd put the past tense. my head was not throbbing

fair iron
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If the first sentence is in the present tense, then I'd keep it at is.

timber glade
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^

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keep to one tense

hushed oriole
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The whole first paragraph is in the present

timber glade
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Oh I thought we were putting them in past tense now

hushed oriole
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Come, am wearing...

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No, no

timber glade
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ahh ok then sorry for the misunderstanding

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Her duvet was full or gore what does this mean

hushed oriole
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I had to use some specific resources of "complex narratives" and well i chose one and you will see haha

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Np, i really appreciate your help :)

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bloodstains

fair iron
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full *of gore.

timber glade
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yeah

hushed oriole
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ups typo

timber glade
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I wasn't sure if I misunderstood it

hushed oriole
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didn't even read it when Thi posted it lol sorry

timber glade
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wwww npnp

fair iron
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*blackout.

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until it *became ashes.

hushed oriole
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thanks!
but the later hmmm not sure coz it's back in the present

timber glade
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what does beet mean?

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beet cookies

pine ginkgo
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a type of plant thingy

fair iron
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^

hushed oriole
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i don't know if you understand the story :((((((( maybe I haven't written it well

timber glade
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no it's just some parts which im not sure of

hushed oriole
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yup, red/pink thingy

fair iron
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It's written well, don't worry. ^^

timber glade
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It's good !!

fair iron
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Rote Beete, Thi.

timber glade
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Rote Beete Kekse

hushed oriole
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sooooo do you get the general idea?!?!?!

timber glade
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yeahh

hushed oriole
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coz my friend had no clue and i'm going crazy lol

timber glade
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I'm for putting the first two sentences in past tense though

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and for this sentence: I set the crumpled paper on fire until it becomes ashes, for only I will know her last message

putting the first phrase in a future tense would make more sense to me
I will set the crumpled paper on fire until it becomes ashes, for only I will know her last message not quite sure ...

hushed oriole
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about the past tense... maybe the first to sentences sound better indeed. i'll consider it! :) the thing is that, as I said, I had to include POV/flashbacks or flash fowards/a circular structure... so changing the tense would imo reduce the effect of the circular story i search

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it's really difficult using that kind of stuff in 220-260 writings lol fokken assessment

timber glade
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it's true

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When I finally come around, my nose is bleedingโ€ฆ again. However, unlike the previous occasions, my head is not throbbing.
I understand this as
As soon as I come around (you sort of realise this before it happens? which doesn't make much sense) my nose is bleeding (somehow it just started bleeding). but this time your head is not throbbing

When I finally came around, my nose was bleedingโ€ฆ again. However, unlike the previous occasions, my head was not throbbing.
This however
I came around (it already happened, you are conscious again and you realised this), my nose was bleeding (it hasn't JUST started when you came around). Unlike the other times, the head was not throbbing (as if would be throbbing during the short timespan of regaining consciousness)

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Not sure it it makes sense

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The structure does not change dw

hushed oriole
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Ohh yeah, it does make much more sense

timber glade
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Or maybe I get too easily confused ffjsldkfjslgkjkg

hushed oriole
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Especially the first sentence

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no, you are right, Thi

timber glade
#

yeah!

hushed oriole
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Thanks :)

timber glade
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np tristy

hushed oriole
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i'm gonna check just one thing

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yeah, i'll change it :) thanks

timber glade
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okay np !!!

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should we cut your text shorter?

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you said you had too many words

hushed oriole
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mmm if you feel that there are unnecesary things, i would really use it :(

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i started with 350 and now it's 310 so it's better haha

timber glade
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Her duvet was full or gore and the drawers were open

maybe as Her duvet was full or gore, the drawers open

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ah full of**

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sorry forgot to correct that when copypasting

hushed oriole
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Does this work in English: Her duvet was full of gore; the drawers, open ? I don't think sothinking_cat in Spanish it sounds great tho

timber glade
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maybe wihtout the comma

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but it does work

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Sheera's name is kinda unnecessary in this short text so you can remove another word there and just refer to her as, well, 'her'

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The context makes it clear whom you're referring to

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After rationalising the situation, I blamed it on my mourning her loss.

You can leave out her loss here since mourning implies the expression fo sorrow over someone's death

hushed oriole
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(yeah right i could even make it a boy and i'd be even more obvious but less lesbianishy (? )

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oh that's truethinking_cat

timber glade
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Or write it as Rationalising the situation, I blamed it on my mourning

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three words less !

hushed oriole
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great, thanks๐Ÿ˜š

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i don't think i can leave out much more :( maybe full sentences but...

timber glade
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I set the crumpled paper on fire until it becomes ashes, for only I will know her last message

maybe
I set the crumpled paper ablaze, reduced to ashes, for only I will know her last message

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Just a suggestion

fair iron
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Sounds poetic, I like it.

timber glade
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setting something ablaze means the same as setting something on fire

hushed oriole
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oh beautiful, Thi!

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you should write (?)

timber glade
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two words less hahaha

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No pls no I'm bad at expressing myself

fair iron
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Reducing the letter into the ghost of an ember.

hushed oriole
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i have taken out a "which" and a couple of adjetives

timber glade
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ahhh nice~

hushed oriole
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i may take out the "I'm sorry I used you", since i was just trying to make obvious what happened

timber glade
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I think it's good

hushed oriole
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buuut good readers don't need that

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(?)

timber glade
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I was very confused about it and it made it clear to me hahaha

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Ah

hushed oriole
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AH

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Okau

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HAHAHAHA

timber glade
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I was confused about teh story

hushed oriole
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Forget it then

timber glade
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and the "sorry I used you" made everything clear to me

hushed oriole
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gosh i'm too obscure

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Well I have 300 words... i think it's acceptable

timber glade
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Should be okay ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

hushed oriole
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just 40 words more than allowed... haha

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the limit was just too low for this kind of writing

timber glade
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280 * 110% = 308

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as max

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so it should be okay โค

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oh??

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thought the limit was 280

hushed oriole
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Nop it was 260 but it's okay

timber glade
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ohhh ๐Ÿ˜‚

hushed oriole
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i'll talk to the teacher

timber glade
#

Yeah it is very low.

hushed oriole
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she really wanted us to use different points of view, or spatio temporal frames, flash backs...

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that's impossible with 220 words

timber glade
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yeah definitely

hushed oriole
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Thank you so much, Thi<3

timber glade
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npnp owo

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I love proofreading

hushed oriole
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i owe you a favour! and casca too, but a smaller one :P

timber glade
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Haha np you don't owe me anything โค

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Recently my friend who studies sinology had to translate a text about how vietnam came to be and I got to proofread it haha

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it was fun

hushed oriole
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man that sounds soooo cool

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i love it

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i love writing but i'm really insecure and i don't usually let anyone read what i write

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i'm trying to be more open about it

fair iron
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I like your writing style.

timber glade
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same as Casca

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Tristy you're good

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sharing with others also means you'll get feedback so don't worry

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but do so as you feel you're ready to share your writing

hushed oriole
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i've been reading lately so much in English that i feel my style is better in English than in Spanish lol

timber glade
#

I can feel my brain breaking down as the date of my exam comes closer

ocean robin
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๐Ÿ˜ฎ I want to write now god

hushed oriole
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but i still make a lot of mistakes

sour mesa
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I really want to write a gut story

hushed oriole
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when is your exam? :)

timber glade
#

See, Tristy? You inspired other people to write ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Isn't that the greatest compliment for a writer?

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Tuesday ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Making mistakes is part of learning!!

hushed oriole
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Flaps i'll support you!!!

ocean robin
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I mean, I have never written something in English

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Only French

hushed oriole
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wow work hard on it!! you will nail it๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿผ what is it about?

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anything* :P

timber glade
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It's Math for engineers, part 1

ocean robin
#

And the teacher said that my writings are getting better and better

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mmlol oof

hushed oriole
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spills the tea ugh i nate it

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hate*

timber glade
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I'm pretty good at math and got like 80% + in all of my hw so I'm like, not too worried, but then again I am extremely anxious when I have to perform at a set time

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so I get extremely anxious about that

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I just said the same thing twice

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and I cant think straight

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ahahah cries TT

fair iron
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You'll do great, I believe in you.

timber glade
#

thank you ;;;;;;;;;; โค

hushed oriole
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oh then you'll nail it, don't worryโ˜บ

timber glade
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Writing texts in another language enhances your understanding of that language !!

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It's very recommended

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also translating texts

hushed oriole
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just have a tila or sth before it :P

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and believe in yourself!

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we already believe in you :3

ocean robin
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You'll nail it, Thi

timber glade
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Thank you TT I will at least pass, but I hope to perform really well !! I want to make my mom and my brother proud TT

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aND OFC MYSELF

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Thank you all for believing in me ;;

hushed oriole
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โค

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you'll do :)

timber glade
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๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ’•

astral elm
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I really want to get better at hearing but I don't know where to start, I can understand a lot of what my friend says irl but he speaks a little too fast for me to understand the full meaning. Does anyone know any good resources for that?

misty rain
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I just kept exposing myself to audio. There's a soap opera that has episodes on YouTube (https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL93C71558767C2E55) that I listen to every week. They even have German subtitles. There are other channels I listen to, such as Easy German, German with Jenny, and Deutsch mit Marija.

You could also look for German songs/playlists on spotify. here's one I found recently with a bunch of songs: https://open.spotify.com/user/major_grooves/playlist/46vtMlAI8YkCO36DYyWhU0

And then you have podcasts and audio books. Just depends on what type of speaking you want to listen to. Podcasts will be more natural speaking and probably harder to follow, and audio books will be easier.

astral elm
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ooooh thank you

lost dagger
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i'm eating ghostpepper chips and they're making my tongue sweat

ember narwhal
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noice

lost dagger
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lemonade isn't much good against tongue hurtiness

ember narwhal
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XD

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damn.

timber glade
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anyone want to listen to music together on spotify? ๐Ÿ‘€

opal sequoia
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What kind of music?

timber glade
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uhhh different thngs

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or whatever you prefer !!

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i listen to kpop, jpop and some western artists !!!

thick charm
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Dafรผr mรผsste ich erst einmal ne Playlist machen mit Songs die mir nicht peinlich sind

timber glade
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๐Ÿ˜‚

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Mach doch dann hรถr ich mit :^)

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Musst aber nicht

thick charm
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nรถ

timber glade
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ok ๐Ÿ˜‚

thick charm
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zuuu faul

opal sequoia
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Do I have to connect my spotify to discord to listen with people?

thick charm
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You do

safe yacht
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I have a question about this Spotify connection thing. Can you see what I'm listening to right now? I can only see my own on desktop.

thick charm
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no

safe yacht
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Ok thanks

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So I guess the desktop app has to be open then?

full falcon
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I don't know if it works with the web version

safe yacht
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I'm on mobile right now

full falcon
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I don't think mobile support was added already

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I think Arrem told me that

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@sudden panther Need confirmation please^^

ocean robin
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It isn't

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can confirm

full falcon
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Ok thankies^^

sudden panther
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It usually takes Discord about 50 years to add a new feature to mobile.

full falcon
#

Oh

fair iron
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@timber glade Does the offer to listen to music with you still stand? If so, I'd like to accept. ^^

timber glade
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yaaaaa

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omg hi casca

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โค

fair iron
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Hey. :D

timber glade
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how is you

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sorry if I skip a lot of songs, I recently got spotify and just added every artist my friends recommended me ๐Ÿ˜ฐ

fair iron
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I'm great, and you? ^^

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Don't worry about skipping songs. :D

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Play whatever makes you happy.

timber glade
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I'm sleepy and hangry >< but other than that, pretty good mood

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thank you โค

fair iron
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Is there nothing to eat?

timber glade
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There is plenty, I'm just too lazy to make something

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Hyolyn ist queen btw

fair iron
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^^

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It's pretty catchy.

timber glade
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yeees aaa

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MHHH PARADISEEE

fair iron
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^^

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Is it Christmas already? O:

timber glade
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It's always chritmas for me HAHAHA

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I love christmas,,,,

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I love christmas songs too

fair iron
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Me too.

timber glade
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OMG !!!!!

fair iron
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Christmas is the best holiday.

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I knew I recognised that song within a second. ^^

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This was my favourite song when it came out.

timber glade
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FFFJSDKFJSKF I LOVE IT

silver briar
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halloooo

timber glade
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huhuu !

silver briar
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ich studiere Adjektive

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und ich habe eine Frage

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was ist das Gegenteil von "herzlich"

fair iron
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Unfreundlich.

silver briar
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uuuuh

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my bad

fair iron
weary spoke
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There isn't really a clear opposite

silver briar
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exactly

weary spoke
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Viel besser wie unfreundlich geht es nicht

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It's more like a feeling than anything, warm, open

silver briar
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which one of them fits better

fair iron
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Warm and open? Like Thi. ^^

weary spoke
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If you're looking for one word unfruendlich is probably best

silver briar
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alright

weary spoke
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if it's more about what acting opposite of herzlich would be then I'd definetly say behaving cold, distant, not conversational

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einfach unfreundlich ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

silver briar
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i study like writing Adjektiv, Bedeutung, then Gegenteil und Bedeutung

weary spoke
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Ah nice

timber glade
#

Casca ๐Ÿ˜‚

weary spoke
#

Wie lange studierst du schon duetsch?

silver briar
#

so vielen vielen Dank, Casca und Sjoti

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uh 3 Monate

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ungefรคhr

fair iron
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ยฏ_(ใƒ„)_/ยฏ

weary spoke
#

schon schon

silver briar
#

thanks again

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gute Nacht oder guten Morgen!

fair iron
#

@timber glade Either you really love that song, or it's queued twice, or this is blind luck. ^^

timber glade
#

I Love Motohiro Hata ๐Ÿ‘€

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I've got like ALL of his albums saved in my playlists

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best musician IMHO

fair iron
#

^^

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Ah, this was the artist of your favourite song.

#

Wait.

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Interesting.

timber glade
#

yeeesss

fair iron
#

The Perfume song played twice in a row for me, that's why I was confused. :D

timber glade
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Ohhh I shall show you one of my other favourite songs from him !!!

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ohhhh I see WWWW sORRY I confused them hahaha

fair iron
#

You have nothing to apologise for. :P

timber glade
#

It was a misunderstanding on my side! So I apologise for that uwu

#

My mom did teach me manners after all !

pine ginkgo
#

FRAU CHICA, WAS TUN SIE DENN DA

fair iron
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Haha, as did mine. However, apologising for things that aren't your fault isn't needed. ^^

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I didn't realise that I was no longer listening along for some reason.

timber glade
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LUNA!!! SIE HABEN NICHTS GESEHEN

#

Ohhh I see ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

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But you came back ๐Ÿ˜Š

fair iron
#

Once I realised, yep. ^^

timber glade
#

A puzzle of 70 pieces !!

fair iron
#

O:

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Panic! At The Disco!

timber glade
#

General is moving so fast slfdjslkdfmskf

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I added them from my friend's playlist ffsjdlkfsjf don't know many songs

fair iron
#

Emperor's New Clothes is a personal favourite of mine.

pine ginkgo
#

i do imagine

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chicoa having a stroke when she talks irl too

#

๐Ÿค”

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or doing some funny things while talking

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๐Ÿค”

fair iron
#

I've wondered the same.

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Swinging her arms wildly out of excitement?

pine ginkgo
#

"Hey, Casca, I just played with my bunnies and >ARfsetaew6atzqa36w34t, it was so great!"

timber glade
#

I do !!! flap my arms sometimes

fair iron
#

^^

timber glade
#

and I stutter a lot irl when I get too excited

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or wiggle weirdly ??? not sure

fair iron
#

That sounds cute.

timber glade
#

Nick said he finds it cute, too ahahadlksjfkf

pine ginkgo
#

can you ask nick to make a video of you adsgezwe4zqw3asetzing?

timber glade
#

I'm a LOT calmer irl than online though wwww

fair iron
#

That still doesn't sound that calm.

timber glade
#

Omg I'll try ??

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ahhhh I don't usually show my moods that much when I don't know people really well and I easily detach myself from conversation

#

it's such a problem honestly

#

but I'm still a pre uh

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not sure what teh word was

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cheerful !! person

fair iron
#

Peppy? Perky?

timber glade
#

sorta !!!!

#

I try really really hard to be likeable haha

#

I'm very scared of people disliking me or finding me rude

#

but it's gotten a lot better recently ๐Ÿ˜ฐ

fair iron
#

Who could find you rude? You're incredibly kind and likeable.

weary spoke
#

Is there a german word for wholesome?

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Because what you just said is super wholesome

timber glade
#

Ahh thank you TT I hope to keep your image of me up โค

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omg sjoti thank you sfdjslkdfmksdf

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Actually I'm curious too lemme google a bit

weary spoke
#

Translate doesn't give proper resultst

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google translate

timber glade
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yeah same ๐Ÿ˜‚

fair iron
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I'm sure you exceed the image I have of you.

weary spoke
#

erhebend?

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gemutlich?

timber glade
#

it keeps saying gesundheitsfรถrdernd

weary spoke
#

But it isn't about health though

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It's more about you guys just being super positive towards eachother

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๐Ÿ˜ƒ

timber glade
#

gemรผtlich sounds good, it has more of a "comfortable" meaning though

weary spoke
#

yeah

timber glade
#

Sjoti you're so sweet โค

fair iron
#

^

weary spoke
#

I'm just going with the flow ๐Ÿ˜›

fair iron
#

There's no greater gift than a smile.

timber glade
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"good for you, and likely to improve your life either physically, morally, or emotionally"

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sounds very much like gesundheitsfรถrdernd, but in a less health-related way? hahaah

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Fรถrdert das Wohlbefinden

#

gibt es dafรผr ein Wort?

#

Das allgemeine Wohlbefinden steigt

#

Another christmas song ๐ŸŽต

weary spoke
#

Manchmal denke ich was die worter auf Niederlandisch sein weil niederlandisch und duetsch wie einander sein

timber glade
#

Sie sind sich tatsรคchlich sehr รคhnlich!

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Aber ich habe trotzdem Probleme, Niederlรคnder korekt zu verstehen ww

weary spoke
#

Meinst du wen wir duetsch sprechen?

#

wann?

timber glade
#

wenn*

weary spoke
#

ah danke

timber glade
#

Nein, wenn Niederlรคnder Niederlรคndisch sprechen. Die Wรถrter sind sich รคhnlich, aber trotzdem ist es doch eine ganz andere Sprache ๐Ÿ˜„

fair iron
#

Wholesome is physically and emotionally healing, so perhaps heilend/heilsam would work in German.

timber glade
#

ohh!!

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heilsam!!!!

#

Probably that one !!

weary spoke
#

Wholesome can also be used to describe positivity

timber glade
#

A Japanese friend once described my personality as heilsam

fair iron
#

I agree with your friend, Thi.

weary spoke
#

That's a sweet thing!

timber glade
#

hahaha that was so cute of him I'm still happy about his compliment to this day

#

TT thank you

ocean robin
#

thi is kewt

timber glade
#

Floopsie!!! You, too โค

fair iron
#

Du bist Balsam fรผr die Seele. ^^

timber glade
#

Ahhhh du schmeichelst mir TT โค

weary spoke
#

@timber glade What you said about Dutch though, for me being Dutch is a big benefit when it comes to learning german

timber glade
#

Yes!!! I can imagine, since the pronunciation is also pretty close

weary spoke
#

But it doesn't mean that it's super easy

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Oh absolutely

timber glade
#

and I guess the grammar structures are very similar?

weary spoke
#

We don't have genetiv, dativ and all that stuff

timber glade
#

Ahhh yes

weary spoke
#

but sentence structure is very very similar

timber glade
#

Ouhhhh what an advantage~

ocean robin
#

mmlol it's kinda a pain for me since we only have a few similarities with French

weary spoke
#

Yeah, that's way harder

fair iron
#

You're a polyglot at 15, Flappy. You're doing great. ^^

weary spoke
#

Damn flappy

ocean robin
#

๐Ÿ˜ฎ

weary spoke
#

that's very impressive

ocean robin
#

Yeah, I can speak 4 languages more or less

weary spoke
#

Ich hab fast 10 jahre her duetsch in schule gehabt

ocean robin
#

:o

timber glade
#

Ohh~ Impressive !

#

@ both of you haha

ocean robin
#

My Spanish is shit though

timber glade
#

I used to learn English, French and Italian at school

ocean robin
#

And I began Japanese but took a break

timber glade
#

though I always sucked at Italian

ocean robin
#

I want to start it again thinking_cat

weary spoke
#

4 jahre habe ich ein bisschen duetsch gelernt, aber die latzte 5 jahre habe ich fast kein duetsch gesprochen, geredet etc.

ocean robin
#

I actually have troubles learning Spanish

#

mmlol i feel dumb

weary spoke
#

Und ich bin so so so viel vergessen

timber glade
#

Floopsie if you want to, we could study Japanese together โค

#

I'm thinking about picking it up again

ocean robin
#

๐Ÿ˜ฎ YES

weary spoke
#

I'm trying to pick it back up

timber glade
#

I do love the language and the people + the culture

weary spoke
#

What languages do you guys speak?

ocean robin
#

yeees

#

French native here

timber glade
#

Vietnamese heritage, but German native

#

and somewhat fluent in English

ocean robin
#
  • English (B2)/German (B1)/ Spanish(A1)
weary spoke
#

I had some french in school, I'm so shit at it

pine ginkgo
#

asian chica!!!

timber glade
#

Lunaaaaa !!!!!!! One and only Moon ๐ŸŒ

#

I liked French a lot when I had it !!

#

But I was very lazy www

ocean robin
#

French is horrible at verbs

#

I wonder how you find them, Casci thinking_cat

#

Because there's too much verbs endings, I remember it was a pain for me as well

timber glade
#

I do love the sound of French !!!!

ocean robin
#

:P

timber glade
#

Ahh that truly was very difficult TT

#

verb endings

ocean robin
#

I have a very very strong accent there

timber glade
#

๐Ÿ‘€ does not matter I like the sound of French as a language

weary spoke
#

Ich muss aufhoren die ganze zeit english zu reden

fair iron
#

Somewhat fluent? Don't sell yourself short, Thi.

timber glade
#

I'm not that fluent in speech !!

ocean robin
#

^ same

timber glade
#

And I forget a lot of words

#

www

fair iron
#

You're fluent to me.

ocean robin
#

I get stressed and forget words in spoken English

timber glade
#

Casca is always very positive and encouraging โค

#

Floopsie, me too ๐Ÿ˜‚

weary spoke
#

Practice makes perfect ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

ocean robin
#

And for German oof

timber glade
#

esp at work when we have international guests or coworkers over

ocean robin
#

You know the journey I have been doing mmlol except for the newcomers

timber glade
#

pets you

#

you can do it !!!!

#

Remember you're getting better with every day you're studying German !!

ocean robin
#

But dunno how I could improve that fast tbh

#

I came here in July as an A1

timber glade
#

Your progress is already impressive ๐Ÿ˜Š โœจ

ocean robin
#

โค love you, thi

weary spoke
#

@ocean robin What language are you talking about?

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oh wait

ocean robin
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German there. :P

fair iron
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Flappy, you're the fastest learner I've seen on this server.

ocean robin
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I came here as a little beginner.

pine ginkgo
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mh ๐Ÿค”

timber glade
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Lunyan

ocean robin
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"Hi, I don't know how to German even though I had 2 years in school, my vocab is shit"
mmlol

pine ginkgo
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chicynan

ocean robin
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aaaaa casci โค

weary spoke
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Last friday I was in amsterdam at this huge event where companies promoted all these technological systems

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Walking around and being able to casually talk in English with ease is such a valuable skill

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That's basically a huge motivation for me to pick german back up again

ocean robin
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When I talked in VC with Mika and Casci in English, it actually made me proud when they understood me

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;;

weary spoke
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Just being able to walk around and have a conversation without this big hurdle in the way

timber glade
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Ohhhhh I want to go to Amsterdam again, it was so beautiful

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Yes!! It feels so wonderful

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I agree haha

weary spoke
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I'm starting an internship in amsterdam tomorrow ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

pine ginkgo
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take me with you chicoa!

timber glade
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sure lunyan !!!

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Ohh awesome sjoti !!

weary spoke
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Just about everyone speaks english in amsterdam btw

fair iron
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Ooh, Amsterdam. Beautiful. ^^

weary spoke
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So I wouldn't recommend picking up Dutch

ocean robin
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I still want to go abroad ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

timber glade
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Floopsie do you live far away from the borders?

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omg "the borders" sounds so.. strange..

ocean robin
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Nooo, I don't live so far from Italy

pine ginkgo
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and switzerland!

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:o

ocean robin
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See the Mont Blanc? I live not so far from there.

timber glade
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Ohhhh !!! Floopsie next time im oing to france ill come over ๐Ÿ˜‚

ocean robin
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1 hour or so. thinking_cat

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๐Ÿ˜ฎ

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AYYYYYA THI

timber glade
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my family likes to go to italy for vacation a lot

fair iron
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You could act rebellious and take a picture of the Eiffel Tower at night. ^^

ocean robin
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I'm actually going to Paris next week

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so maybe mmlol

timber glade
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Ohhh !! ii ne

ocean robin
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I'm so happy I'm on holiday ;;

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I was so tired of school lately

timber glade
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Ahhh hope you get to rest lots ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

fair iron
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No breaking the law, Flappy. You have too bright a future.

ocean robin
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:( I know that, Casci

timber glade
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oh is it against the law to take a picture of the eiffel tower at night?????

ocean robin
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I'm still very worried about school, even on holiday

pine ginkgo
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flops has so many holidays lately :o

timber glade
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That sounds ridiculous

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pets you floopsie

fair iron
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It is, Thi.

ocean robin
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mmlol I had 6 weeks of school and then boom holidays

timber glade
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if you dont have assignments or exams, try to just chill ๐Ÿ˜„

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ohhh I didn't know!! oh my god I took pictures of the eiffel tower at night before ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

ocean robin
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๐Ÿ˜ฎ

timber glade
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Will I get arrested now

mellow mist
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Why is it against the law?

fair iron
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The lights still have copyright protection, so you cannot take/show a picture of them without permission.

mellow mist
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Wow

fair iron
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I'd gladly arrest you, Thi.

timber glade
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///q////

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Also wow !! I didn't know

fair iron
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Spotify kicked me out again. ๐Ÿค”

ocean robin
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๐Ÿค”

fair iron
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This time I realised, though. ^^

weary spoke
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Woa, never knew that @fair iron

timber glade
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Ohhh welcome back ๐Ÿ˜„

weary spoke
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About the eiffel tower

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Quickly googled it, it's "technically" illegal

fair iron
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Not technically, it's 100% illegal.

weary spoke
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But nobody has ever been in trouble over it

fair iron
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However, nobody would prosecute.

timber glade
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PHEW

fair iron
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^^

weary spoke
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technically illegal and 100% illegal are the same thing though ๐Ÿ˜›

fair iron
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ABBA! I love you, Thi. ^^

timber glade
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;^)

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I love you too

ocean robin
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Well Thi, tbh I am quite worried because I'm not super sure whether I can be in the class I want to next year or if teachers will be like "ok you go there".
sadlol

timber glade
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Ohhh :^(((( I see, I get how that would be worrying

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is there anything you can do?

ocean robin
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have good grades

fair iron
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The lights are considered an artistic work. This copyright will stay in place until 70 years after the artist's passing.

timber glade
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do you? ๐Ÿ‘€