#Made a new song, thoughts?

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molten thistle
shy iris
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nice work! i like it and i have a couple thoughts:

the piano(?) that comes in at 0:41 could be a little less bright, maybe lower the lowpass cutoffa bit if applicable? or just change it somehow so theres a little less high freq

IMO the saxophone solo that comes in at 1:08 could use some slurs between some of the (i assume) 16th notes. this may or may not be feasable depending on what the instrument actually is (whether it's a sample or a synth). if it's a synth you can probably make a second instrument with any transients removed, but if it's a sample you might be able to accomplish it with a pitch bending automation track. or you could just leave it alone if you think it sounds good as-is.

light spruce
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kinda sounds like something from deltarune ch 3

molten thistle
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TV WORLD was an inspiration

light spruce
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you have good taste then