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spice widget Jul 10, 2024, 4:42 PM

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I think it is good enough. but I'd like some feedback

hollow summit Jul 11, 2024, 5:27 AM

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i like it, but i think the lead piano might be out of key in some places idk

crimson frigate Jul 11, 2024, 1:43 PM

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tbh most of you're instruments are not in key with one a other. Example your 808 and piano or vocals all do not fit together. Only things that fits is your bass and the piano. Otherwise interesting arrangement, but there are improvements to be made

spice widget Jul 11, 2024, 5:28 PM

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Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to improve it

thorny mirage Jul 12, 2024, 3:23 AM

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i'd also add it sounds a bit awkward when the percussion pauses at :24 - i think having one more hit of percussion on the downbeat before it pauses completely might sound good

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i see the vision though 👍

spice widget Jul 12, 2024, 2:38 PM

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Thanks for the feedback, I think i fixed some of the mistakes, specially the vocals, they sounded awful cuz my dumb ass forgot to tune them, but it's fixed now. Let me know what you think

crimson frigate Jul 12, 2024, 3:20 PM

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Yep, it's way better than before.
With my headphones I can hear some cracking and clicking noise, you might wanna get rid of that.

spice widget Jul 14, 2024, 9:14 PM

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I think it should be fixed

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