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it feels kinda empty, at least for me, try adding some bass instruments to fill some space, also the instrumental sounds a bit repetitive

one tip, try changing something every 8 bars (4 bars, if you are in half time), it could be just adding or removing an instrument or some sounds

damn, didn't know i was a mentalist. I like that pad, a subtle compression would be good, and yeah, try adding some bass, so it feels fuller, also try to do some EQ, so the frequencies of the instruments don't clash with each other

pretty good stuff tho