This is my first composed Tack wich im really proud of it. https://soundcloud.com/theevolo/a-journey-of-something/s-VPvSwvUOLpU?si=2c2d2f038aa747cdb57525ee6234eec1&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
#I compared an orchestra and LMMS thats happend
blazing thistle
nice composition, i like it 👍
silver jetty
Thank you
formal vale
Nice track! It feels mysterious and dark. It also feels like a "journey" as the title says. I see that there is a story told by the music.
However, I feel like the "intensity" of some parts can be improved. A great example would be around 1:03 where the whole orchestra pauses. I think maybe the previous section needs to build up for that pause.
Basically what I'm trying to say is it needs clearer build-up and release parts. This can be done through the dynamics, or the amount of instruments, or the rhythm.