Feedback about video's retention

[sonic radish]

What: Shorts video created in Minecraft. In this video I explain psychological study in Minecraft.
Type of Feedback: I would like to hear a feedback about how viewer feels when watching and at what moment potentially audience can be "bored". My videos about Psychology doesn't get lots of views and it feels as my views are "limited" even though they are obviously not.
Specifics: Would like to hear what people think about video in general in terms of what exactly feels "wrong" about this video. Maybe narrative or language use is the thing that make people swipe my video.

https://youtube.com/shorts/CxiMNpR4iKQ?feature=share

[analog spire]

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[unborn plume]

Do you have video stats?

[sonic radish]

Of this exact video you mean?

[unborn plume]

Yes.

[sonic radish]

There are some

Let me know if you need something specific

[unborn plume]

Honestly, your retention is pretty good.

[sonic radish]

it is not bad, ik

but still not really high i guess

[unborn plume]

Beats the heck out of mine

[bronze pine]

Instead of starting off with the title of the video, maybe jump into it straight up, and if you want you could add the title back as like a segue. I think the premise of the experiment should be a good enough hook if you do it properly.
Looked up this experiment and turns out this video is misleading. You didn't explain that you couldve also been a guard if you signed up for the experiment. Saying this because the bit towards the end kinda seems like it comes out of nowhere without the proper context. Plus, found out that the guards were told to act that way from the organizers of the experiment.
Well made short overall though, i liked the presentation. It's just the information itself and how you explain it that I think has a problem

[sonic radish]

Well, I deliberately didn't mention many other things because otherwise it would be a long form video and not a short