Hello! I hope you are doing well! Anyway, I am working on a video titled "Marvelous Mammal You Didn’t Know About," and I would appreciate some feedback on this thumbnail and script! This is an old script I abandoned but haven't altered much, so I'm more than willing to fix a few things if need be. I have no specific feedback requests in mind, but I would like to know if you feel there's parts I should clarify or omit in the script, or if the humor is "too much" and overpowers the information (I want it to make the video enjoyable but not take control), or if you like the layout of the thumbnail? Anything else would be helpful as well! Thanks, and have a great rest of your day!
#What do you think of this script and thumbnail, which are for a video about strange mammal species?
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I didnt bother with the script.
The title is pretty cool tho.
The Thumb is also good, but could be improved.
- and most important…. Try to find a pic of the animal while its doing something…. Unexpected. Like actually something i didnt know about instead of just a picture of the animal.
I know thats hard for such a small frame but i think that would elevate your thumb from good to must-click.
Also (not so important) the text would probably look better if you give it a little gradient and make the stroke like 1-2px thicker