#I want to get better with my shorts. any and all feedback is welcome!

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indigo veldt
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This is a short about a funny moment I had while playing overwatch. ( I know it's not the best topic)
I'm trying to experiment with looped videos but I don't know too much about what I'm doing.

Here's the video
https://youtube.com/shorts/_ZVOpCWADbA?si=7_bCIeGMFxUs_tqd

I want to get as much feedback as possible! Thank you for your time.

In this Overwatch funny moment video. I talk about my funniest and craziest Overwatch 2 Competitive moment! which was awarded at the 2016 Game Awards and was nominated for Game of the Year!
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visual hatch
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I think for this style of video, for sure, having it in 9:16 is the right way to go. There’s already so much going on the screen that it’s hard to make out what you’re looking at and it can visually overwhelm you and swipe away. Also if you want to hook people more you could start by showing off the character model of the character introduce her in a close up filling out the screen maybe add some trivia about her. You did a good job on the on screen text although it could be just a bit smaller because sometimes it goes over the edges. Then I also had to rewatch it a few times to get what it’s about and that’s not good because the general audience is very impatient. Also the punchline that you want to play a certain character and others are playing them doesn’t really land that strong. You could make this more interesting by having gameplay of others playing as her and messing up or pointing out their mistakes etc. then you could end by a question like should over watch limit how many people can play as one character? Let me know in the comments etc.