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ruby nexus
First of all, the thumbnail needs some work, add some text sating something like "too many", or smth like that, this thumbnail isnt showing anything much about the video. Also shorten up your footage around like an idea, base your vids around some sort of challenge or smth similar, playthroughs are no longer the thing in this modern economy