Editing + Sound Feedback Submission

[bold comet]

Hey Top,

I think the video lacks energy. Those type of videos relies a lot on edits and personalities. Both need to be strong in my view (maybe I'm not your audience haha).

You need to edit more, go crazy even if it doesn't work, go nuts and see how you feel with different edits. Exaggerate the events, sublime moments, make them more intense, scarier etc.

Once you'll go over the top, you'll be able to tune down everything and fine a better balance. Allow yourself to throw some experimental videos with no view expectations, just to push you to edit more and something will click.

I think you know how to edit simple video, now go nuts, fail, learn, repeat and drop a banger

[civic lodge]

Yeah, for me I honestly felt like I was listening to a funny podcast (maybe a clip or highlight from a podcast) with good edits, but it was a bit more laid back. Pacing was slower and that's up to you how fast you want the video to be. Also the first thing i noticed was a lack of music which for me really sets the mood, and the lack of music kind of gave the video a "lack of a mood" if you know what I mean. Again, your choice if you want music and which type of music you want to use, but music is what immediately makes something go from raw footage to at least a somewhat edited video in my opinion, at least its the first thing i notice. Just something to experiment with, play the video back and play a song at the same time and notice how it changes the tone of the video. I would probably use something from my "Stupid silly" music for a stupid silly funny moments compilation like this, with maybe some "REALLY stupid" music for the accentuated dumb moments. Great edits tho, especially for what seems to be one of your first videos.

[gritty wagon]

Editing + Sound Feedback Submission