took a glance at the recent video. starting hook was disorientating, low energy and without context. had no clue what it was that i was watching, so the intital pacing is too slow with no actual hook to engage the viewer. your accent is quite heavy, so i had to really focus on what was being said. i suggest using captions to overlay. low energy, reading off screen a script, feels very disingenuine to the words you are speaking. body language is stiff and your expressions are nonexistent. staging is uninspiring and feels like you are reading a homework essay to your parents at the kitchen table. this is not to discourage you or offend you, but to give you a realistic take on areas you can improve.
#What I'm doing wrong as a Commentary Channel ?
wooden sparrow
please consider speaking a little slower and articulate your words with more enunciation and projection. the topics are okay, but the titles and thumbnails are dismissive and easily uninspiring.
forest moss
I agree with what he said ⬆️
wooden sparrow
maybe you can try doing voiceover narration instead. it may carry your voice better
only challenge is that you will need to find clips throughout the entire video
run your audio through adobe podcast online as well. its free, and enhances your audio to an almost podcast level.
forest moss
I can feel you're passionate and whiling to change and learn, it's going to help you get better for sure having this mentality. 💪
The biggest problem I have is to understand you, i can understand some words but the rest of the time it's almost like you're switching to another language.
If you want to keep making content in english this would be the first thing I would work on if you want to keep using your voice. You written english is excellent, so it's a matter of pronunciation which can be worked on.