#Need Feedback On My Game Development Roblox Channel

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ruby estuary
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I was wondering if people could check out some of my content and see where i'm going wrong, i put hours into these videos and would like to gain quite a few viewers but i feel like i'm not getting enough attention seeing as how making one video can take me almost a month, please point out what i'm doing right and what i'm doing wrong, thank you!!!
https://www.youtube.com/@StoobStudios

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keypoints i would like is the if the thumbnails and titles are intriguing, and i would also like some feedback on the overall editing quality

harsh aspen
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I don't think you're necessarily doing anything wrong, your view counts are all above your subscriber count, and that's a W in my book.

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I'd say though you need to make the thumbnails more related to the title

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For example:

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Rather than using a random screenshot of u with a weapon, you could do something like a before after comparison

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And for here, why is the spider a mistake? Think of something more eye catching and make viewers ask "whoa what mistake did he make? lemme watch"

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Just stuff like that

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Videos themselves are fine

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Great job on completing the games, must've taken a lot of work

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one thing I'd say thoughthe ui for the shop here is a bit hard to see I think if u make the big background just plain color itd be easier to read, bcs rn it's a bit clashing with the text and stuff imo, hard to read at a glance

ruby estuary
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Yeah I got you about the UI, I'll work on that, also thank you for the feedback on the thumbnails, I'll work on making them more eye catching and give the viewers a reason to click on the video, but seriously thank you so much!!!