I just posted this on my channel today. I was using this video as a way to practice a new subtitle fade in that I had just learned. I think the video could’ve had something else added to make it more interesting though, I just don’t know what.
#Short form content review
willow void
lost siren
You may want your text to linger a little longer and also increase readability a little. Right now it might be a little small for this content and could do with a bigger stroke. Maybe a little more spread out of a glow as well. Also can you change how the text does its fade in? I like it. I feel like if he can make it a little more smooth or like have a little more snap back that might work better. Any extra effects I'd say just a little bit of some zooms, some slow zoom and then you know when he says what's a father like cut out and then the little laugh he does cut out even more to show black.