New style

[near cosmos]

I've tried something different with this video, I usually make gaming/gaming-related videos but for the sake of my sanity I decided to try something different, I'm very biased with this video so I can't see my flaws.. so any feedback about the video would help a lot, is there something that puts you off? Is it understandable? Would you watch till the end?

Video:
https://youtu.be/Y7dqNFIPSRk

[shy jetty]

I think your intro/hook needs a lot of work. This is the general structure I, and a lot of creators use.

Context Lean (super clear what the video is about, topic clarity)

• Establish Common Ground, or
• Reference a benefit or pain point, or
• Use a metaphor to simplify a complex idea, or
• Share Something mind-blowingly interesting
  **Scroll Step Interjection **
• Contrasting Word (but, however, yet, therefore, on the other hand, although)
  Contrarian Snapback (Uno Reverse Card)
• Sentence that goes in the opposite direction of the initial context lean.
• Bigger the shock/snap the better.

"Everyone dreams of being perfectly fluent in a second language - sounding just like a native speaker... But true native-level fluency is a myth - even after 20 years abroad, you'll still have an accent or a word you wont know."

something like that might help you out

[near cosmos]

Ohhh that does make a lot of sense, it brings people in

I'll save this!!

[cosmic flint]

Also I'd say um, that blue in the background hurts my eyes