@neat seal I’d only suggest maybe, differentiating the text between the two text segments in some fashion, like slightly different coloring or something. The first part is the GAME LOGO/title…it might be helpful to differentiate TRULY DEFINITIVE, your supposition
#Thumbnail feedback
empty pumice
knotty dock
it's ok, but not great
it doesn't really draw in viewers with anything, just a pretty standard matter-of-fact thumbnail
empty pumice
@neat seal the content on your geocities seems really interesting. Are you developing any of that?
knotty dock
well first, what's the video about and what's the title for the video