#Hey was just wondering what people thought of the first 15 seconds of my next Video?

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onyx cloak
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I did have a lot of advice from people to try and make the video more engaging and try to improve my mic too. I did this in like an hour, and was just wondering what everyone honestly thought and what they would change?

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shrewd solar
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sorry for the self-promoing guy above, tried to report them but I don't remember the command (lol) and I think they were already banned.

The mic quality is great imo, I think I got confused when the whole video was blurred though. I get you're trying to hide the gameplay footage but it took me a second to mentally figure out why this is happening and whether it's necessary. Maybe an alternate edit there would be better.

also didnt get the meme edit at the end, maybe its because I havent played mgs and am an uncultured swine?