#Newest Oblivion video, looking for feedback please!

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dry pelican
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Hello all, my name is SkyToilet, Im a fresh Youtuber looking for growth, and advice on my videos.

My content revolves around playing game, and doing commentary. Specifically funny moments and making jokes along the gameplay.

In this case, I'm looking to see if this video is... Funny? Is it entertaining to watch? Is my audio too soft, too loud, too overwhelming?

https://youtu.be/un1EE0sfv_U?si=71JNiTP4MmteoB9A

Thank you, and I hope you all have a good day~

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SkyToilet
Oblivion! But my computer catches fire (Emotionally)

Oblivion Remastered plays exactly like the original, except the warranty has expired...
(Crashes, Bugs, and Fire are included)

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zealous skiff
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hey, the vid is indeed funny and ur audio sounds good to me

i think all u gotta worry about is working on thumbnails and some more small editing touches (im not saying to go all mr breast editing style lol) but maybe some subtitles for maybe a really good joke, maybe a zoom in on something you make a joke on. overall keep it up