I think when it comes to script-writing its best to keep it brief so you don't feel pressured to regurgitate each line bar for bar - It's probably best to keep things memory-based like for example just writing down your main argument in a bullet point form, and then just discussing your stance on said topics. It can probably help you to come across less robotic and may lead to some funny and human moments! Love your video topic x
#Is This A Better Format for Script Writing?
steel spruce
steel spruce
ofcc im a rambler too i understand the struggle x
woeful cape
in that case its probably better to try and keep the text line for line, and just do multiple takes for different enunciations/pacing of the lines
im not a youtube person but ive had to give a few speeches in high school and i found going off of small pointers to be horrible, but having a full script beautiful
frigid apex
Which video are we focusing on first? Have you split the video up into shorter ones? I noticed you said you were aiming for an hour long video in chat
Im going to continue here based on what I see:
- The first section has the strongest attempts at relatablity, which is great! but the whit dies over time (fades more or less in intensity) which will give the viewer a sense of disappointment or a loss of connectin.
like this, ignoring that its literally a random ramble, ntice how HIGH the personality expression is compared to the second section (which I just ripped from google):
Heya guys! Tell me you havent all been waiting for me? Lol omg, sorry I cant help it. Anuyways, rocks am i right? Omg I loved those little fricken piles of crunchy sand since I was a little boi! AH!
In geology, a rock is a naturally occurring solid mass or aggregate of minerals or mineraloid matter. They form the Earth's outer solid layer, the crust, and are broadly classified into three types: igneous, sedimentary, and metamorphic.
Your starter voice is strong (can be improved, most likely will be when actually vocally said outloud) keep that vibe carrying.
Overall I think this is a MASSIVE imrpovement in tone and connection! Your hook might get weak if youre trying to use this as a running joke, but in THIS video i think its fine! Good job!