#Would appreciate some feedback :)

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tall crystal
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Hi there! I'd like to ask for some feedback in my newest video, could really appreciate anything that could help with improvement, thanks! As a sidenote, it hasn't been getting that many impressions, so I'd appreciate some tips on that. Thanks!

https://youtu.be/3Wn0i_wf89s?si=eqwHcShhcdHCFFj-

Hi there :D

this is the first (actual) video for Terracore! our multiplayer terraria playthrough! sorry this video took so long, but some scenes took a lot of time to make and edit. I hope y'all enjoy it :)

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verbal flare
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having to stop the video so i can read the text at the start is not good , and from the titel andthumbnail i have zero clue what this is about is this a lets play if so , in my opinions lets plays are dead even if you are editing them like you are, introducing i asume you and your friend is something tha should not happen right at the start this can be way later you need to get into the video as fast as possible (this is something i strugle as well ) if you are telling a story there needs to be waaay more info at the start , to be honest i dont get it is this a story you are telling or a lets play ?