Are there any other way I can improve this short I uploaded?
I feel like there's something wrong but I just don't know what.
#what to improve?
daring escarp
weary moon
Nice video! A few things that you might try are transition effects and zoom effects. Also, I was a little confused about the "combat system" until I realized that you were making a mod (I think this was what you were doing). Maybe try to make the idea a little clearer. Also, I personally liked the background of how the mod was created, but I think other people would get bored of it quickly. Maybe go straight from the intro to what the different items do so far. That way your completed short will also be shorter. Overall, great video and I hope the mod goes well :)