#Let me know what you thought of my video

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Just whatever you liked, hated, or enjoyed and a quick why or why not. Notes on what could've been done better and notes on what was great.

https://youtu.be/PkbzWCrvtXs

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Hey guys, Jags, Geo, Burrito, and I decided to play the worlds worst hunting game. It was loads of fun but this will be our only video on it because none of us want to download it again. I hope you guys enjoy the video, make sure to like and subscribe and I'll see you next time for another great video.

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frosty hawk
# golden heart Just whatever you liked, hated, or enjoyed and a quick why or why not. Notes on ...

The title and thumbnail are both decently solid. My one piece of advice is your hook. Right when I click on the video I have no context of what this game is about, who you are, or anything. You just start quiet and snipe. Have energy and a great attitude and hook the viewer within your intro.

Furthermore, I feel like the video itself could use some more editing. Whether that is adding bg music (at the right volume + fitting the scene), cutting out silence, or anything else.

If you have further questions or want advice on a specific part of your video, let me know. I would be more than happy to critique farther for more feedback if needed. Happy YouTubing!

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Thank you I appreciate it !! I would definitely love more feedback, I definitely agree with the edits, and the way I used to use music was very barren, however I've gotten the idk who you are comment several times and i was wondering if you could explain that to me a bit more, like what is it you mean with that

frosty hawk
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OOOOH okay that makes sense, I appreciate you man, thank you

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