acoustic gyro
Hi,
This is the draft intro for my 4th episode on a game called Ultrakill. What can I improve about the intro?
Any feedback is appreciated thank you ❤️
(this is a rough draft so there may be editing mistakes etc. feel free to point them out to me thank you!)
acoustic gyro
Ive shortened the tv static transition a little bit now. It flows a little better without the expectation of a chaotic montage now
acoustic gyro
Pop up of previous comments and the videos are also there now when i say “thank you for the support” just to make it feel more engaging
tranquil iris
I wonder if you need the part thanking people for the support - i can imagine for a new viewer seeing you for the first time, they don't really care about you thanking people for keeping the comments spoiler free and supporting you on previous videos. Maybe you can move that sentiment to a pinned comment?
acoustic gyro
Yeah very true! I’ll make some adjustments
acoustic gyro
Hi,
This is the draft intro for my 4th episode on a game called Ultrakill. Wha...
I made some changes! Please can you give me some feedback on what feels off / weird about the first minute of my video. Thanks so much! ❤️
https://youtu.be/M5l1ohoW5ig
mental plaza
Damn great editing, great use of sound effects too. The only thing I missed is - why should I keep watching? I think you mentioned it briefly, but a good hook will get people going - ok I clicked, but what value will I be getting in this video. Rehooks in the middle also keep the engagement up (why should I stick to the end).
For example, maybe show a clip of something exciting happening at the end, and then include something like "In this episode, I'm attempting to xyz, so today you'll see abc, and hopefully, I'll be able to xyz.
Unless that's the wrath part, I don't really get the game. But yeah everything else is on point