#Does anyone have time to critique my video please 🙏🏼

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gloomy crescent Feb 16, 2025, 10:22 AM

https://youtu.be/x9sz03dGBvQ?si=vl52Zyu54hmmqW_u

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School Animated Story : WWE Trials

Hope you enjoyed the video
Feel free to comment your favourite WWE superstar down below

And don't be dumb like us and try this at home, lots of things could go wrong

Thanks for watching

#animation #comedy #wwe #storytime

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silk scaffold Feb 16, 2025, 1:10 PM

I think the editing is really good and the story telling seems enticing. I only have a problem really with the start. I feel the hook is a little lack luster and lacks energy. If I wasnt watching to help you out then i probably would have clicked off given the first like 12 ish seconds. From there tho the editing and story telling gets better. Good job!